Unconditional love - ch5 pg15 - 03/03 - Swasan SS

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Zephyr8

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Interesting story. A different Sanskar. Cheating Swara again. Do update your next chapter soon.

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iykyk

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

That's so mean! I'm hating Sanskar here. 😡 I don't want Swara to get hurt again. This time, the wound would be too deep to be healed. I want to see my smart and head-strong Swara back. Do update soon dear.

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angelpureness

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: sushups
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Omg that is so brutal... How can sanskar say something so cruel... If he wants to marry the other girl why play with swaras feelings... I know I know revenge n all but still the last line actually shocked me

😆 That's what I was going for at the end... Shock😆

Sanskars bark is worse than his bite... He is being harsh to convince himself that he does not care... I have some thoughts in my mind... The story is about unconditional love... So I want to create a scene where despite everything... Swara tells him that she trusts her love and he can do what he wants... But in the end he will come back to her... Because he loves her and not a past memory... I want those words to shake his core.

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950660

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Gosh what sanskar is up to ??

Poor swara !!

Anyways loved ur complete chapter..

Full of suspense n drama !!

Waiting for ur next update

Tc :))

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angelpureness

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Cinderella3
That's so mean! I'm hating Sanskar here. 😡 I don't want Swara to get hurt again. This time, the wound would be too deep to be healed. I want to see my smart and head-strong Swara back. Do update soon dear.

Swara will refuse to believe what he wants her to see... Instead she will follow her heart and will continue to believe in him and his love.

It sounds so good in my head right now... Just hope I can translate it well into the story... Fingers crossed I don't mess up.😳

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Ovi_Tanni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

how cruel!!! sanskar again cheating her grrr 😡 i wish swara pay back him in his own medecine n he madly fall in love with her...btw awsome update...eagerly waiting for next part..

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SIMI

@simsen23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

How mean..sanskar is disrespecting her...so he is using her and thinks that she is not worthy for marriage..swara girl you need to show up who you are...his ego should be crashed badly.I wish this swara is not a stupid this time.

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sarra0

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Sanskaar played ragani easiky 😆😆

Sanskaar is playing a game and yet he will b the one who ends up getting caught..and the one who believed in him and will trust in wat she thinks she has seen will b the one who end up having it all...he who runs falls the hardest... marriag to maya intriguing addition sanskaar thinks he must get married to her but not for the sake of the merger...

So he thinks swara family wont agree to marriage..does he then expect her to run away for him and he can ruin her family thru her like that? Does he expect to His first plan failed..she prevented it...so he is trying another...

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Razia Ajmal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

A nice start to chapter 4 and must say I like this dark side to sanskaar but why to I feel that while he is on a mission to destroy he is the one that will end up being hurt...why do I feel that he will be the one to lose. ...

He believes he is playing a game of revenge but yet I feel that his heart has long lost that battle...I hope swara is not weak and remembers his betrayal...

It seems this new twist will be good...marriage for merger...well let's see what my happiness money brings him and from what I can remember she will sacrifice her love for him and his happiness...

I just hope she learns why he did what he did...and I hope in the end he will truly love her...

Cannot what for the future chapters..

Thanks for sharing razia