SWASAN SS- From AGONY to ECSTACY!! CH, 5 pg 35 - Page 26

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveSriNal

niyu loved it darling.. I don't think they will fall in love so soon. . lakshji ka kya haal hoga? did he love ragini? continue soon dear.. love you ragu

Tu kidar h re.. Missing u..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Esha012

amazing update plzz update next part soon

I'll update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: abi03

pls pls update d next part soon pls...its been days u hav updated...i m waiting desperately pls...

m sorry I was really busy but finally I'll update it
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Posted: 9 years ago
I m really sorry guyss for making it soo late. I hope u all still remember this fiction. I was really busy with the finals so I couldn't update. Finally an update for you.

Chapter 5

CREDITS: PUBALI

Next day, college

Finally u became the reason for my smile, finally u brightened my dark world with your pearl presence. I m not able to believe my fate that it gifted me a charming creature like you. His life was finally completed.

She was the happiest person alive on this planet today, she was all the way busy recollecting her last night memories.
"swara, u r blushing! " asked an amused Shipra approaching swaragini who had just made their ways to college campus. Ragini smiled to her sister. " nothing like that, she is happy coz last day she won na " she changed the topic, she knew from now on it would be her responsibility to look that swara don't create any situation that can lead to exposing her commitment status with the professor.
Four of them made their ways to class.

Teacher was explaining about general adaptative syndrome. She started with how it works N how it is related to weight gain.
"oh God ragini, then I m going to turn fatty soon" swara distracted ragini Shipra N Yuvika who were busy noting down important points. "what, what on earth made you ask this silly question in between lecture" ragini gave weird look to her.
"you know..." just then swara realised what she was about to say N then smiled inwards N just winked to ragini, enough for her sister to get her emotions. And ragini slammed her head for mentioning stress related to marriage, swara was from last night so much into this topic.

Rest next hour was peaceful in class, they managed to take almost every important point.
Class rested.
"This was an interesting lecture right" Yuvika said packing her books in bag. "ya exactly" [B] ragini added. [B] "guys, I have important work I'll catch u in 10 minutes," swara said. "what so important swara, u know na laksh had called us now, he want to discuss something about a Shima's bday" ragini completed and saw her as what is so important that just emerged in her life. "just 10 mins guys, N I m sure it's not a big deal I'll join u soon" swara completed and ran leftward in the corridor. All were stunned at her action specially ragini this important work swara never mentioned in front of her.
Ragini, Yuvika and Shinra went to their hang out spot to meet laksh N gang.
"come guys, we were waiting hurry up" said laksh with a smile but his smile faded as he saw swara nowhere. "ragini, where is swara" he asked in frustration, yes this meeting was quite important as he has already msged them all n such irresponsibility wasn't expected from one of the most devoted friend swara. "she said she has some important stuff to do, she ll join u after 10 mins" Shipra replied, ragini was confused and was debating in her mind "are sir and swara together right now, is swara doing right, is her stand justified in supporting swara"
"what the... Wait guys I'll get her here" laksh completed and left in search of swara. Ragini blankly sat on ground still confused.

Swara on the other hand was standing near that old rusted bench waiting for sanskar.
"he is soo mean, he is late" she saw her watch and leaned her head on bench to look up just to see sanskar's smiling face. She charged and got up and hugged him tight.
"u said ull be here on time" swara said still hugging him. "sorry jaan" sanskar broked the hug and wrapped his arm around her waist, she looked down blushing hard. "oh man, wat I m witnessing the lady bheem is blushing, m I dreaming or what" sanskar teased her and she smiled more bright. His heart skipped a beat.

M over my agonies today, you brightened my world with this sparking shadow of yours. Your cute large orbs are enough to make me weak on my limbs. sanskar's thoughts just juggled, she has more beautiful eyes or lips, was her smile more prettier than her charming eyes, one think he concluded no matter what she was his life.

Tears took his eyes. His orbs filled with fluid of love, satisfaction. His tears breaks me, they are inviting me to taste his agonies. My smile can't compliment his tears I felt like someone is taking my heart off my body and in no second I found myself dug in his chest
"sanskar sir no...," swara wiped his tears "nothing can scare swara bose.. But these tears shatters my world " sanskar could on manage to smile at her innocence. He took her hands in his and kissed them. " you know wat swara, after Kavita died I never had imagined of of happy life but u changed my world" swara jumped and kissed his cheeks at his sweet statement.

"you kissed me without my permission" sanskar joined his brows. Swara saw him strangely. "now it's my turn" sanskar completed and leaned to kiss her lips. Just then sanskar felt someone dragging him back. Sanskar managed to stand on his feet after such forceful act. And he saw right in eyes of that man, he was laksh. "sanskar bhaiya..," laksh said shockingly. Yes he was not expecting him here, he just saw someone kissing swara and just came for her rescue.
But laksh was taken aback, no he can't believe wat he just saw, swara also kissed this man few minutes back, was something cooking Btwn them, but how this man right in front of him, used to love his sister beyond imagination. N now how could he do this.
Sanskar saw laksh in disbelief. But was not at all shocked at his act. He knew no matter how naughty laksh is he is God at heart. ,"what happened laksh " sanskar said holding his shoulder. Laksh was furious, his eyes turned red N had tears of frustration, he clenched his jaws and Jerked sanskar away. " stay away sanskar bhaiyaa" laksh shouted his throat out. "laksh wat r u doing here" said swara softly. Laksh saw her innocence and embraced her. "swara, wat u were doing" laksh asked her softly cupping her face. Sanskar stood at a distance and decided to just observe silently. "laksh. Ac... Actually, we.. I.. I mea.. Mean.." swara was finding it hard to connect the events coherently and explain them to laksh.
" laksh listen to me.. " sanskar said and laksh left swara and turned to him. " I m not interested in talking to a shameless man, who is using innocence of a teenage girl" sanskar widened his eyes, no this reply wasn't expected at all, sanskar was not using her. He loves her, he debated in his mind.
"swara..." ragini shouted from some distance enough to distract laksh and sanskar. Swara saw in his sister's direction, yes she was looking angry at the same time hurt. "ragini, actually.. I was about to inform u.." swara tried to clarify the 10 minute theory. "enough swara, this immaturity I dint expected from you, you know who is your dad, you dint even thought once before doing this in college." ragini said with anger. Yes she was angry, swara was just 19 N doing such stuffs in college with professor was not so swara type and ragini could definitely not take that. Swara held her head low. "ragini.. Swara is innocent, I was the one to call her here," sanskar came for Swara's rescue. "wow.. Bhaiya u even know your age, she is kid in front u, how could u even think that, ohhh God I can believe this sh*t is happening around me"
Laksh said feeling disgusted. "stop laksh, don't abuse my love" sanskar backfired in double anger, he can't hear a word against his feelings. "swara I don't expect anything from him now, the man who can betray my sister's soul can do anything.. But you" laksh almost killed sanskar with his words, he stood shock in tears. "stop it laksh, stop, how dare you talk to him like this, just coz he started smiling and living doesn't mean he betrayed your sister's soul. Being happy and smiling or loving someone doesn't make him a criminal" swara shouted on laksh holding sanskar's hands. Sanskar's lips took a smile yes Kavita would have also done this, this girl is so perfect.
"swara leave all these, laksh please calm down, let it be, we will see u later we have a Clas now." said ragini and took swara with her.

Laksh turned again to sanskar "stay away from her sanskar.. She is not meant for u" the word bhaiya was no longer in his speech.
Sanskar turned blank. He moved towards management building. Thoughts of ditching Kavita N harsh words of laksh was hard to accept. He turned to stairs N blankly climbed.
His debates with mind were on. He lost his balance and fall off stairs. In no time his head of red. His head was bleeding profusely on he laid unconsciously on floor.. Students crowded the building.

Swara was in her class but not in class her mind was on sanskar. Suddenly a student hurried in. "mam principal has ordered to dismiss the college right here" said the student. "why" asked the professor. "a professor in management building has fallen off stairs and is critical that's y" student completed. Ragini's eyes turned wide first thought took her mind, was he sanskar, no no he was alright few hours back. Swara missed every sentence of that student. Ragini turned to swara "swara u heard wat he said" swara turned to her N raised her brows indicating no. "swara come let's go.." ragini swara Shipra and yuvika went from there. "but wat happened" swara said. "where u were lost when the guy said" Yuvika said. "leave that guys, swara a management professor is critical that all we managed to hear" ragini completed and swara was taken back,. Almost all the students ran to building. It was crowded but sigh the person was not there, he was already taken to hospital. Ragini saw laksh there and went to him. He was standing with his back facing them. "laksh who is that professor" ragini said touching his shoulder making laksh to face her. His eyes were red. "laksh wat happened... Is.. That sanskar sir.." laksh hugged ragini N broke in tears. No matter how much bad he said about him but ya he loved him and respected a lot therefore probably he don't liked he immature act and he reacted.
Swara saw all this. She walked backwards.
"She felt her world crashing in seconds, she was not ready to take this truth, how important his presence was only known to her, his touch, his smile his every single tactic was soo close to her. She feebly crashed and sat on floor, ragini rushed to her, and so laksh N others. "swara we will go hospital, he will be absolutely okk" laksh said, yes he was guilty for his act he committed hours back. Ragini nodded to this, and they all left for hospital swara was quiet on the way. She saw out from window.

[I] She felt her soul being snatched from her, a catastrophe had occurred for her and she was left alone, but no he was her, embeded in her heart, locked in her emotions

Main hoon aadha mujh mein
Baaki aadha hai tu
Dil mein kam hai dhadkan
Yaara zyaada hai tu

Swara remembered their first meeting those orbs and their intensity. Tears rolled down her cheeks her lips shivered.

Bin sune sun lunga main
Bin kahe tu kehna
Tu.. mere mere paas toh hai na..
Tu.. mere mere paas toh hai na..

The day she collided with him, his strong arms supporting him. Ragini holded her shoulder, swara leaned on her shoulder.

Pyaar hai aisa khel yaara
Tanha koi bhi jeeta nahi
Tu jahaan thak ke beth jaaye
Adh jaaunga main bhi wahin

She remembered the day they first hugged. She hugged ragini and was crying. They reached hospital. Yuvika Shipra omg ashima were perplexed at Swara's condition. But they decided to avoid ask. Swara ran to search for sanskar. Laksh and ragini ran after her. Laksh got hold of her and made her calm. "wait, swara we will go first stay calm" laksh said and ragini hugged swara. Laksh went to see sanskar. He came back, "let's go swara" [B] he said and in no time swara ragini and laksh were in room.

Sanskar was alright just his head bandaged, hand fractured, his eyes filled with tears seeing swara.

[B] Bin sune sun lunga main
Bin kahe tu kehna
Tu.. mere mere paas toh hai na..
Tu.. mere mere paas toh hai na..

Swara ran and dug her head in his legs and cupped his tighs and started crying. Sanskar's tears fell on her head. She saw to him, "you are okk na???" she said still shivering. Sanskar cupped her face with his right hand and they saw in each others eyes.

Baarishein kitni dil se guzri
Meri aankhein na bheegi kabhi
Tu agar pal bhar door jaaye
Baadlon saa main ro doon abhi

"if are fine, wat will happen to me swara" sanskar said and swara smiled and slowly kept her head on his shoulder.

Bin sune sun lunga main
Bin kahe tu kehna
Tu.. mere mere paas toh hai na.. haan..
Tu.. mere mere paas toh hai na.. haan..

Sanskar and Swara's world was finally one. Ragini and laksh side hugged each other. Laksh apologized to sanskar. Sanskar hugged him.

My agonies finally rested, you became my guardian angel, my life turned to ecstasy, all coz you are present In my soul

Guyss finally this ss is almost over, next would be epilog N I'll update it by Monday.

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Niyati
Edited by Niyatiswaragini - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Niyati dear...
Why ending SS so soon???was enjoying it alot...chapter 5 was fantastic..i was thinking of lakshya lovingg swara n will be heart broken to see swasan...but u are ending it..it oky...overall it was fab..will wait for epilogue..

Talia
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Due to this much of gap In the story I was unable give the story a proper shape.. N I was forced to end it.. I m totally free for months now.. I'll soon be back with some new concept as I'll be up with it..


As of now.. Due to lack of comments N likes i have decided to end it right here.. Hopefully u hv enjoyed the journey of agonist N ecstatic worlds. As I can't wait more fr response.. I m ending it it was so nice getting all ur response..


Love
Niyati
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Posted: 9 years ago
What???😲 You know what..was waiting for this story since long..and u r ending it without even an epilogue...!!! OK..my badluck. 😭 but do come soon with an awesome story and new concept... Please 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tithi1812

What???😲 You know what..was waiting for this story since long..and u r ending it without even an epilogue...!!! OK..my badluck. 😭 but do come soon with an awesome story and new concept... Please 😳


M sorry coz I m short of idea for this I wouldd have framed it well but then I was busy..
Ill soon write something fresh
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Posted: 9 years ago
Laksh should not have shouted on sanskar..
But he was feeling cheated..
Poor sanskar.
Swasan are together..happy
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Posted: 9 years ago
bt precap to kuch aur tha na...why making it shut so early cntinue na please pls pls

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