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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: akanjli

I fear this story is reaching its end. But all good things end. 😭

Comimg to the update, this was heartbreaking, enthralling all at once and even after being a sad one you definitely made me smile towards the end.

The SwaSan scene was cute. His confession, the palm caressing , everything was written so nicely. I loved the fact that Annapurna had loved Sanskaar truly, even if she betrayed him later, she loved him and that is nice.

" That familiar footfall, almost as if conjured from her fraught mind in order to get a moment of illusionary
happiness, jerked her out of her trance and broke her connection with her past self. Annapurna opened her eyes slowly and turned in a swift motion, the aarati thali still in her hand, the lamp casting a soft glow on her face. "
Oh this one reminded me of Kabhi khushi Kabhi gham.

" What else should I do when they've put the woman I love behind bars? "
This line made me feel giddy and the fact that they bicker like an old married couple is so cute. 😉

"He closes his eyes, his finger still tracing a pattern against the backside of my palm.
I love your mehendi,' he says softly after a moment. Its traces are still there... so dark... "
I don't know why but I find this scene cute. Can Someone give Cvs the idea with Swara glaring at Sanskaar and him tracing patterns in her hand , blabbering about how beautiful they look. It will be nice.

Dp should go to jail. That cold blooded murder 🤢 . And the last line, Good Job Casper was so sweet.

Well everything you write, I find it sweet. Anyways will be waiting for your next update tomorrow.

Love
- Ahana

PS. I am still busy brainstorming about the murderer and Who Vansh is 😕 . Nicely done Sakura 😃

Hey Ahana...
Yes dear...we are reaching the end. You know all my SS are limited chapter ones.
I'm glad you felt for Annapurna that was my motive here. Ah, K3G of cause the vibe is there...but I did not really think of it when I write that. But now you say it...I see the similarity 😳
SwaSan are so straight forward here, and yes I have a thing for not very intimate yet very heart touching scenes. The palm caressing was one of the sort. Not much but in a sense enough!
I don't know about CVs but they do give us amazing SwaSan scenes these days...
Thank you so much dear. Yes I will update tomorrow!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Superb chapter!!! So sharp and opens a whole Pandora's box!!!

The Maheshwaris!!! Ohso awful ppl!!! I can understand annapurna betraying sk not being his real mom but dp hating his own blood to the point to destroy him completely. SK's hatred fr such ppl seems mild to me now...and his love fr swara so intense he has fully opened his heart to her.

Oohh my sk is soo smart...hez more a detective than a lawyer...catching on clues super fast!! Im liking the whodunnit style of this story...cant wait fr the truth to come out and now waiting eagerly fr the next trial saku...do post soon.

Hv rectified the pm prb now...u can msg me next time!


Hey Tasneem,
Annapurna has a heart of a mother at least while Durga is just heartless. SK can't turn as evil as he is ever I guess.
SK is nothing if not smart. Thanks a lot😃
I'll update soon dear!
PS: will try to PM you next time then😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome updates !!!!!
Loved swasan 😉
Hope we get more intense swasan scenes !!!! 😳
Do update next part asap
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: manasie23

Brilliant update Saku sorry no time to comment in detail but I seriously loved it...
Also just one doubt in the prologue you mentioned she was convicted for murdering her love... So who exactly was vanshvansh?!

It's alright dear, I understand. You took time to comment that is enough at the moment. Thanks a lot!
About your doubt, that's what everyone thought...I mean at the start everyone said she was double dating the victim and Lakshya right? That's why I wrote her love...it's not the truth😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jerrenkarthi

wait annapurna is not his real mom but she loved him isn't, thats why she subsonsiously know sanskaar was the one hearing the footsteps but durgaprasad hate him for the property is he also his son how can a father hate his son

She is a mother after all and he is a heartless man...not all fathers love their children dear...you and I are few of the lucky ones😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanya17

wow that was one amazing update dp i dnt knw wht to say i hope u will give him the punishment he deserve evil is the word fr him. I lvd this story a lot especially the line in part 7 u shouldn't give the power to break u or mend u . It really have deep meaning

Hi Sanya...
Keep faith in me I always wrap my stories well, so it will be a perfect ending!
Thank you...it is the truth BTW, you should never give that power to anyone😊
love,
Sakura
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .FairyDust.

Thanks so much for the double updates Saku!

Coming to these last three updates, they were soo good!
So Sanskaar is trying to protect Swara by keeping her away 😭Ah such things always touch a chord in me. I hate it when one of the two lovebirds feigns indifference and pushes the other away for their own betterment. But I guess even THAT is a form of love, so I'm a sucker for all this. 😆
And the lockup scene, ah so Sanskaar too finally admits out loud that she is his lady-love I LOVED the whole talk between them and I did not expect Sanskaar to blurt out everything to Swara so early but I'm so glad he did and there are (hopefully) no secrets between them now. It's such a relief to know Sanskaar's history and I'm glad we know the role Kavitha had to play too. One mystery down.
And those teeny scenes you gave us of SwaSan are gold to me! I've read them umpteen times since yesterday.
And OMG I knew it! Sanskaar is Durga Prasad's illegitimate child, I had a feeling this would be the case from the time you had revealed DP is his dad. And I thought Annapurna was the villain, but nah she seems like a confused helpless soul to me, atleast for now. No comments on Ragini as we are yet to know THIS one.
Eagerly waiting for your next update, please update soon ^_^

Hi Yukthi!
I have a soft spot for such lovers too...I mean it's so irksome to watch them pretending not to care but still it is touching. Silly me I know😆
Sanskar wanted to come clean I guess or else Casper would have used this to justify her silence I mean something like you have secrets I have secrets kind of thing...that's why he said everything. And yes his truth his out, finally.😊
I'm so happy that you love my SwaSan scenes, and reread them..whoa! I'm in seventh heaven!
Yes Annapurna is a confused soul nothing more but Ragini is a different case.
I'll update soon dear, thanks a super ton!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: chemgirl

This just left me speechless...dp is so cruel...how can someone do that to their own kid?? Poor kavi...they killed her in cold blood...its so touching..poor sk...now wonder he fears losing his casper.

But why is ragini lying?? Who was Vansh?? What did Swara have to do with him??

Yes I did justify SK's fear didn't I? Of cause Durga is evil personified...You'll know the rest soon dear. Keep reading and guessing😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: TRPS

read all last 3 parts now...
sigh!! SK!!
take a bow!! after suffering from so much hatred, betrayals he didn't lose hope to live, emerged as a true fighter and winner. now I am getting why was he so apprehensive to accept his feelings for Swara. never felt so much respect for a fictional character. but he stole my heart.
I just love how Swara has immense believe ,faith and love for him. without knowing cause, she felt hatred for Durga prasad. *pat on the back*
SK and Swara both got disgusting and cruel and heartless persons in name of parents. no words for their so called parents. selfish people.. ugh!! ..
atleast now SK and Swara have each other..
and Vic is indeed a true friend... I adore their friendship.
love to see SK fully in action.
and him brushing
the top of Raagini's veiled head. Kush
raho , as long as you can,' . 🤣 🤣 I am sure Raagini definitely had felt chill through her spine. by the way, one query how much elder SK is from Lakshya?? :P
and this para...:))
"What else should I do when they've
put the woman I love behind bars?"... don't give up.
finally!!!
and it means that it was already decided that Raagini will be daughter in law of the house, quite similar to Annapoornaa!! all by DP or with someone???
hope, everything goes well with SK and his Casper now onwards.
Saku,you really know how to keep Suspense till the end. eagerly waiting for the next part.

Oh yes SK is an admirable character but it is test of fires that make fine steel dear...and also fire makes you afraid to get burned again...that is true in his case...
Their pain is so much similar that makes their bond stronger...
Vic...I adore him too.
Ragini and SK are kind of like cat and mouse😆
Sk would be three or four years older I guess...that's how I imagined it.
No, he was merely remarking how well Ragini suits her role.
Thank you so much dear...you just made me so happy.
I will update soon!😊

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