OMGIIEE Two chapters! RES EDITED.
Nimmi my love! š¤
Read the last two updates and I am speechless. They were both so extraordinarily beautiful in their own way! š
Coming to the first one, the way you described it was SO on point that It felt like a movie to me, I was literally at the edge of my seat, or well my bed you could say. š And Gabriel, My Sanskaar, dammit how is it even possible to fall MORE in love with him everyday? How is this even happening?! :OO
Well girl you have a huge huge part in this, You bring out new facets of his character with every update and I'm just SO fascinated and in love with him! And the Angel-Kitten scenes jshfhgfdjf āŗļø. I can get used to this new found intimacy. Hell I WANT more of such intimacy! š
And OMFG that bike scene, So classic Hollywood! Reminded me of Knight and Day BUT our Angel-Kitten beat Tom cruise and Cameron in my eyes, the scene I imagined was just jshgfhdf ā¤ļø. And that inner chatter that SwaSan had during that bike ride, it was funny yet SO heart warming. His feelings have deepened and changed so much, my boy is in love.
Now coming to the latest update, Angel and Kitten's conversations always crack me up but warm my heart at the same time š³š Swara has her safe house?! š² Your description of the house is so good, it's like they are in a little universe of their own. On this account, I hope we get more SwaSan scenes in this house, I have already imagined so many possible scenes for them āŗļø and I know you have something really good planned for them and us.
And Haha Sanskaar didn't know if he should feel happy that Swara shared her special secret or be peeved. I love these two š¤£
And the whole boat ride, the way you described their emotions and thoughts when they see the house, gosh it was so surreal! And as Swara said, Sanskaar's tone was light and joking but the words burned with sincerity and truth. ā¤ļø
I'm so in love with this story, by far the best I've read. I know I have already told you this but I never get tired of saying it again! <3 I'm so addicted to this, I keep coming to the forum hoping to see a new update. So it's officially (I mean it!) a serious offense to keep us waiting for long. š³
Eagerly waiting for the next update! š¤
Lots of Love and jhappis,
Yukthi.
Edited by .FairyDust. - 10 years ago
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