Swasan : Now or Never Part 1

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys ... till now I am a silent reader of forums, but after reading so many os & ff , I am inspired to write something about swasan...also I am tired of ongoing track of Ragini becoming head so this is a piece of my imagination if there is any mistake pls ignore that because it's my first creation.

So it's been a week since Ragini has taken over the command and two days after receiving divorce papers signed by sanskaar. Maheshwari house has become a living hell as all rights of speaking and doing things of own choice is only reserved to Ragini and Dadi. Rest r all puppets or servants of these both. After a quarrel between Ragini and Swara, swara was thrown out of house and is staying at Baadi.

She is seen crying over divorce papers after her confession of loving Sanskaar to her mom. How could he do this to me? After all we have gone through? He knew I was falsely blamed and arrested for crime I did not commit. Then too how can he act so childish and go away from me? He knew how much important it was for me to find the real culprit and prove my innocence. Then why such behavior? I know I acted idiotically and did not trust him and foolishly thought he is the culprit behind all this but still he could have at least given me chance to rectify all this mess I have created. But No, he wants to get rid of me!! I need to speak with him and clear this out. Now or Never.

Its 2.30 in the night when he gets a call. He is awake and crying and on verge of getting sick. He sees the caller ID. SWARA the only name that get bring so many emotions in a single second. He springs into action and picks up the phone thinking why is she calling at this hour? Is she ok? Has something happened to her or at baadi? "HELLO? SWARA? Are you ok? Sab thik toh hai? Tumne is samay call kiya? Kya hua? Batao..."

"SANSKAAR..."

Her voice is filled with pain. I can feel it. Is she in some danger? I have to do something.

" Swara, where are you? I am coming. Don't be afraid. Whatever it is, it will get over and everything will be alright. Just tell me where are you."

"Really? Will everything be alright?" she asked weakly.

She is sounding so vulnerable. What is wrong.

" Yes, of course. There is nothing that we both can't do. Now tell me where are you. At Baadi?"

His voice does magic on me. His concern, his readiness to help me, his way of consoling me, his support all this led my heart to ache even more. How can I do this to him? What was I thinking? Am I that blind to not see his love? I think Ragini and Dadi were right all this time, I was being unfair and brutal and selfish on him.

"Hello? Swara? Are you there?"

His voice broke the trans and answered, " Yes.. Yes I am here. At Baadi. On terrace."

Even before I could complete my sentence I heard car start and his consoling words, " Don't worry. I am coming." And a click on other end.

Now all could do was cry on my idiocy as no other thought or expression could express what I was feeling right now.

(PLEASE GIVE OPINIONS FREELY)

Part 2: the truth uploaded at below given link address:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4533232

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful one...
Pls continue soon. ..
If possible pls sent pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow wonderful
Eager for next part
Update soon dear
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Excellent start
Eagerly waiting for next part
Please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I like it, pls continue soon:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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waiting dear..pls continue and do PM me ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey tht was sooo nice. ...poor sanskaar. .he loves her so much tht despite his pain he is falling all over himself so tht he can help her if she needs him. Hope swara doesn't mess it up in her confession. .pls continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice. Perfect SwaSan- even if Sanskaar is hurting and broken, he will try to fix her if she needs him. His concern and love for her outweighs everything. Waiting for the next part!
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wow awesome start
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