SwaSan 2S : GUILT FOREVER BURIED DEEP (PART 2 UPDATED PAGE 5)

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Esha

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey swasanians and my dear buddies 🤗 after watching today's episode I could'nt resist writing my prediction... so here I am converting my dimaagi plot into an OS

I stood there watching helplessly... two machured women were busy trading me..one was my wife selling her husband and another was my past lover kavita who bought me...though my wife swara asked my opinion through her eyes but I couldn't give her any expressions due to the guilt of hugging another woman too in front of her...my heart was aching deep..as I saw the present scene...

Kavita was delighted after hearing the news from ragini of us being divorced..she thought no more not even about my acceptance... she directly marched towards swara to give me to her...swara was heartbroken as I saw,she was unable to reciprocate more in this conversation..kavita shook her,as swara came back in reality...she looked at me for my opinion but as I said I looked expressionless, she assumed me to be still in love with kavita and due regards of our previous arguments and misunderstandings...she found the answer and just nodded in a yes!

I was disgusted and angry unaware of my past ignorance and rudeness that I meted on her..I cursed her for betraying me again...she without talking anymore left the place instantly.. I could hear her audible howls and see her pain..I realised she did this for me,my happiness..I could have stopped her but fearing of kavita's health I kept quiet

Just as swara left..kavita embraced me, I stood motionless cursing myself and experiencing the guilt again for the relunctanty permitted physical intimacies between me and kavita...I kept thinking about swara who just ran away making everyone terribly upset..everyone stared me with disgusted stares, cursing me for betraying the warrior and the heart of maheshwari mansion...

I could feel it ''her pain'',''their pain'',and kavita's sudden reappearance... it was horrid for me...

My guilt for forever was buried deep in my heart

Hey people that was it 😊 but I am thinking of converting it into a 2s what say?
- Esha

it just takes two mins to type a sentence..please do comment it means a lot..

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HAPPY NEW YEAR BUDDIES ⭐️

Edited by eshat.k - 9 years ago

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PenguinBaby

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Posted: 9 years ago

👏Great! Waiting for the next part!

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RIA ROY

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Posted: 9 years ago

it was really very nice...

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ritika52

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Posted: 9 years ago

waiting for the nxt update...

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey Esha,

I think it's a very brave attempt to try to grapple with Sanskaar's dilemma in the midst of the depressing drama we are getting and will no doubt continue to get in the near future. You went through all the emotions in swipe succession that will go through his mind should things play out as we have been led to believe. Nicely explored the different aspects I thought. Poor SwaSan- what a mess! We all yearn for better times and if you can resolve this in a separate part, it would be soothing to read:). Nice work.