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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: .FairyDust.

Unreserved on page 2. :))

Thanks Yukthi!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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im a silent reader of all ur ff's & ss infact i have saved all of them to read again and again... i do really love all urs my most fav is ice king and snow queen and now im glad to get the cont of those chpt...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: .FairyDust.

RES.


OMG Saku!!!
Happy New Year, Love! 🤗
So spring is Finally here! I cannot tell you how elated I was when I opened my PM box and saw 'Frost Knight' there! And OMG thanks so much for the dedication, it made my day and possible my whole year too! Yeah that's how much I love the WinterLand! This is the best NY gift! ❤️ I'm so excited I cant even express it properly
Will come read and un-res later tonight!


UNRES

Oh Saku! Before I start, Thank You so much once again for the dedication. Being one of your "Winter Ladies" is such a privilege and joy to me! 😳
Now for the first part, This was so beautiful, every part of it was so enchanting! You're so good with words, it all flowed seamlessly as One and carried me into this enchanting story you've woven! ❤️
Ragini and Laksh! The way you described them, their pain and feelings, Ragini's especially 👏, And Laksh empathizes with her somewhere, that was slightly shocking yet made a lot of sense. 👏 I never liked Laksh-Ragini much, could never relate to them but you made me feel for them, I could feel what they are in this part 👏
And who is this Vasundara? 😲 Chandaraj's sister? She has some strange power to her character, something intimidating yet regal. Looking forward to see how she shapes up and what her plans for Sanskaar are.
And Shekhar and Dadi disgust me, especially Shekhar! No comments on these two!
And now for my favorite part - SwaSan's wedding . I have no words, AT ALL. It is so beautifully written...so rich of emotions and so poignant! And the way you portrayed everyone's emotions..AHH! I've become a fan of yours all over again! ❤️ Loved the DP-Swara part AND that line talking about the lotus still belonging to the water but now at the feet of the deity for the next seven lives, the deity being Sanskaar, AH this line was So SO good, I had this strange giddy feeling when I read it! This has to be my most favorite line ❤️

And Sanskaar-Swara's thoughts during the wedding ceremony!
Wow, those lines from the previous parts..each line is so dear to me..each one is so significant to their story..it was so blissful to walk down memory lane again and it felt SO GOOD to have little pieces of IK, The Winds & SQ in this..just made it more beautiful to me! And the dialogues that caught on with me are 'Melt me' and when Sanskaar rejects Swara in The Winds. These two are major turning points in their story and Gosh they've come a really long way! I cant tell you how emotional and nostalgic these made me, I love you for this! 🤗
And the end, ah the past and the hopefully the last remnants of ice between them has melted away forever, paving way for a new beginning for them! You've written it so well I could see it all happening before my eyes and I almost felt as if i was there. ❤️
Looking forward to read more on the beautiful moments of this new Sanskaar-Swara from Springs! ❤️
Oh I loved this so much Saku, this is going to be one great journey! Eagerly waiting for your next part. do update soon! 😳


Love,
Yukthi.

Hi again Yukthi,
it is my fortune that I have so wonderful winter ladies, I just love you for writing this comment my dear, it made my day!
I want the reader to understand RagYa a certain length here so I tried my best to portray their forsty selves, nice to know you felt the chill.
Of cause Vasundara is a powerful antagonist, a regal winter persona, you'll know more about her in the future. She is the main villain in this part.
The wedding, well we never had a proper one in the show, so I tried my way. Glad you fond the mix of past and present and the cocktail of emotions interesting.
I hope you will enjoy your stay on the winter land and the company of the Frost knight dear, thanks a lot😊
Love,
Sakura
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: ExpectoPatronum

Sakura! I have read all ur works and I'm absolutely in love with them!!!

Love to read more of ur works, I'm hoping you write a story which is light hearted!!

Thank you dear...uh well the winter series is kind of heavy stuff, I'll see about a light hearted one once this is done with. I'm glad you enjoy my writing, hope to hear more from you😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: TRPS

Dear!! you back!! 🤗 😃
with a combo of chilling winter and pleasantly warm spring. 😊
First of all, Happy new year Saku! 😊
and thank you so much for dedicating the chapter among much deserving others. unexpected it was!! 😛
Frost Knight!! So, no one escaped from the chilling grip of winter. and added few more. an expected entry of Vasundhara. err!! with addition of overly obidient and unprepared son. till now looked like a greedy one. seems that Chandra made Sanskaar his heir or something... and that Ram and Lakshman fight indicating Maheswari brothers...
future wife thing, does it refer to Raagini!! her disgusting father's loss in business will be cured by this marriage. something like that!! or someone else she is... so much suspense again!!!
Well!! let's see what mystery next chapters unfolds.
you showed everyone's thought process so neatly. be it chilling thoughts of Raagini, Lakshya and others or heart warming thoughts of Swara and Sanskaar. 😊 and I was so excited to read Swasan's POV as spring has come in their life and when Swara's POV ended, I was waiting for Sanskaar's!! but...
so scrolled down , down, down and down!!
finished mid paras super fast, came to read his pov.
you ended chapter on pleasant thoughts.
so pure and blissful, both thinking from flashback to recent , reciting vows kind of again, holding hands, seeing dreams, fulfilling them, protecting them and each-other, so much selfless devotion ... 😊
that lotus one.. never thought this way. simply superb...
Hope, everything goes well with Swasan. 😊
so, Saku, as usual very neatly written it was. Eagerly waiting for the next updates. 🤗


Hi dear,
Wish you a lovely year ahead!
Well you asked me to count you in didn't you?😛
Well Vasundara will reveal more about herself once she enters the court of the Ice King, you know the winter castle...Ram Lakshman indicates the obvious, though I'm not sure what the outcome will be.
I will not answer to that Ragini's future question, that involves some frosty secrets.
I'm glad you enjoyed the long,long super long descriptions on everyone's thoughts here. And then the wedding. I will update soon, hope to hear more from you.
Thanks again!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Fatma6

Awesome new year gift , thank you, love your obsession with swasan.

Does a lot of good to people like me 😉.

Winter land, the land of ice , snow, and now frost am loving my stay here.😊

Swasan marriage unification of two souls not by circumstances but by choice, choice to live and love eternally is like dream come true.

I want it to happen in the show also, but dunno when that will be

Sanskaar seriously loves extremely and hates also extremely.
I cannot help myself from feeling bad for laksh and ragini.

So we are gearing up for a legal battle. Am willing to wait and see if ragini is again going to choose the wrong side.

Does she even have a choice.

Laksh probably understands now the hurt and pain of ragini.
I would be happy if he reconciles with ragini.

It's going to be another interesting jorney for sure

Hi Dear,
have a super great year ahead, I hope to hear more from you.
It's wonderful to know you enjoy your time in the land of winter, Sanskar hates it (As he says in the SQ, but the winter ladies love it😆)
We never had a lovely SwaSan marriage on the show, so I tried my version here, glad you liked it. Of cause, he is the Ice King, he does everything to the extreme edge of them.
Yes, we are getting ready for another battle this time a far more dangerous one.
No, Ragini no longer has a choice, unless she chooses to escape, run I mean.
Lakshya is going through the same phase so he understands.
I hope to hold on to your interest throughout the story.
Thanks a lot once again!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: jerrenkarthi

hi the new character is going to battle sanskaar for the property isn't, and ragini want to destroy swara again, and laksh cant he let go of swara? i read all your stories ice king and snow queen add me to the pm please

Yes, it is something like that. Lakshya has his own winter to overcome before he attains his spring, it is what the frost knight is all about.
I will try to Pm you dear, but I can't promise as I am very busy these days😊
Thanks a lot😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: hari15

im a silent reader of all ur ff's & ss infact i have saved all of them to read again and again... i do really love all urs my most fav is ice king and snow queen and now im glad to get the cont of those chpt...

I'm so happy after hearing from you, it's nice to know you love the winter series so much. Have you tried the Winds of Winter one shot series?
Thank you so much dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So happy to see you back in action Saku.. Vo bhi with sequel of ur winter series Iam dancing over here . You know I'm big Fan of your FF especially ICE KING and SNOW QUEEN. This is a best new year gift for me 😳. Looking forward how this section will unfold

Love Jami 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Jamina

So happy to see you back in action Saku.. Vo bhi with sequel of ur winter series Iam dancing over here . You know I'm big Fan of your FF especially ICE KING and SNOW QUEEN. This is a best new year gift for me 😳. Looking forward how this section will unfold

Love Jami 😳

Hi Jami,
Wish you a marvelously happy year ahead dear, Thanks for your wishes😳
So you're a winter lady too, enjoy the extended reign of the Ice King and the Snow Queen then, hope you'd enjoy your stay in the winter land😊
Love,
Sakura

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