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Posted: 10 years ago
Thrilling chapter.😊
The description of hounds were enthralling.👏
Swara is clearly jealous of Tasha,or was it Sasha???đŸ€Ș
She will not allow that Sasha to even look at him,will she???
Well,I have doubts regarding this Viper guy. Will he try to hurt Swara this time?
Sanskaar is gonna tell his baba the truth. I just hope ki woh believe in him.
The story is in full pace. And you are updating within 24 hours. Do you know what you deserve our Thankyou...đŸ€—đŸ€—
Edited by rose1998 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nimmie..đŸ€—
Amazing Update.I felt It was a short update re!
Now swara came to know about all the hidden challenges and games they gonna play around. Loved the way he opened up to his kitten, wauted for her to analise the situation and made her enough of all necessary points to deal with upcomming changes. Eventhough at this dark phase of life he made her to feel ease and assured her not to panic Aww❀.lol swara was jealous to sasha oh cmon swara your man wont go against you! And Sanskar,Manh(I loved the part wer he tried to pull her legs but why i did felt it was not as to it, he meant it in a way.right!). Her anguish, jealousy towarda sasha was somthng beyond.LOL it will be more funny to xatch up with it.And I LOVED LOVEd both swara snd sanskars monologue. Oh god they are more than protective to each other and moreover They both feels each other equally.I wonder how will they confess each other. Or will they?! But I think both know about their inner war 😆..Anyways the moment of their confession will be Magical!(want it in a slow space, with lots of Passion❀).Waiting for it!
Ow Sanskar is always a Manh! He was scared of sasha not because of her flithy actions but bcoz of how he gonna give her back with all power around and ofcourse he is a person who respects women and kids and here he hav to handle a dangerous opponer that too a girl!! And Oh Maverick on second position(Yay Im so happie, I just love him). Similar to gabreil hmm no way you cant be similar to him as Our Gabreil is UNIQUE. BUT And maverick is somthing!

And Now Im waiting for action!. hmm How you gonna take it Nimmo.will you make four of them to meet together? Plz Update soon😳. Rana:I just lob and admire him! He is a worth person. Eventhough He silently pray for his son to acheive goal and to stay alive. Hw has full faith on HIS child.! And Sanskar played a Nice move, Waiting for apt moment to speak with his baba.😳. (Ramprasad(:x)). Update soon.TC😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
i thought u told u would update the next part within 24 hours😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nimmi!đŸ€—
Woah! quite a surprise this update was for me just like Gabby boy! never thought we would get fun update, after pervious serious one, in which I have to keep my phone aside for laughing loudly. but again, when Gabby and his kitten are together and talking, its always fun, happiness and peace around in such situations too. đŸ€Ł
there are many lines on which I was laughing out loud!
and specially this para!
"Uhu! You alright Kitten?" He looked
at her...
"Dunno! That Bring It On' kind of
glint." He stated. đŸ€Ł đŸ€Ł
every time I imagine both of them talking, it is just đŸ€Ł
haven't I said in last comment I adore Gaby for his ethics despite such things happened to him.
he said it all! the para in which he was defining why second one is distant second. Absolutely agreed to Gabby.
by the way jealous(Swara), protective, possessive, loving, proud of each other Swasan are treat to read.
MY ANGEL...pat on the back Swara. And MY GIRL! *whoot* when will the Sanskaar understand about changed something if not everything like Swara!! 😃
sorry for the late and short comments Nimmi! My entrance exams are coming and I am inactive here. 😊

PS- if you don't want to see JIJI KI AATMAA in sleep, update darling! 😈 😆
OK! waiting, update when you want! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
and I just realized i have been spared from seeing Jiji ki aatma in my dreams. err nightmare😆. (ToshiđŸ€—).
aren't I the luckiest thing around

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Posted: 10 years ago
fantastic...bear with my short comments nimmi...once i am done with my fic i will be back with full fledged comments
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Banjaaran.

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">and I just realized i have been spared from seeing Jiji ki aatma in my dreams. err nightmare😆. (ToshiđŸ€—).
aren't I the luckiest thing around</font>


NimmiđŸ€— !!
of course dear!
yeah yeah!!, you are blessed with lots of good luck, talent of writing excellent story with unexpected twists and a great sense of humour!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Seven chapters mate!!!!đŸ€Ș


I can do this!!!đŸ˜”
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update.. Sanskar is really superb..the way he judged that the man has given away his location and the kitten close your eyes was awesome.. The way they were hiding was like a flicker of candle in the darkness..violence all around and spark of intense love in between.. Not to forget about the thrilling chase sequence.. the amazing stunt and then Swara's hug was so awesome.. Sanskar is really so dangerous but at the same time intense and so protective of Swara.. Cant wait to read more.. Update soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi NimmiđŸ€—,


This time i have decided to comment instead of Res which i seem to do for the last few updates, i already unres my comments on page 35. Sorry i tried to make it before you update😆


Loved this chapter dear, It was filled with Gabriel and Swara, ofcourse i will love it. the whole action sequence was splendid. i liked how quick Gabriel is on the uptake. APTE is really not going to stop.


Bike sequence was so good, the kiss was awesome surprise, she is already in love with him, he wanted her before as he wanted to be a barrier between her and the bullets, he is really her guardian angel,


Waiting for your PM dear. sorry for the short comment just know that I loved this update, will read it few more times tomorrow. 😉


Edited by NitaMikealson - 10 years ago

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