A Short SwaSan OS: ~Yeh Teri Meri Baatien~

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Posted: 10 years ago
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A very short SwaSan OS of the scene that had popped up in my head when we came to know about BM-SR sequence. The plot is after the confrontation with DeepVeer. Hope you guys enjoy and like it😳


Thank you Shruti (aka The.Lannister) for the encouragement!!

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~Yeh Teri Meri Baatein~


Right after their confrontation with Deepika Padukone and Ranveer Singh, Swara and Sanskaar decided to head home. He was waiting like a gentle man for his lady even though he was still upset with her. Swara asked him if they could instead get a taxi so that he doesn't have to drive and hurt his hand. But he wasnt going to listen.

He just pressed the paddle so hard that even Swara felt the jerk of the car and couldnt say anything after that. The entire way, Swara was just staring at his face and his hand alternately. The more pressure falls on his hurt hand, the more pain she feels and that wasnt gone unnoticed by Sanskaar. He was definitely observing her, through his mirrors, which Swara didn't notice at all. And they got home.

Even before Swara could say anything to him, Sanskaar just got out of the car, slammed the door and left.

Swara came out of the car and decided, "This is it Mr Stubborn Maheswari. You can ignore me all that you want. But I can definitely come behind you and do what I want too. After all, I am Mrs Stubborn Maheshwari". She smirked. "Be ready Pati dev".

She comes in their room with haldi milk and some food for him. He was about to get the first aid box out, but she came in time and snatched it from him. She kept the first aid box aside, took the haldi milk glass and tried to make him drink. "He wasnt going to give up? Was he?" He moving around so that Swara cannot be successful in making him drink that milk.

He tried to move left. Swara blocked his way. He tried to move right. Swara blocked his way again. It kept going on, when Swara immediately and forcefully held his face by one hand so that he has to open his mouth, and made him forcefully drink that milk. Sanskaar wasnt prepared for that and was shocked.

Sanskaar: "Kya kar rahi ho tum yeh" with his irritated look "Swara, tum". Before he could say anything else, Swara fed him with rice and daal and he couldnt say anything else. The moment he tried to open his mouth to say anything, she used to feed him with more food. He couldnt do anything else but to follow her instructions right now and let her do whatever she wants too. Swara was enjoying his helplessness. If only he would have let her do it properly, she wouldn't have had to force him the way she has to right now.

Swara thought to herself "He is really a kid by heart. I thought I was the only one" She smiled at the thought and by then his food was already over. Now was the time for dressing.

Sanskaar was again going to say something to stop her but before that Swara interrupted and said "Chup. Ek dum chup. Main kar rahi hoon na. Mujhe karne do. Chup chap baithe raho. Kya allergy hai tumhe mujhse? Jab dekho tab bacho ki tarah muhjse bhatke rehte ho. Dont worry, tumhara koi faida nahi uthaungi main" giving him the angry, wifey wala expression.

Sanskaar: "Tum yeh kyun kar rahi hoon"

Swara: "Haq hai mera, patni hoon tumhari"

Sanskaar was shocked at Swara's reaction. "What did she just say? Why is she acting like that?" Swara looked at Sanskaar's face and thought, "how cute did he look when he is confused?". She came out of her rail of thoughts and started working on this dressing.

She started applying the ointment first. She kept asking Sanskaar, whether it was burning or not. He didn't respond. Swara looked at him and asked him again and then he said "Tumhi tair karlo na. Main bolu yah nahi. Khau ya nahi. Piu yah nahi. Tumhi toh decide kar rahi ho abhi. Chup rehene ke liye tumhi ne kaha hai mujhe". Swara couldnt help but smile at his innocence and nodded her head.

Swara, again trying to be careful while applying ointment, said "Sanskaar, tum kitne bade bondu ho tumhe pata hai?" Trying to blow air on his wound that it doesn't burn much when she is applying.

Sanskaar irritatingly "Nahi"

Swara continued, "Tumhare chehre ka yeh confused look dekh lena, tumhe pata chal jayega" Smiling again. Sanskaar actually did look at himself in the mirror and realized he actually did look like a bondu and ended up laughing. Swara started laughing with him as well.

Swara finally said, "Thodi si hi sahi, tumhare chehre par muskurahat toh aayi". Swara feeling relieved.

Sanskaar stopped laughing and started looking towards her. She was carefully trying to wrap the bandage around his wound making sure he doesn't feel any pressure.

She softly said "Sanskaar, tumne us din jab mujhe kapke pack karte hue dekha tha, tab main pack zarur kar rahi thi, lekin baadi jaane ke liye nahi. Uttara ko dene ke liye. Ussne laksh ke liye koi mannat mangi thi aur use woh kuch kapde donate karne the" Still smiling and carefully bandaging him. He was just looking at her mesmerizingly. "Par accha hua, ki main baadi gai aur mujhe kuch baaton ka ehsaas hua aur isiliye main wapas aayi" Sanskaar looked up in shock.

Swara continued "Mujhe yaad tha Sanskaar ki tumne mujhse kaha tha ki agar mujhe iss ghar main wapas aana hai, toh hamara rishta hi wajah hona chahiye. Main hamare rishte ke liye hi wapas aayi thi. Lekin jab wapas aakar, main Ragini ko ghar walo ke saath baatemizi karte hue dekha, toh mujhse raha nahi gaya aur maine use challenge de dia. Meri priority aaj bhi hamara yeh rishta aur tum ho. Lekin main iss parivaar ko nazarandaaz nahin kar sakti. Yeh mera bhi parivaar hai, jo mujhe tumhari wajah se mila hai. Jinse rishta mera tumhari wajah se he." She was smiling all along and finally finished bandaging his wound.

Swara before leaving said "Sanskaar, humne ek saath bohot kuch kia hai. Agar hum saath milkar Ragini se ladenge, toh hamare parivaar ko usse bacha payenge. Aur saath hi hamare rishte ko bhi ek mauka dekar uski manzil te kar sakte hai. Faisla tumhara hai. Main niche jaa rahi hoon. Kisi cheez ki zarurat ho to awaz laga dena. Aur ho sake toh koi kaam mat karna. Right hand pe koi pressure na aaye warna phirse dressing karna padega. Zakhm gehera hai."

With that she was about to leave with the empty plates and glass, when Sanskaar asked her to stop. She turned and he said "Tomorrow, sharp at 7am, be ready to plan an action" Swara was happily overwhelmed with him agreeing to work with her on this mission of saving his family which was after all THEIR family now. Swara responded saying "Yes BOSS" and gave him a salute with a wide smile and left the room. Sanskaar just smiled at her innocence and was all ready to give it back to Ragini and was also ready to work on their relationship which was more than a friendship now. Atleast thats how he saw Swara portray it.

~The End~

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Lots of Love,
Shonali

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow this was wonderful. I loved it.
Bhondu sanskaar 🤣. Kaash aisa show main bhi ho!!! It will certainly lighten the mood in the show where its daily slipping into more negativity🥱 I especially want that scene where she is feeding him forcefully😆 It reminded me of a similar cute scene between Madhu & RK in madhubala with Madhu going all Mr. India to feed her hubby



Loved the ending whr these two decide to unite against ragini. This is exactly what should happen on the show!


And you are always welcome Shona [>:D]
Edited by The.Lannister - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful 👏
Loved it.. So cute the scenes must have been 😃

And I want to see that scene in TV where Swara forcefully makes Sanskaar drinks the milk ⭐️😆

Awesome writing 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I have enjoyed it thoroughly! I wish something as shiny as this would come out as a silver line from the current dark cloud. It was so, soothing...and refreshing! Nice thought! Do write more!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Woww what a beautiful os and so simply explained by swara and thankfully sanskaar understood it too!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow!its so beautiful.
Kash aisa serial me ho jaye...
Aww!angry & ziddi kid z sanskar.
Swara manao him,tell him beautifuly.
Yes!2gethr with each othr thy cn sort out evrythng wheathr its ragini's matter or thr relatnshp..
Lovely updt shona.do write more.
P.s-ths feeding scn remind me of qh whr sanam was feeding ahil & mbeiej whr madhu was feeding rk.
Edited by LoveSonu2408 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow it's amazing story.
swara calling him bhondhu 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautifully put. i liked their entire dialogues during the bandaging. scene. you have put those through really well. i liked this OS. thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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just love the OS.. you know, so serene , straight to the point, and light hearted, Wo kehte hain naa, "Ekdum suljhaa hua". 😊
Do write more... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow!! so sweet os..hopefully swara will be able to manaofy stubborn sansku..well written shona 👏 😉 😳
Esha 😳

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