RagLak FF-DIL SAMBHAL JA ZARA (PROMO UPDATED) - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
really nice update
plzzz continue soon and waiting for raglak meeting
waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

I already posted RagLak kids pic in this ff. Now new entries---

Pearl V Puri in as Kabir Raichand. Son of Raj Raichand and Ganga Raichand. He is a business tycoon. He is the MD of Raichan groups. He treats Ragini as his sister. He hates Laksh for what he did with Ragini. He is engaged to Payal. He loves Manas and Kaya alot. Manas and Kaya keeps on playing prank on him.
Gauri Pradhan Tejwani & Hiten Tejwani as Ganga & Raj Raichand. Mom & Dad of Kabir. They treat Ragini as there daughter.

Sanaya Irani-- As Payal, Kabir's fiance, Ragini's best friend and is very close to her.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Nice cs
plzzz update soon next prt
waiting ... for it desperately
and plzzz pm me too
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Lovely character sketch
Can't wait for update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
CH-5
Scene starts with Manas & Kaya hugging Ragini.
Ragini - Arrey mere softies aaj khud utth gaye aur itnni jaldi.
Manas- Mumma hamare vacations shuru ho gae hai na.
Ragini- Accha, and tickels both of them.
Manas And Kaya (Unison)- Hahaha... Mumma stop plz.. The trio laugh.
Just then a Lady enters. She is Ganga Raichand. She gets happy seeing Ragini laugh. She had tears in her eyes. In these 7 yrs she had seen Ragini laughing rarely.
Ganga- Arrey sirf apni mumma ko hug karo gey, apni Nani ko nahi.
Manas & kaya runs to her & hugs her.
Manas & Kaya- Good Morning Nani.
Ganga- Good Morning..
Ragini- Good Morning Maa...
Ganga- Ragu, take your tea.
Ragini- Thanks, Maa.
Just then a man enters, He is Raj Raichand.
Ragini & kids wishes him good morning.
Raj- Sab yahan hai Ganga, aapke sahabjaade kahan hai, abhi tak soye honge. Pahele raat ko ghar late aate hai aur phir late utthe gey.
Ragini- Aisi baat nahi hai papa, kal chotte ne hamari bhi meetings handel ki thhi, issliye usse aate waqt late ho gaya.
Raj- Ragu, apne bhai ko bacchane ki zaroorat nahi hai, mujhe acche se pata hai kal tumhaari koi meeting nahi thhi.
Ganga- Raj aap jaante ho na yeh donno bhai bahen ek dushre ki burrai nahi sunn sakte.
Ragini- Maa plz, hum abhi chotte ko uttha kar aate hai.
Manas looks at Kaya and winks.
Manas- Mumma, aap ruko hum devil ko uttha kar aate hai. (They call kabir as devil in fun)
Ragini looks at them suspeciously.
Ragini- Are you sure.
Kaya- Yes mumma, hum abhi devil ko uttha kar aate hai.
Ragini- Okay, but no pranks on him, understand.
Manas & Kaya (in unison)- Okay Mom.
Raj- Tumhe kya lagta hai Ragu, you said so they will not play any prank on there devil, it cant happen. You just wait & watch.
They all go in the hall.
Kaya & Manas go in Kabir's room. He was sleeping.
Manas- See Kaya, the devil is sleeping, Lets have some fun.
Kaya- Yes bhai and they both laugh a little.
They go near him and shakes him a little.
Kabir (in half awake but could guess that Manas & Kaya are waking him up)- Let me sleep, softies. You both also come & sleep.
They keep shaking him. He gets irritated & opens his eyes. Suddenly he shouts,
Kabir- Aaa,
Raj, Ganga & Ragini, who were sitting in hall, hear him shout and laughs.
Ragini keeps her hand on forhead & says- Softies & there pranks, god. BTW what did they do today.
We see Manas & Kaya standing infront of Kabir with there fake vampire flangs. As soon as Kabir shouts they both burst out laughing.
Kabir realizes there prank.
Kabir (fake anger)- Softies... you both...
He runs behind them.
Manas & Kaya-- Catch us Devil.
They run to Raj. Kabir to comes there.
Kabir- Softies... i will not leave both of you.
Manas and Kaya shows there tongue to kabir, hiding behind Raj.
Kabir- See Ragu, first they played prank on me (he tells them abt flangs) and now showing me tongue.
Ragini (smiling)- Chotte, i am not going to speak in between you trio. Every day they play pranks on u and whenever i scold them you come in between to save them.
Kabir - Fine, why will you take your's chotte side (he says making a baby face) I am going to get ready.
But before going he winks at Manas & Kaya. They too wink back. This is noticed by Raj & Ganga. They give a knowing look & smiles.
They very well know that Kabir and kids fight because there knok-jhok brings a smile on Ragini's face.
Scene shifts to Baadi--
Sharmishta was in kitchen making breakfast.
Just then Dadi enters the kitchen and start cutting paneer into pieces. Sharmishta sees this. She goes to her.
Sharmishta- Maa, what are you doing, breakfast is ready.
Dadi- I am making Paneer Paratha for my Laddo, dont you know its her favourite. Seeing this she will come running back to us, like she used to do in her childhood. And then i will not let her go anywere.
Sharmishta sees Dadi helplessly.
(Actually after Ragini left Dadi have gone in deperation)
Dadi- Laddo aaye gi aaj, meri laddo.
Sharmishta had tears in her eyes. She thinks- "Tum kahan ho Ragini, wapas aa jaao beta, ek baar, jab se tum gayi ho yaha par sab kucch bikhar gaya, sab kucch." She cries.
She goes to her room. She sees Shekhar standing infront of Ragini's pic and crying.
Shekhar- 7 saal ho gaye Ragini, tujhe ek baar bhi apne baba ki yaad nahi aayi, ek baar aaja bacche sirf ek baar. He cries.
Sharmishta wipes her tears & go to Shekhar.
Sharmishta- Shekhar, sambhalo khud ko, sab kucch thhik ho jayenga.
Shekhar nods & wipes his tears. Just then they hear something heavy falling sound from kitchen. They run there. They see that plate has fallen from Dadi's hand.
They come to Dadi.
Dadi- Dekh na shekhar, main Laddo ke liye parathe banna rahi thhi. Lekin yeh toh gir gaya. Abb?
Shekhar- Maa, plz aap bahar chaliye, Shumi sab sambhal le gi.
He take her with him forcefully.
Scene shifts to Raichand Mansion--
All were having breakfast.
Manas- Mumma aap aaj kahan ghummane le jaa rahe ho.
Ragini- Sorry baccha, aaj Mumma ko bahut kaam hai.
Manas & Kaya becomes Sad.
Ganga- Arrey mumma ko kaam hai na, tum doono mere saath chalna. Hum logg park mein masti karenge.
Kaya- Really Nani, you are the best.
Ganga- Mumma se zadda.
Manas & Kaya (in unison)-- No, hamari mumma world ki best hai.
All smiles. They finish there breakfast.
Ragini- Chotte, tum aur papa office pahucho main pahele NGO ho kar aati hu.
Kabir nods.
The three leaves. Kabir & Raj goes to office & Ragini to NGO.
Its Evening--
Ganga had taken Manas & Kaya to park. They were playing. Just then a ice-cream vendor came there.
Kaya- Nani, humme bhi Ice-Cream khaani hai.
Ganga- Okay, tum donno khelo, main le kar aati hoo. She leaves.
Manas and Kaya start playing.
Kaya throws the ball but it goes on the road & hits the tire of a car passing by. The car stops. It was Laksh. He comes out, he was angry.
Just then Manas & Kaya came to him.
Manas- Sorry uncle, ball galti se yahan aa gayi.
Laksh turns to scold them. But stops seeing there innoccent & cute face. Something pinched him from inside. He bends down.
Laksh- Beta, aaplog.
Manas- Uncle, hum logg khel rahe thhe, lekin ball yahan galti se aa gayi. He holds his ears. Sorry.
Laksh feels a pain inside his heart.
Laksh- Koi baat nahi beta, yeh lo ball. Aap logg akele ho.
Manas- Nahi uncle, Nani hamare liye ice-cream lenne gayi hai.
Laksh- Okay, Aap donno ka naam kiya hai.
Manas- Uncle mera naam Manas hai aur yeh meri bahen ka naam Kaya. Aap naam kiya hai.
Laksh- Mera naam Laksh Maheshwari hai. Aap donno mujhse dosti karonge. (He did not know why he felt like that)
Manas & Kaya looks towards each other & then shakes hand with him.
Laksh- Okay main jaata hun, mujhe kaam hai, bye.
Manas & Kaya-- Bye uncle, he leaves.
They to again start playing.
So how is this Chapter...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
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Lubly updte..
Bonding btwn entire Raichand 's family was mesmerising...
Manas nd Kaya such a adorable softies..

Eager to see hw story will proceed further..
Thnkww for pm.
Edited by Bista-anzana - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Brilliant is the word for this.

Loved the pace of the story and the softies are adorable. Just lovely.

Brought a smile to my face

😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Aww..loved laksh's bond with manas n kaya...feeling bad for dadi..
Loved the new entries... n also pranks between softies n devil šŸ˜†
Hope RagLak meet soon..

Lovely update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Lovely update I like the kids and devil they are so cuteee thank you for the update so Laksh met his kids wonder how and when and an how he will find out they are kids can't wait to read more
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
really nice update over the bonding b/s kids and devil
feeling bad for dadi
finally laksh met with kids
excited to know about their bonding and how he will get to know that they r hos kids
continue soon next prt
waiting ... for it
and plzzz pm me

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