SwaSan 2S : GUILT FOREVER BURIED DEEP (PART 2 UPDATED PAGE 5)

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Esha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: wrizaa
it was really very nice...

Thanks buddy 😃 it means a lot 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: ritika52
waiting for the nxt update...

Sure buddy 😉 will update it today itself 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hey Esha,
I think it's a very brave attempt to try to grapple with Sanskaar's dilemma in the midst of the depressing drama we are getting and will no doubt continue to get in the near future. You went through all the emotions in swipe succession that will go through his mind should things play out as we have been led to believe. Nicely explored the different aspects I thought. Poor SwaSan- what a mess! We all yearn for better times and if you can resolve this in a separate part, it would be soothing to read:). Nice work.

Shruts,
No doubt to what you said...I've read a number fictions of the same topic ''kavita's entry''...and maximum of writers wrote about swara's POV and its very amazingly composed I must say..but I thought of writing about sanskar's peace of mind
Everybody feels the pain of swara but I felt bad for sanskar and his dillema of choosing between his wife and the past lover..yup, in the next part everything is going to be resolved NO WORRY!! Thanks for your appreciation ''I felt good '' 😃 😆 😉