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Sudha

@Shadow-Fax

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Posted: 10 years ago

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.Sarcasmazing.

@.Sarcasmazing.

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

Ah this was sooo amazing ⭐️

Really the best way for them to make up for things & sort them. The love making scene was wrote so asthetically, loved reading it ☺️

Haha OMG even I was scared if Swara actually forgot everything in her drunken stupor & will backtrack on her words 😲 But thank god it was only a prank & loved how Sanskaar tackled it with the MMS thingy 😲🤣 I absolutely loved the bold Swara here, feisty ⭐️

Haha this being RagLak's plan & Ragini's part of redemption made it even better, too good :D

Keep writing more, I loved it 😳

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Esha

@_Esha_

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Posted: 10 years ago

Amazingly composed 👏
A treat to read 😊

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Tarun kumar

@VirusForever

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

Loved The OS Completely...Hoping to see such SwaSan intense n passionate scene in our show which cv's cant afford to show us🤣..i just liked the way u have added that it was all ragini and Laksh part of redemption..Well Please continue in writing such stuff sudha😳

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Sudha

@Shadow-Fax

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: princess_tara
Lovely OS

Thanks tara😊

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Sudha

@Shadow-Fax

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .Sarcasmazing.
Ah this was sooo amazing⭐️
Really the best way for them to make up for things & sort them. The love making scene was wrote so asthetically, loved reading it☺️

Haha OMG even I was scared if Swara actually forgot everything in her drunken stupor & will backtrack on her words 😲 But thank god it was only a prank & loved how Sanskaar tackled it with the MMS thingy 😲🤣 I absolutely loved the bold Swara here, feisty⭐️

Haha this being RagLak's plan & Ragini's part of redemption made it even better, too good :D

Keep writing more, I loved it😳

Thanks Kavya! Really glad you liked my OS. 😳
Have enjoyed reading your well written KDRs. Getting a word of appreciation from you makes it special. Thanks 😊

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Sudha

@Shadow-Fax

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: eshat.k
Amazingly composed 👏
A treat to read 😊

Thanks Esha 😊 very glad you liked it.

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Sudha

@Shadow-Fax

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tarun1234567
Loved The OS Completely...Hoping to see such SwaSan intense n passionate scene in our show which cv's cant afford to show us🤣..i just liked the way u have added that it was all ragini and Laksh part of redemption..Well Please continue in writing such stuff sudha😳

Hey Tarun, thanks buddy
Of course you can't get to see such things onscreen 😆 Really glad you liked my work! 😳

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sharmi

@lucky_princess

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

Actually at first I felt like ewww!! Did sanskaar really record their first intercourse...but wen it turned out to be a prank was relieved...
U beautifully portrayed swara...loved her drunk state...
finally RagYa did something gud...
It was heavenly romantic 😳
brilliant update...
continue writing lyk dis...

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Sudha

@Shadow-Fax

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: lucky_princess
Actually at first I felt like ewww!! Did sanskaar really record their first intercourse...but wen it turned out to be a prank was relieved...
U beautifully portrayed swara...loved her drunk state...
finally RagYa did something gud...
It was heavenly romantic 😳
brilliant update...
continue writing lyk dis...

Thanks, yep it would be shocking you anyone 😆
Sanskar is very sanskari, isn't he? He cannot possibly do that.
Very happy you liked my story. 😊