A Short SwaSan OS: ~Yeh Teri Meri Baatien~

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Zaalima_5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

wow amazing..👏 loved it..😳

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PUBALI BASU

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

So beautiful os...
I hope cvs get some ideas from it

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Sree

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

God bless your writing skills Shona. Very happy reading such a romantic haq jataoing from Swara scene. Bohot hi beautiful hai. Hope the CV's show something like this.

Edited by Sree8410 - 9 years ago

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

I loved it, it was such an sweet OS.

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PRACHI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

omg this was a beautiful os
jst want to see this scene in serial
n swasan ek saath ho to ragini kuch bhi nhi kr payegi

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SIMI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

simple n perfect...nice one dear...keep writing 🤗

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medha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

I adore this swara :))

Brilliant job Shonali..the ending yes boss!:D

and the place where she thinks he is like a kid:)and force feeds him. everytime do aaa...everytime food😉

Bhondu sanky😆

light moments and the fact that after all they cannot leave each other to fend for themselves.😳

Edited by medhasankar - 9 years ago

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BB_CallmeC

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Thank you everyone for reading and leaving comments. I will reply to each and every comment once I am done with my final on the 16th.

Thank you so much once again😃

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Hey Shonali...was such a lovely, cute OS. A really sensible one, involving proper communication between SwaSan as well. 👏 👏

I just loved the part where Swara is haq jatao-ing and manao-fying her pati. 😉 And this dialogue from Sanskaar to Swara: "Tumhi tair karlo na. Main bolu yah nahi. Khau ya nahi. Piu yah nahi. Tumhi toh decide kar rahi ho abhi. Chup rehene ke liye tumhi ne kaha hai mujhe"

This was just so awesome. You gave the mirror image of one of my favorite SwaSan scenes from the serial (where Swara tells similar words to Sanskaar, when he tells her to breathe, drink water, and not worry too much about Lakshya & Ragini 😊). She was also sounding part sarcastic, part amused at his gesture, and asked him to decide what she should say or think. 😆

You inverted that setting in such a lovely manner here, and I was just lost in SwaSan dreamland. 😳

I loved the way Swara was literally forcing her pati to drink the haldi dhoodh and eat the rice & dal. Typical wifey behavior towards her beloved hubby!! And loved the way she so clearly and calmly explained to him, that she did come back for the sake of their relationship, for winning him back. Her battle with Ragini is incidental to that, to protect their family (which she considers as hers also, only because of Sanskaar, of her bond with him). This was so well put, no wonder Sanskaar started thawing towards her, and started feeling hope again. in their relationship.

I loved reading this. Waiting for more from you.

And yes---all the very best for your exams, hope you sail through with flying colors! 👍🏼