SWASAN SS- From AGONY to ECSTACY!! CH, 5 pg 35

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Hii guys!! I m NIYATI back gain with a new concept and story hope u all will enjoy ..
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INDEX

PROLOUGE

CHAPTER 1

CHAPTER 2

CHAPTER 3

CHAPTER 4

CHAPTER 5
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Prolouge

In his already dark world night penetrated more darkness but the irony it was the only thing won by him in his battle with life, but sigh moonlight came crushing the darkness of night. He never liked this, but he has to accept it, if has been victorious and this dark night was his reward he was supposed to accept this moonlight too. life always played smart with him in day light so he made this darkness his life.

Her world was always lighted n moonlight was the only thing she had liked in the darkness of night. She loved the fact that such darkness that shades all the beautiful things around could only be wiped away by moonlight. Light, shine or a ray of hope that can make someone feel that there is still something good in the dark that is increasing as hours of night proceed. But ultimately there will be a last hour of this darkness n from next hour will mark the beginning of the morning yes, the bright morning.

JAIPUR, RAJASTHAN, INDIA
A SHABY FLAT

A moan figure emerged from the darkness in the hall,
he sat on the couch near to dinning area and parted his legs resting down his head on the couch head. "You left me alone , all alone" the words hit his lips, making him realise his identity the alone , lonely fellow. He raised his head , tears were visible that never reached his beard that shades all his features. Tears were his only family n they lived in his eyes, they never left him. A buzz got him back to his senses. His eyes followed the buzz, much to his believe his mobile on the table near. He stood up and took the call.
"Yes Mr. Mitra, I know my job" he said in a bit rude manner and then hanging up the call, went again to the dark shabby room.

KOLKATA, WEST BENGAL
BOSE MANSION

Shekhar Bose excitedly got up from the dinning table "Wow , its really nice Mr. Mitra, thankss alot" n he hunged up the call with a wide smile on his face. "Mishti, shona" he shouted. Sharmishta Bose(formally Sharmishta Gadodia, a Marwari who eloped with his Bengali lover shekhar, after this her faced a lot of humiliation from society , and her younger sister janki faced problems in her marriage. Today her family hates her but her sister janki loves her like anything in this world so ragini loves swara. Both cousins shares a sisterly bond) appeared from the drappers of the big hall, "what shekhar what on earth had gulped your silencer, why u shouting" she came in front him, he smiled sweetly to her. "Your love darling" he wrapped his arms around her neck, making sharmishta conscious. She managed to make herself free. "Shekhar grow up, you are not that young shekhar okk, u have a daughter" she teased him. Both smiled and shared laughter. Shekhar wrapped his arms around her, n started walking, "so mrs. Bose where is my girl" asked shekhar. "Shekhar you only have spoiled her your princess is still sleeping" she said taunting shekhar. "Mishti you don't be jealous of our love, and by the way she is our only daughter she needs to be pampered to all in this world." He completed. "Ya why not, OK u wait for her, I m going to kitchen hv to prepare saundesh for ragini, she is about to reach" sharmishta shared smile with shekhar and made her way to kitchen calling some of the servents .
Ragini, as above mentioned is sharmishta's niece and swara's cousin was supposed to come to take swara with her to Jaipur, her place as swara's intermediate is completed She was too in Kolkata for her intermediate studies and lives with them.
Sharmishta came back to shekhar "by the way shekhar , u dint tell me for what you called me and shona" she smiled. "Ohooo , shomi these days I m turning lunatic, actually I got the call from the university just now, shona and ragu got the admission" he completed. "So wats so surprising in that, u also know they had a strong jeck Mr. Bose" and she smiled. "U said jeck?? But who??" Shekhar saw sharmishta in fake shock. "Enough of your fakeness Mr. Trustee" and both burst in laughter. "But our shona has also scored 80% in intermediate" he proudly completed. "Shekhar u know ragini scored 95% and in front of that" sharmishta's face fell down. "Shomi I m proud of both of them, both are my stars" shekar hugged her. "Shekar I was wandering can ever swara be responsible like ragini" sharmishta went deep in her thoughts.
"Massi she is very responsible" came a charming figure in, that lighted shekhar and sharmishta's face.
"U reached , but u were Supposed to late na" sharmishta kissed her forehead n she ran n hugged shekhar "bde papa , how are you?" Shekhar lovingly kised her hairs. "I m fine beta , hope u had safe journey" ragini nodded.
"Ragu beta swara is still sleeping please wake her up" sharmishta said and ragini retired to swara's room.
Swara was already sitting on her bed eyes still closed when ragini entered.
"Swara u were sleeping till 9" ragini entered with wide smile. Swara opened her eyes n excitedly hugged ragini. "Ragini u r here, awww I missed u sissy" swara breaked the hug n they both shared the smiles. "Ragini so when are we leaving for Jaipur" they both sat on bed. "Swara don't u think u should fresh n up frst" ragini completed and swara bit her lower lip n went to washroom.

After an hour.

HALL
" shona and ragu u both got admission in AMPLE university, Jaipur" shekhar said n both the sisters stood still for few seconds then jumped in joy.
"Wow!!" They exclaimed together. They hugged shekhar and sharmishta. And then shekhar and sharmishta retired to their works leaving sisters alone.

IN EVENING

" ragu shona come fast beta, car is waiting" shouted sharmishta for the sisters who were yet busy chatting without noting the time .
Ragini and swara came running. And then laughing non stop.
"Shona I m warning u, u don't dare to create problems for janki okk" ragini and swara smiled to each other. "Massi I know she is mischeivious but that doesn't mean, she would not let maa work" both laughed . "stop making my fun, u both, ragu I just speakers to janki she said to take all your essentials" she got tears in her eyes. Ragini hugged her. "U both r leaving me alone" she cried. "Maa wats this massi was also alone na for 2 years now it's ur turn" swara teased her and sharmishta smiled a bit.
"Comon lets go" said swara . both hugged sharmishta and shekar n left for Jaipur.

New phase of life she was entering in, new hopes , wat was going to be her destiny now. She was totally unaware for what she was going so far from her place , according to her, she was doing it for the same reason her sister did. But was it so

AMPLE UNIVERSITY

"Because I wanted u here" said a shaby man. "Sir but I was not at fault" student said who was standing in front of that man. "Ohh u r saying that I was wrong in complaining about u" he stood up beating the table. That boy was taken aback. "I'll make sure u r suspended" he clenched his jaws and sat again comforting himself. "U may leave now" he calmly said.

The boy left the room, and joined his group. "Guys he is suspending me" he said to someone. "I already told you dude, he is THE SANSKAR MAHESHWARI he don't spare dude" said the other guy. "But why he is so rude" he said clenching his jaws.

"Coz I can't bear wrong that's all" sanskar said in meeting of board members. "But sir for everything we can't take such draconian steps na, they are students" other member said. "I don't care" he reluctantly said. "But we are not going to suspend him" said the head. And sanskar furiously went out of the room.

He went to the backyard in university and sat on his favorite bench. He remembered his college days , when he and she used to sit here and chat for hours. Tears filled in his eyes. "Where was I wrong, why this happened to me, why me, that made me soo rude" he slammed the bench. " why I m still alive" he clenched his jaws

Meanwhile in car "coz I m coming" swara said smiling to ragini. "Ya Jaipur is delighted" ragini said and both laughed.

What will happen, When they will meet, Are their destinies intertwined?????

Edited by Niyatiswaragini - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting concept.. Nice prologue.. 👍🏼
Update soon..do pm me if u cancan 😊
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niyuuu
re
atlast u come
jus luv
Jaipur..my lovely city jus luv it...it is a dam royal place...
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Niyu Jaanu .. 🤗
Amazing re...very unique...So sanskaar is professor & Swara is a student...
Sanskaar..very serious😡 & swara...bubbly😳...so now two opposite poles attract towards each other...

I'm waiting... Do update soon 😳
Edited by hasinig89 - 9 years ago
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niyu...i didnt stoped myself dear...😉i like stories very much...and more over u wrote it...😊wow...!it is sooo...nice,beautiful...new story...hey...!swaragini here no dishum dishum...very cool...!hahahahaha...arogent and rude sanskar...! i want to see him like this i like it...😉 good work niyu...👏
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Wow!lvly strt.
Interesting prologue.
Sanskar z rude,angry professor,hv past whr swara z mischevious,bubbly student.
Cntu soon.thnks 4 pm.
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Excellent concept Niyu and amazingly well written ... 😳Your story is very unique dear..love you for this ..🤗
please continue soon ...
Edited by Sampriti. - 9 years ago
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Interesting 👏
Pls pm me next time

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