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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh it was wonderful! Thank you for the double updates
I feel sad it ended; the characters were so well rounded and unique, ill miss them.
But i look forward to your next piece! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Merry Christmas to you dear.
It's a wonderful ending to a very beautiful story!



I got so connected to SK and Casper, I'm surely going to miss them.
You are a brilliant writer, I have become a fan of your work. Keep writing more whenever possible, and we are here waiting eagerly to read them.
Edited by arohijsp - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
What an absolutely mind blowing end to a wonderful story. Annapurna choose the one child closest to her heart over her husband. She was the one who started sanskars healing and her own redemption by contacting Singh. You have a knack of unveiling amazing plots and unexpected endings. So Laksh had more reasons that one to hang Swara for this...foremost being saving his own skin. Ragini and Laksh make a wonderful pair. I wonder if dp and Annapurna were always aware of this truth from the beginning. Or did they come to know later once the case bega. I feel dp would have always known. laksh would have come back scared to dp to clear the mess and hence the marrage to bind the eyewitness to protect his son at the cost of the hated daughter. I want to have some one shots from you on this. This one has immense potential for that...right from annapurna's point of view in family covering her son's crime, to her conscience calling for sanskars for him to get his peace knowing well that he would hand Laksh.
Finally all is well, almost. Swara sees him as home,,,,.and both are finally at a place where they land without fear of drowning or fear of their wings melting.

I wonder if Swara meets her real father ever...may be that could be a one shot. Though this ss has tons of potential for other os as well. We need some 'flights/wings of Icarus' like your winds of winter.

You are a mind blowing writer. One that I am a big fan of. Please don't stop writing, you have a beautiful skill an unlocking stories in a beautiful way. I looking forward to many more from you and books even.
Edited by foresight - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was fabulous as usual
I mean till the end you had kept me till the edge bitting my nails and my brother hitting me each time my fingers went in my mouth
I read the last 3 chapters in one go
I thought it may be Durga Prasad or Shekhar as the murderer could not think of Lakshya
Thanks for the pm
I am so very eagerly waiting for the next story
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Sakura, what to say, you just blew my mind today.

The court scene was really nicely done, with suspense, heartbreaks, revelations just at the nick of time. I always kmew that Ragini was behind all these, but you will make her a murderer. She destroyed herself in love here. She was strong enough to take the blame on herself and that I admire. I have no words for Laksh 🤢

The Sanskaar Annapurna scene was everything I wanted it to be. It was beautiful and nice to know that Annapurna began her redemption and Sanskaar began to forgive her. Reading the word Ma rather than Mrs.Maheswari was really nice.

And lastly the SwaSan scene. The innocent Swara and the playful Sanskaar . I missed them. They are flying of to their heaven and that interaction passed a beautiful and warm feeling in my heart.

Thank You Sakura for these beautiful SS you have written until now. ❤️

PS. I would have blabbered more but I have a test tomorrow and my mother is throwing daggers at me 🤣 . I really loved Vic here. Do bring him in more stories you write in future.And Thanks for the PM.
Merry Christmas
-Ahana
Edited by akanjli - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
omg what a twist my suspect was dp n ragini i thought laksh don't hv much idea abt d murder n he turns out d murderer i mean he claimed to love swara n framed her fr d murder which ws actuallay comitted by him if sk wudn't hv took dis case n proved swara innocent she cud hv even gt death sentence even when ragini took d blame to save him he went to swara n claimed to lv her i dnt knw wt to say fr such a disgusting person . Sk n ap scene was nice n i lkd d twist dat dis tym ap chose her son sk n casper finally turning into their trueself sanskar n swara i lvd dat . I hv a request plz write an epilogue if possible i really wanna read more i really wanna knw hw dp is feeling after his favorate son went to jail n he finally gt punishnent fr wht he did with sanskar n fr his wrongdoing n i also wnt to knw who is swaras father the story is amazing n i am crazy fr ur stories all of ur stories r my favourate i really lvd all of ur stories n waiting fr nxt one
Edited by Sanya17 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am so embarrassed as I've firstly not finished reading this wonderful story and secondly not commented even on parts I've read so am reserving! It's my X mas day present to open and enjoy and read :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
well i never thought it could be lakshya
I though may be DP or Ap had some hand but not lakshya
will be waiting for more from you
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Posted: 9 years ago
First of all , Merry Christmas to you , Saku!! 🤗
and yeah, what a twisty twist!! criminal himself was fighting for his case and had guys to come in front of Swara. ugh!! but if he is responsible ,I guess Raagini is equally responsible too.. I agree with SK here about justice...
And I agree with Sk again. 😃 kinda complicated Annapooraa... despite loving Sanskaar, blinded in urge to make family complete, she did utterly wrong, atleast now she gathered the courage to do right. finally SK would be relieved after realising that she always loved her. well, no matter what they can't come on previous equations, at least they can find peace specially SK. so him callng maa. :) So,all and all, it was nice idea of Annapoornaa of calling him for case. but still I couldn't understand she was comparing her act with Swara's. Err!!!
yippie,Finally Icarus got final destinal of fight..
just love how they made each other understand to let go past and talk to their mothers. I wonder what was the Shekhar's reaction after listening truth. well, can't hope good from him..
and Vic did the good job again.. :))
oye!! why SK thought she won't come with him!??! and that reply, human hosepipes 🤣 SK is SK!! haha!!
and the confession of Swara same in SK's style was superb. truly heartwarming. I noticed, they both never forgot to mention about each other eyes. :D well, love the whole interaction of SK and Casper in last part from beginning to end... finally,Swara and Sanskaar..
Saku , this thrilling and enjoyable journey of SK and Casper turning into Sanskaar and Swara is totally worth of reading. It is really my pleasure to read. :) and well, the usual dialogue isn't need now, so in the end all I have to say, come soon Saku. 🤗 gonna miss you and your story. 😊 by the way dear, nowadays winter is so chilling and spring is needed. 😉 Isn't it!!! 😃



Edited by TRPS - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice..
Loved both the parts..

Lucky murdered..
OMG...
That was a shock!!!

SwaSan together finally..

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