REVENGE or LOVE (CH-18 UPDATED) - Page 2

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CH--1
This FF starts after Ragini takesover the property & business of Maheshwari family. One day Ragini went somewhere. Maheshwaris & Gadodia's were there.
Swara- Mujhe toh kucch samjh hi nahi aa raha Ragini yeh sab kuy kar rahi hai. Uski problem mujhse,Laksh & Sanskaar se hai, phir woh...
Just then Dadi enters the MM looking for Ragini. She was abt to go to her room when
Swara- Ragini, kahin bahar gayi hai.
Dadi was abt to go when
Swara- Dadi, kuy kar rahi hai aap aisa, Ragini galat kar rahi hai aur aap usska saath de rahi hai. Kuy. Aap ko bolna honga.
Dadi gave a scarastic smile to Swara.
Dadi- Galat kya kar rahi hai meri Laddo, Inn Maheshwario ne jo uske saath kiya, usska kiya. Inn loggo ne meri Laddo se uska sab kucch cheen liya, uska bachpan, uski khushiyan, uska parivaar, sab kucch. She had tears in her eyes.
All were shocked.
Swara- Dadi,Aap kahna kya chahati hai, Saaf saaf kahiyen.
Dadi says Swara tu jannana chahati hai na toh sunn & she goes to DP.
Dadi- Mahara Beta Shivraj & Avantika yaad hai thhare ko Durga Prasad.
DP was shocked, Annapurna, Sujata & RP to were shocked listening to Shivraj 's name after so many years.
Annapurna- Shivraj bhai sahab aur Avantika, unka Ragini se kya lenna denna.
Dadi- Lenna denna hai kuy ki Ragini, Shivraj aur Avantika ki beti hai.
That was a bomb on DP, Annapurna , RP & Sujata.
Sharmishta looks towards Shekhar (who nods in yes to her) while others did not knew how to react.
Annapurna keeps hands on her mouth.
Annapurna- Ragini, Avantika ki beti hai. She cries with happiness. (Avantika was her friend)
Dadi- Haa, ussi Avantika & Shivraj ki jise tumhare pati ne marwa diya.
All were shocked.
DP- Yeh aap kya kah rahi hai?
Dadi- Wahi jo sach hai Durga Prasad. Tumhare aadmiyon ne mere bete ko maar dala, tumhari wajah se Avantika picchle 24 saalo se Coma mein hai.
Swara- Lekin Dadi, bade papa aisa kuy karenge.
Dadi-Kuy ki yeh Durga prasad, Shivraj aur Avantika ke shaadi ke khilaaf thha. Issne unhe dhamki di thhi. Lekin Shivraj aur Avantika ne shaadi kar li aur yaha se hamesha ke liye Mumbai chalengaye. Woh logg sirf mere contact mein thhe. Phir ek din Ragini paida hui. Shivraj ne mujhe phone kar ke bataya ki usse beti hui hai. Woh bahut khush thhe. Din bitate chale gaye. Ragini 2 saal ki ho gayi aur bhagwaan ne Shivraj aur Avantika ko ek beta bhi de diya, Rajveer, jo 6 mahine ka thha. Phir ek dinn Shivraj ne bataya ki woh Kolcutta aa rahan hai. Maine usse bahut manna kiya, kuy ki mujhe darr thha ki yeh DP usse choren ga nahi, lekin ussne kahan ki woh isse manna lenga. Woh yahan aa gaye. Aur phir woh raat aayi, kaali raat, jissne sab kucch badal diya. Uss din main Shivraj ke ghar par hi thhi. Shekhar, Janki aur tere dadaji baadi mein thhe. Shivraj ne kaha ki woh DP se uske office milene aur usse samjhane jaa rahan hai.
DP- Haa, Shivraj mujh se milne aaya thha, aur hamare beech sab kucch thhik ho gaya thha.
Dadi- Jhooth, aggar aisa hota toh tere aadmi hamare ghar nahi aate.
Flashback---
Some men enters a house at night, they were taking DP's name. They catch Shivraj. They have knives with them. They attack Shivraj. He fights. He asks Avantika & Dadi to run with Ragini & Rajveer. Avantika was not willing to go. But to save Ragini & Rajveer they ran from there. After sometime they come back with police. But they saw the house on fire. Avantika faints. They took her to hospital were she passed on to comma.
Flash back ends...
There was tears flowing from everyone eyes.
Dada- Parvati, tunne mahare se itnne saal yeh baat chipayi. Kuy?
Dadi- Kuy ki main nahi chahati thhi ki Ragini aur Rajveer par iss ka assar pade. She continues. Phir main un donno baccho ko baadi le aayi aur Janki ko shaup diya, yeh kah kar ki bhagwaan ne uski jholi bhar di. Lekin kucch din baad Janki ki maut ho gayi. Saal betate gaye. Ragini aur Rajveer bade ho gaye.
Maine donno ko mumbai bhej diya, aage padhai ke liye.
Swara- Mumbai...
Dadi- Haa, tujhe pata hai Swara, Ragini ne waha MBA kiya aur apni ek company kholi. R&R groups.
Sanskaar- Yeh toh wohi hai na jo India ki top companies mein se ek hai.
Dadi- Haa. Tab tak Rajveer ne bhi MBA kar liya thha. Inn donno bhai-bahen ne iss company ko aage badhaya. Ragini, Director aur Rajveer MD ke taur par.
Aur phir Ragini ke liye iss Laksh ka rishta aaya. Ragini ne manna kar diya. Uss waqt usse kucch nahi patta thha. Phir kucch din baad Ragini kolkatta aayi. Uss waqt Rajveer, Banglore gaya hua thha. Woh direct kolkatta aata. Lekin woh nahi aaya, uski accident ki khabar aayi. Hum turrant Banglore pahuche. Hum ne patta ki toh patta chala ki Rajveer accident ki wajah se apna mansik santulan kho baitha hai. Meri laddo toot chuki thhi. Police ne bataya ki jiss car se Rajveer ka accident hua woh aur koi nahi Uttara chaala rahi thhi.
All were shocked, they look at Uttara.
Sujata goes to her.
Sujata- Yeh sab kiya hai, yeh sacch hai.
Uttara nods. She says- Haa, maain kaphi darr gayi thhi, maine Laksh bhai ko phone kiya, unhone mujhe turant wapas kolkatta aane kahan thha.Aur main aa gayi. She cries. Lekin humme nahi patta tha ki woh Gadodia family se hai. Sujata slaps her.
Dadi- Mujhe lagga ki Laddo ko sacch batta du. Maine usse sab kucch batta diya. Aggar woh chahati toh Uttara ko yahan Kolkatta mein bhi arrest kara sakti thhi, lekin abb usse sirf apne bhai ka nahi balki apne Maa, baba ka bhi badla lenna thha. Uss ne kabhi bhi Laksh se pyaar nahi kiya. Ussne yeh Shaadi sirf apne badle ke liye ki thhi. Pyaar ka sirf natak thha.
Aur baaki kahani toh aap sab jaante hai.
All were shocked. Especially Laksh. He always thought that Ragini loves him though he does not. He took her for granted. But he does not know why his heart was paining after knowing the truth.
Dadi goes to DP. She says- Tumhe aur tumhare parivaar ko sazza milengi DP, aur meri laddo dengi. Har uss gunnah ki sazza jo tum loggo ne kiya hai. She cries.
DP- Nahi parvati ji, maine Shivraj ko nahi marwaya, uss din hamare beech sab kucch thhik ho gaya thha... He was abt to say when was cut off by a voice.. "Jhooth" they turned & saw Ragini standing there with tears in her eyes.
Precap- Ragini tells Maheshwaris that its her revenge & there payback time.
So how is this chapter...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prologue and CS is very interesting.
Revenge drama... Like it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hmm.. Ch1 was really intriguing.
Itna kuch hogaya Gadodias ke saath.
Ragini badla legi sabse.
I think,kuch aur kahaani hai iske piche.
Continue sooonish.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really nice start loving this new Ragini m, poor girl she lost everything because of this family, she the owner of a big comany thats great can't wait to read the next part

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