SwaSan Drabble series: Vignettes from the Past - Page 9

Originally posted by: -GrilledCheese-

wonderful, wonderful stories!
you really have a way with words...loved it!
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Red.orchid

Nice drabble

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Viji dear,

Could I have more treats tonight? It is wonderful. The first one, jealousy, I personally feel make the most hilarious out comes some times. You narration is cherry on the top there. Poor Sanskar, how many fantasies will you fight with huh? Then I must admit Swara is rather stronger than I ever imagined, anyone else would have fainted at the glorious sight at least, but this sly girl is going to secretly cherish what she saw...the perfect Mrs. Sanskar Maheshwari I tell you!

The second, that start made me laugh uncontrollably, sometimes when the most insane things are said in serious tone it is hilarious! As for Ragini true, that is universally acknowledged I guess. As for Sanskar, he is a gone case. But a brainy one at that. One line and the whole script Ragini prepared for her Maha-entry collapses!

I do hope you will write more of this genre dear, they are too good!

loads of love,

Saku

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Viji darling...what a lovely set of drabbles...I had actually forgotten those days when Swara and Sanskaar were still in tht fake marriage and they had a bit of awkwardness btwn them and Sanskaar hadn't even confessed his love...seems such ages ago!

The tennis one was simply superb and I personally liked it best coz of the later part of tht OS whr he works out and tones his body sply his 'calf' muscles just to impress Swara...I'm not a major tennis fan tho I do understand the game but no particular leaning towards any player .. Tho m preferring federer at present if thts what it takes to make Sanskaar get all jealous and competitive for Swara's attention ...hahaha tht final closing line...oops what a malfunction but only Swara got lucky

The one abt Ragini's haq jaap and her eventual consummation I couldn't care less but her disgusting gloating making Sanskaar reply in kind was amazing tho poor thing he actually hurt himself in the process...and he wasn't even aware then tht he loved Swara but he surely did coz nothing else would induce someone to act in such a manner...

Are u going to write more?? Will wait for them!

Love Tas

Originally posted by: coolgal270

Viji,

Oh god! These 2 posts r absolutely hilarious and brilliant... Thank u thank u for writing them...

Tennis! Ooh me loves tennis! And fed..i am totally at swara's side..loved the jealous sanky...it was too much fun..😆

The whole 1st drabble is awesome...i couldnt help laughing all the while reading it...sanky taking crash courses to develop his calf muscles? 🤣And then that towel debacle! I was thinking kahin gravity shouldnt play its role.and that only happened!

i wish we have such hearty moments in the show too at some point of time..i mean the jealousy part, of course!😆

2:

Oh god! That HAQ...finally its done and dusted with! So loved the way Sanky gave it back to them...also swara's realization for her depth of feelings for laksh..v nicely done!

Swara was def angry on sanky, not just coz he got the scratches, but for how did he get those...again jealousy and me loved it!

Wonderful post viji! Loved it to core! Keep rocking like this!

Ps: loved how u described laksh neither going to office nor doing anything at home!🤣

Love,sumi

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Nita my dear...🤗 🤗

This being a SwaSan Drabble series showing them so involved in tennis, I just HAD to dedicate it to you. 😊 Given our shared passion for this magnificent game.

I guess Sanskaar likes Novak because of his unflinching determination, his courage and his will to win. 😃

😆 Nice point about Varun. Well you see, this drabble is not linked to the other OS I wrote. 😉 Separate universes and all. 😆 So here, Sanskaar is jealous of the TV star Varun, who Swara occasionally fangirls about. In the other OS, there is no such tv star making him jealous...so they just name their cute and chubby kiddo as Varun Sanskaar Maheshwari. 😉

Sanskaar in this drabble series, wants Swara's attention all to himself and is jealous of her admiration of Varun and Roger Federer. 😆 He just hasn't realized what all this possessiveness means...

I am so glad you liked the towel scene...it had to obey the law of gravity after all. And anyway I guess all the gymming paid off...Swara was suitably impressed before the towel malfunction happened 😳. As to her emotions after that, I would not presume to hazard a guess. 🤣

Ragini the great manages to get her haq early on here. 😉 Anyway she was always smarter than Lakshya...she must have effectively seduced him with her wiles and herinnocent damsel act. 😉

She is perpetually insecure about Swara and wants to send her back to the baadi anyway. So by flaunting the news of her intimate moments with Lakshya, she's trying to tell Swara her staying on in Maheshwari House is now pointless. Lakshya also tacitly participates in the taunting, since he still feels very bitter and vengeful against Swara at that point.

But then Sunny boy comes to the rescue. 😉 He is so protective of Swara, he wouldn't mind inflicting scratches all over his back, if that means shielding her from RagLak's taunts. 😆 Lakshya and Ragini become like jala hua baingans 😆

Of course Swara is so concerned about Sanskaar's cuts, and gives him the much deserved TLC. So all ends well. 😳

So very glad you loved this one dear. 🤗

I cant wait to discuss the match with you tomorrow. Go Nole !! 😊

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson

I am currently reading your element series, After Air i thought i need to catch up with other elements, it looks like already read Fire , still have to read earth . Going to do that now. But had to reply to this one .

Yep i love how we share a same passion for this game even if we are going to support different players . I cant wait to discuss the match tomorrow too but as you know it GO Andy from my side.

The reasons Sanskar likes Novak are the reasons Viji likes Novak right 😉.

So off to read Earth now .

Originally posted by: ishanita

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viji dear
now hving read your almost all stories I can say proudly that this is my fav of them all.
it was jus a masterpiece having all master luv elements like care fun possessivness ..best part being the light funny moments be them.
luv the way ragya got tit for tat.
arggghhh at last that psycho got her haq.
that lucky is so free ...all tym at home...no work at all.
luvd d way swara reacted to sansku and applied ointment.
I wished ki ye ek short story hoti with more length.
but I guess quality is more than quantity ...now u HV created a level at this forum for the stories below that I don't lyk to read..
hats off to u

Originally posted by: Kamala05

This vignette made my morning more beautiful . Thanks for the PM Viji.

I am sure every Swasan fans will agree that the fake marriage period was the golden period in Swasan's life . The relationship was fake yet the trust and understanding level was so strong .

You know sanskaar's character deeply than the makers ,he loves the Tit for Tat game and that makes his character more entertaining.

The mention of scratch in back and teasing swara for scratching him was enough to shut the mouth of Ragini and Laksh .I can totally imagine the embarrassed expression of Swara, jealous expression of HAQ couples .And sanskaar enjoyed the unexpected outcome of Scratching his back when Swara applied ointment 😆

Awaiting for more drabble VIJI .