you know I'm a bad reader to not post about your chapters :(
I feel sad and wait :D
firstly the back story about DP, Rana and Sanskar :D
To be honest, I loved Rana's backstory more than DP or Sanskar because it had everything in it,
love, sadness, happiness, pride, honor, downfall, rise, debt to someone, vengeance and strong role :D
He was someone of high rank in a secret service with intelligence on fighting and marrying the love of his life then whatnot but the ending to a start of a new life is GREAT
Sanskar is having a nice touch to his start, secret and secret UFFF WHEN WILL YOU REVEAL THE WHOLE SECRET? i won't say anything about this character until u do -_-
well then the entry to the top 4 ASSASSINS and I am a boy addicted to gaming, playing soccer and reading stories of fandoms so you can guess that I can perfectly imagine twisted people like them and top notch people killing just for fun, money or something else *shrugs*
so anyways I find Maverick who is catching my eyes, why?Cuz he is a flirtatious, unhonorable and ruthless assassin but still Gabriel is the best :D
Black Widow?I can imagine her from the Avengers movie XD
but she was not a seducing Goddess (tho she is stunning irl) but she was a manipulator in a twisted kind of way :D anyways she suits here :D
Jack?I imagine him as no one tbh but a guy with no pattern?Well he should be on top, no offense :D as he is like unpredictable and good at many things but not perfect in everything, not even in one so thats his flaw here so nice touch :D
Viper, I think of him as a guy with a scar on his face, I pity him to be honest, why?shocked? hahaha me too cuz well our Angel of Death, Harbinger of Death, Gabriel or as Kitten likes to call him Guardian Angel :D
would tear him limb from limb, poor guy, kitten is not worth it or is she? >:)
not much SwaSan :( but I won't ask cuz i was a bad reader :(
now last one well nothing much ha-ha toddles :D
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