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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
ok its my turn...
scene starts with swara wants to tell sanskaar that she also love him... sankaar came baadi to give swara divorce papers...
he bumped with swara... they fall into each others eyes... sanskaar umwantedly returned to his false mood...
sa- y lo swara..
sw- y kya h
sa- y divorce papers h... mai tumse pyaar krta hu na to tumhari khushi hi chahta hu...aur divorce se zyada khushi tumhe aur kis chiz se mill skti h...
sw- aisa nhi h sankaar ...
sa- to kaisa h... ( holds her tightly) iss shadi se tumhe kya milega jab tum mujhse pyaar hi nhi kr skti...
sw- pr mujhe divorce nhi chahiye...
sa- ooohhh plzzz ab apni behen k liye y shadi vala drama krne ki tumhe koi zrurt nhi h...
sw- voh baat nhi h...
sa- acha to koi ek reason do tumhari mahaan behen k alava...
sw- mujhe tumhare saath chocolate khani h...
sa- (literally shocked) what...?
mujhe divorce na dene ka yhi reason h ... unbelievable. ..
sw- nhi ...shirf yhi nhi h... mai tumhare saath apni hr choti choti khushiya celebrate krna chahti hu... meri khushiyaa tumhare saath rehne me h sanskaar... na ki tumse alg hone me... (started crying) mai tumse pyaar krne lgi hu sanskaar... shaayad bahot pehle se... pr ehsaas ab hua h mujhe...plzzz mujhe apne se alg mt kro ... I cant live without u... l love u ... l love u so much...
sa- mai bhi tumse pyaar krta hu swara pr agr tum mera dill fir se todogi to mai seh nhi paunga...
sw- mai aisa kbhi hi nhi skti bcoz I am in love with u...
sa- (can't hold himself now and hugged swara) I love u too swara...
throwing divorce papers into dustbin. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: -girlygeek-

ok its my turn...
scene starts with swara wants to tell sanskaar that she also love him... sankaar came baadi to give swara divorce papers...
he bumped with swara... they fall into each others eyes... sanskaar umwantedly returned to his false mood...
sa- y lo swara..
sw- y kya h
sa- y divorce papers h... mai tumse pyaar krta hu na to tumhari khushi hi chahta hu...aur divorce se zyada khushi tumhe aur kis chiz se mill skti h...
sw- aisa nhi h sankaar ...
sa- to kaisa h... ( holds her tightly) iss shadi se tumhe kya milega jab tum mujhse pyaar hi nhi kr skti...
sw- pr mujhe divorce nhi chahiye...
sa- ooohhh plzzz ab apni behen k liye y shadi vala drama krne ki tumhe koi zrurt nhi h...
sw- voh baat nhi h...
sa- acha to koi ek reason do tumhari mahaan behen k alava...
sw- mujhe tumhare saath chocolate khani h...
sa- (literally shocked) what...?
mujhe divorce na dene ka yhi reason h ... unbelievable. ..
sw- nhi ...shirf yhi nhi h... mai tumhare saath apni hr choti choti khushiya celebrate krna chahti hu... meri khushiyaa tumhare saath rehne me h sanskaar... na ki tumse alg hone me... (started crying) mai tumse pyaar krne lgi hu sanskaar... shaayad bahot pehle se... pr ehsaas ab hua h mujhe...plzzz mujhe apne se alg mt kro ... I cant live without u... l love u ... l love u so much...
sa- mai bhi tumse pyaar krta hu swara pr agr tum mera dill fir se todogi to mai seh nhi paunga...
sw- mai aisa kbhi hi nhi skti bcoz I am in love with u...
sa- (can't hold himself now and hugged swara) I love u too swara...
throwing divorce papers into dustbin. ...


The lst line. 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
okay i would like to redirect the 23 december epi scean jab rags swara ka bag open karti h aur usse chor kehti h sanskaar us din ek dum chup tha but my scean goes like this
sanskaar on seeing all this gets hurt n could not controll his emotions
sa- RAGINI bas karo
r- sanskaar kya hua aapko iss kliye pareshan kyu h ab yehkuch nahi lagti h apki
sa- shut up ragini ; swara chalo
r- kanha aur kis haqse le ja rehe h aap swara ko
sa- aapni patni ko apne kamren mein le jaraha hoon tomhe dikkath
r - par aapka divorce ho chuka h na
sa- dhokese hua h na
r- humein yeh nahi pata sanskaar par ab sara iss ghar se bahar jayegi aur woh bhi apna bag check karane k baad
sa- nahi swara kahin nahi jayegi
r-kis haq se rokenge isse divorce ho chuka h apka
samajh wale toolookat sanskaar with questioning eyes
sa- chalo swara ( he holds her hand takes her to the temple and filled her mang like earlier )
sa- i love u swara
sw- love u too sanskaar pls mujhe maaf kardo meine tumhe hurt kiya h but trust me sanskaar i love u
swasan hug each other irrespective of everyone present there

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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
res.

i will probably do this scene but i have homework so later ...
😳

i finished guys go my teachers give sooo much any ways here you are


Disturbed Kisses


- editing credit goes to meee😳

awesome post love your ideas tho
👏👏👏

and here you guys are my version of this scene if i was the writter hehehe

Sanskar was slowly and carefully applying medicine in swaras injured arm making sure to blow on it to lessen the pain. He couldn't see Shona hurt after all can he. He had been trying to get close to her for the past twenty minutes, and finally he was.

lost in his thoughts sanskar suddenly felt Swara flinch and he quickly moved closer and blow on her arm once again.

Sanskar - kab se ye Ragini aur Lakshya ko hint de raha tha yaha se jaane ke liye, finally samajh gaye

Swara than glanced at her to be- hubby and saw that he was definitely in the mood ( if you know what i mean)

Swara - Mr.Maheshwari paanch minute mein, mein bei chali jaungi she said in a teasing manner

moving closer to her face

Sanskar - tho Mr. Swara Gadodia or should i say soon to be Mrs. Swara Sanskar Maheswari ... for your information paanch minute me toh bohot kuch ho sakta hai naa

Swara shocked at his quick and asanskari comeback was stumbling across her words

Swara - San ... Sanskar koi aa gaya tho

Sanskar - Tho anahi do mein to sirf tum hi dawi lagra ha ti

he said with a cute smirk on his face knowing her sanskar he wouldn't give up on his so called "mission" she quickly closed her eyes as she could feel his breath closing in to her face.

Sanskar smiling at her gesture smiled and leaning in with anticipation well after all it has been forever since he got the taste of her pink luscious lips and hey how can you blame him he was a man and man have their desires

When he was only a centimeter away in fulfilling his desires the doors swung open which caused swara to shift a little farther

Swara - hi ... kavita

Kavita more like Cavity - swara who

Sanskar - kya hai ub kya chahti ho

Kavita - sanskar wo wo

Sanskar - kya wo wo karti rehti ho tum ... ani ke pahli tumhari bati teek kar ki aanahi sakti kya aur tum knock kar ki nahi a sakti

Kavita - par mai ...

Swara - Um sanskar usni knock karke aaya tha

Sanskar - uhh ... phir bhi mujhe ki darwaza ki ek sign board pei leka du

" PLEASE DON'T ENTER ME AND MY TO BE WIFE ARE HAVING A MOMENT" come on yaar have some common sense

Swara - SANSKAR !!! ye kya baak baak karti rehti ho tum chup karo ... Calm yourself she said while lightly hitting his shoulder

Kavita - WO me baas kahni aaya hu tumhari maa baa nichi tumhara intezar karra hai ti aur bola paanch minute me nichi ani ki leyi

This pissed sanskar sooo much

Sanskar - paanch MINUTES ... DO YOU KNOW WHAT IT MEANS FIVE WHOLE MINUTES COULDNT YOU HOLD YOUR HORSES AND TOLD US THAT WHEN FIVE MINUTES LATER

Kavita - Ok OK ... SORRY mai ub ja ra ha hu

Sanskar - Hai please bhagwan ke liye jao tired ho chuki hoi hint deh ti deh ti * as he dramatically folded his hands*

Kavita left with anger

and sanskar locked the door and came towards her

Swara - Sankar ye sab kya tha ... itni baat ni ki zaroorat thi

Sanskar - bolo main kya karti ... vasi bhi is ghar mein kabhi ramance nahi ho sakti hai kya? tabi toh iss ghar mein koi choti bachi nahi hai aur uski upar saab complain karti rehti hai. Jab mein ek kiss nahi mil sakti hou dakhal andazi ke bina toh sabhi kis hak si sab ek choti bachi ki leyi bolra ha hai.

Swara - Sanskar ...

she was interrupted as ke pinned her to the wall

Sanakar - Tho my princess hum kaha ti ... pehi

(monologue - before the chipkali came and interrupted us)

oh haa paanch minute mein bahut kuch ho sakti hai

he looked at her dewy chocolate brown eyes which were suddenly shut closed as her

slowly he places his lips on hers. It started of as a soft and simple one but sankars hunger turned it into a passionate one as there hands lingered in the others hair. They slowly pulled away as they were out of breaths.

Swara was about to go when he blocked her

Swara - sanskar

Sanskar - mei tum hi nahi chodunga jab tak tum meri ek sarth mai parengi

Swara - haa haa meri tumhari shart pura karoge ab choro

Sanakar - promise karo ki tum shaadi ke baad mujhe kutch doji

Swara - kya

Sanskar - ek choti princess or prince jisko mein bahut pyar kar saku

swara - sanskar ... she blushed and ran away from her hold

leaving a smiling sanskar

❤️


zainab
Edited by Miss-swasan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Miss-swasan

res.

i will probably do this scene but i have homework so later ...
😳



- edit credit goes to meee

awesome post love your ideas tho

❤️


zainab

Aww I am soo oo oo excited
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
soumi hope you like it ... just as much as i like your ideas 😳😳😳
Edited by Miss-swasan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
@Zain excellent idea tha...infact aisa hona bhi chahiye tha...mereko bohot gussa aaya jab vo cavity ki bacchi zabardasti ghus aayi kamre me... I was feeling like killing her.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: soumi93

@Zain excellent idea tha...infact aisa hona bhi chahiye tha...mereko bohot gussa aaya jab vo cavity ki bacchi zabardasti ghus aayi kamre me... I was feeling like killing her.



Thank you 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
i know this scean was very nice but it ended too soon and i too wanted some more romance, so here we go-
sw- sanskaar tum jaao yanhan se mujhe merirasoi ki rasam karni h
Sa- nahi itni aasani se nahi jaaunga
( sanskaar comes at swara's back rests his face on her shoulder and holds her hand she is working with and works along with her. Swara melts with his touch)
Sw- sanskaar kya kar rahe ho koi dekhega
Sa-toh dekhtne do main toh tumhare saath milk cake banwa raha hoon
Sw- aacha tum toh mujhe kaam karte hue tang kar rahe ho
Sa- aacha mrs. maheshwari par woh toh mera haq h.Ab toh tumhe puri zindgi tang karoonga so get ready
Sw- sanskaar jao yahanse mera khana kharab ho jayega samje
Sa- nahi aaj toh mein khana banwake hi jaaunga
SwaSan prepare the dish and put it in sujju's mehnga wala kaanch ka bartan😆
now sanskaar hugs swara from the back..😳
sw- sanskaar kya kar rahe ho koi aa jayega
sa-kyun koi aayega toh keh dena ki mein tumhari madat kar raha tha
Sw-aaacha kiskam mein madat kar rahe ho
Sa-apni wife ka mood acha kar raha hoon
Sw- sanskaar chodo mujhe
( sanskaar turns his back towards the slab and kitchen door)
Sa- nahi itni jaldi nahi
(Sanskaar brushes his lips on her shoulder )
(just then sujjuji arrives in her typical style)
Su- aree swara tune wo meetha bana liya k
( swasan are shattered and sujjuji noticethem)
su- sanskaar tu janhan k karraha h
sa- woh woh woh maa mein woh swara se milne aaya tha
su-hmm esena apne kamre mein mila kar ab chal...😆





Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Aree you this thread is not updating Pls do it na

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