SwaSan 2S : GUILT FOREVER BURIED DEEP (PART 2 UPDATED PAGE 5) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chemgirl

Nice...its gud to have smthng from sanskaar's pov since he is mostly keeping mum these days.



Thanks.. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice part
Hope it has continuation
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Esha.. You showed Sanskar's point of view so nicely. Everyone has been cursing him but I guess this can shut them up!!
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Loving it...what a way to clear the confusion... loved the way sanskaar went through all the motions...
Waiting for part 2 already...Thanks for sharing
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Originally posted by: sonakshi.sharma

Very nice part

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Thanks sonakshi 😆 yeah it has another part 😃 up in a while 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Saumya2102

Wow Esha.. You showed Sanskar's point of view so nicely. Everyone has been cursing him but I guess this can shut them up!!

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Thanks saumya 😉 yes! I completely agree 😊 sanskar is the only person who is going through all the pain 😭
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Originally posted by: raaz19

Loving it...what a way to clear the confusion... loved the way sanskaar went through all the motions...

Waiting for part 2 already...Thanks for sharing



Thanks buddy 😊 yeah I tried to explore sanskar's mind a bit 😃
Next part up in a while 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice
Described Sanskaar's state of mind perfectly.
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Originally posted by: Sanavi

Nice
Described Sanskaar's state of mind perfectly.



Thanks sanavi ... 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey there people! Here's the last chapter of my 2s ...I thank all the people for appreciating my work a lot..this 2s is basically about sanskar's feelings and his dilemma of choosing between the 2 without hurting any one ...here's the last part
And everything will be resolved in this chapter!! I will write short but will explain each and every detail.. please do let me know your opinions 😃


As everybody left I proceeded towards my room with extra-happy kavita!! I felt like strangling her! Why was she so happy when I was in such a trouble?...I looked at her calmly with a serious face and smiled ''kavita?what makes you so happy?" I calmly protested...

She looked confused and frenzy 🤢 she playfully answered me ''why do you ask so?why would'nt be I happy when I got my sanskar back?aren't you happy?you don't look so?'' She sensed my distaste I guess! I nodded in a reluctant YES ... she ran feeling happy! "Listen Jaan! I gonna change you come fast!!" I nodded ...

Damn! I growled "what made you nod sanskar! And what's jaan? Only swara has that authority! I scolded myself...but helplessly I regarded my mistake...I could make out the consequence of baadi ... swara must be crying hard and maa would be relieving her...baba was disgusted from me so he would have been saying explicits about me requesting swara to move on...I was ashamed of what I was today ''a Moron husband" I cried hastily...

Why was'nt I able to realise I could'nt live without my swara? I didn't even care about kavita... why was she due to appear after 5 years ? And too when I was married? Bitch! I regarded 😡 ... I moved upstairs slowly imagining the incidence when swara was about to fall and I holded her by waist locking our eyes...

I moved up ... I saw a girl wearing swara's clothes facing her back to me...I was so lost in swara's thought that I confided her to be swara!! I ran up to her ''back-hugged'' her tight ...smelling her fragrantic hair..feeling her love!! She reciprocated by holding my hand on her abdomen... I slowly whispered ''I love you...(her heart beats increased) I love you ...swara! I kissed her earlobe ..

She pushed me away and looked shocked...to my horror I exclaimed Kavitaaa...
She was tearful...''I..I am sorry kavita! I just..." she stopped me to say any further!
Sanskar! She spoke softly ''I am really sorry! For separating you and swara! I advice it's not too late !! You go and convince swara! ''

Are you sure? I ...m.mean did I hurt you? I confirmed...''No sanskar! It was my stupidity of destroying your marital life...I am still in the before time! You go! Don't worry about me! I just flew away taking care of my happiness!" She looked confident
Without saying any more... I ran towards baadi with only one goal " getting back my wife to her home"...kavita waved a ''come soon with your soulmate'' bye...I smiled at her intelligence and sacrifice ...I regarded and blessed her that she'll too have a good life-partner

I cared about mine now who was suffering because of me ''my ego''...

The guilt was buried deep of hurting her 😭


So people this was it...
Thanks
Esha

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NOT PROOFREAD EXCUSE THE TYPO'S

Please do let me know your reviews..
Appreciation and criticisms are happily welcomed 😊

A beautiful yet sad thought -
"You can victimize yourself by wallowing around in your own past" ~ Wayne dyer

Edited by eshat.k - 9 years ago

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