Hi ^-^
I just found your story yesterday (was recommended by a friend)
Just completed reading all the chapters..
I have to say that the story is extremely beautiful and well written. Loved the twists you introduced througout the story...though I predicted some but some of the twists were shocking.
Gabriel /sanskaar --- he is a flawlessly flawed character of your story .He has the combination of both flaws and virtues. He has so many intresting shades to his personality .On the one end he is reffered as an angel of death...but on the other hand he forgives and spares the life of laksh. He says he works on his own rules and don't follow any one's order but later he is shown to bend these rules for his kitten. He is ruthless as well as forgiving.
Such a wonderful charcter you have penned down dear. Can I say he has a deadly sense of wit and humor.
swara- Though at some times she tends to be stupidly brave I can say I connect to her. She is full of life and can be crazy sometimes. Kitten...a lovely name given by gabriel. She is very likable.
Kudos to you for writting very strong side charcters for your story...
all the other characters like bozo, durgaprasad, ramprasad , rana,even laksk, that garage guy, dragon are very very wonderfully etched.
I like the detailing you give in every scene. Be it any action scenes, description of weapons, etc.
At the end I have to say that your story seems like a movie which has a combination of suspense, thriller, comedy romance, action (loved those scenes) mixed all together very beautifully.
eagerly waiting to read the further parts of the story..
I hope I haven't bored you up with my rant
Have a good day:)
Adios
P.S.- loved your username and that little cute girl in your dp.
P.P.S.- sorry if there are any mistakes. I typed the comment from my cell.
~~Richa
Edited by navyasingh - 10 years ago
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