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Posted: 9 years ago
i knw sakura u always wrap up ur stories well i hv full faith on u n i am madly addicted to ur story for perfection because there is nothing unnecessary everything is nt only perfect but also realistic
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sakura 🤗 How do you manage to come up with such awesome plots?? I'm speechless!!
SK being color blind and the extent of AP's betrayal was not something I guessed. DP is a cruel and vile person. Trying to destroy his own flesh and blood. I hate the Maheshwaris they are so twisted and opportunistic. I hope they pay for their deeds.

I loved the Swasan scene. The interplay between his fingers and her smooth skin ☺️ I'm so glad that he opened up to her. I'm sure she will help SK make his peace with Sanskaar just like he is helping her achieve her freedom.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sakura you have a special knack for suspense .
Like swara even we don't want this limbo to end.
I read the part 11 twice and thrice still am not able to pin point as to why DP is involved.
Am sure swara is suffering here coz of raginis loathing, and laksh.
Ragini because she took away laksh from her.
Laksh coz he had the audacity of going against DP, if DP doesn't like being forced to accept swara.
Then I feel he had been hand in glove with ragini just to prove laksh wrong, well I might be wrong also.
But guess karney mein kya harj hai.
He can't afford to lose laksh and knows to manipulate his son well.
If not how would laksh and ragini end up being married.

Swaras mehendi darker and smudged, ragini allergic to mehendi.
If its smudged then who or wat swara held?.

Will Annapurna ever go against her husband and wat role uttara has to play in all this am excited to know.

Another baffling episode.👏
Sanskaar color blind if he can't differentiate between red and blue ,how is that clue abt mehendi going to help him.

Swara now knows that she is not unwanted, am glad.
Coz being unwanted that feeling is worst just like betrayal by loved ones.😲😲
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bwvianna

Fantastic update as usual.! Loved how you described Annapurna's thoughts, it was so heartbreakingly beautiful. I so loved it. And that Sanskaar entry into the house, his own house. Brilliant twist there.!

The SanGini conversation even though it was short was pretty entertaining. :) I was grinning when he was like 'won't you take my blessings?' And then 'khush raho' as long as you can'. I can so imagine Ragini's sudden fear here.

Finally we get the entire history between the Maheshwaris. It was brilliant. You know what struck me as complete brilliance is how you have portrayed Annapurna. She knew that Sanskaar wasn't her child but that love she has for him even after backstabbing him is sheer brilliance. Motherhood! And Sanskaar is Durga Prasad's kid but he hates him to the core just because of his ego. Fantastic contrast shown!

Loved this update and awaiting next with greater anticipation. :) Update soon.

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Completely forgot to mention that I adored the way you started out that scene between Swara and Sanskaar. I mean they say 'I love you' to each other in such a matter of fact way, its so cool. They just say it during an intense unrelated conversation and it is so not a declaration of love you expect. ;) Loving this story.

-V

Hey V,
I'm glad you felt for Annapurna and loved the twist there. Of cause Ragini was afraid...I wrote that out from my own frustration about the way the original Ragini is going these days...
Yes that is the point of the whole history...Annapurna loves him, it was just a momentary betrayal, but for Durga is ego is much more important...evil he is.
Thanks a lot dear. I will update shortly.
Ah yes, they are too comfortable with each other so saying I love you doesn't need special occasions😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: foresight

Beautiful update. It was enough to make me want to log in from phone on holiday!! I had wondered if sanskar was adopted initially only to be pushed aside when real kids arrived, but he turned out to be Durga Prasad's child. Dp seemed to have special affinity for parents who want to focus their kids into plot as per their convenience. Much like his client in the case and I feel much like Shekhar. I wonder if the hatred is driving him so much that he is choosing such cases specifically to win them and hit back at being forced to accept sanskar. Finally Swara knows his story...including his guilt and past love. More importantly she has realised he loves her hope she fights for herself now instead of finding ways to et death penalty. Colour blind was a interesting twist. I wonder if Swara will be able to locate that old file somehow. Finally sanskar is obsessed by her mehendi. I guess we know why it was dark. But the clever girl touched vansh's killer as well. Good job. I wonder if Vansh was hired to distract Swara away from lakh to clear the way for Ragini. He doesn't seem to be pursuing his profession actively so how was he paying for himself?

Thank you so much Sapna dear!
Oh, that might exactly be the reason going in Durga's bald head at the moment...so true...
Yes color blind theory was the least guessable here. You're on to some gold on Vansh...I'm not saying anything though.
Will be updating in a moment, all your confusions will be cleared.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: swa291

omg so much information my mind is still grasping all the facts 😊

DP and Annapurna turned out to be perfect match for eachother

Thanks dear, yes it is a lot to take. Ah, of cause they are the perfect couple of evil and stupidity😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Nice part..

poor Sanskar..
every person he trust breaks him in pieces..

Feel bad for him..
Sanskar found a way to bring his Casper out..
👏

Continue soon..
eagerly waiting for the next part...

Thanks dear,
I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Will update soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: manishasatpathy

amazing update!!!
finally sk's truth is out, i am glad
i have a feeling the culprit is either ragini or her father, i am waiting for the truth to be out and more than anything i am waiting to see laksh's face when truth is out
plzzz update soon
waiting
:)

Hey dear,
Nice to here from you again, thank a lot.
Yes, the truth is out now and the culprit will be caught soon too. Lakshya's face...oh, yes, that would be worth watching.
I will update shortly😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anisimluv

Sakura we haven't talked earlier because I use my phone for reading n comment n all tales a lot of data :p but i m soo lucky to read this story. Ur writing is so brillent, like i am actuall repeat reading the chapters. I m in luv with this story, sk casper N not to forget u.

Plz keep writing and do pm me for ur nxt ff. N this one is keeping me hooked.

N the reason that sk said that he knw how he feels to be unwanted was that he was an unwanted child himself.
But i did not understand why did he save AP whenDP was asking her abput telling the will to him. He should not have saved her. And the thing he said that a women can't go against her husband even for herself was coz he himself faced this with AP.
Seriously brilliant story.
Love
Simran tehlan

Hey Simran...
I use my phone most of the time too and have the same worry so I understand perfectly dear, it's alright. What makes me super happy is that you decided to comment on this, it is nice to hear from silent readers and know their view😊
Thank you so much for the lovely words, you made my day by saying that.
No, no, he wasn't saving her, he was saying the truth it had been Uttara who called that day and told him about the will, not Annapurna. I'm glad you're enjoying the story dear, will surely tell you about my next when I start on it.
love,
Sakura
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: arohijsp

Beautiful update as always dear.
Being a mother my self, I really felt for AP and Sanskaar's bond, although she didn't give birth to him. I feel his betrayal, he has lost everything! DP is so evil he can use his own flesh and blood for his own benefits.
SK , I love his grand entry to MM. No wonder Ragini had to withdraw her complaint or else the real owner of MM can throw them out?
I love SK's love confession, so he's color blind! Now all their past is revealed! Looking forward to the the murder mystery now. Somebody framed Swara for sure.


Thanks Arohi,
Yes...the pain of a mother and the suffering of her child was the spot light in that chapter. Ragini is afraid for sure and Durga is evil. I'm glad you loved the way the twist shaped up.
Oh, that mystery will be out soon. Keep reading and keep guessing😊

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