I fear this story is reaching its end. But all good things end. ðŸ˜
Comimg to the update, this was heartbreaking, enthralling all at once and even after being a sad one you definitely made me smile towards the end.
The SwaSan scene was cute. His confession, the palm caressing , everything was written so nicely. I loved the fact that Annapurna had loved Sanskaar truly, even if she betrayed him later, she loved him and that is nice.
" That familiar footfall, almost as if conjured from her fraught mind in order to get a moment of illusionary
happiness, jerked her out of her trance and broke her connection with her past self. Annapurna opened her eyes slowly and turned in a swift motion, the aarati thali still in her hand, the lamp casting a soft glow on her face. "
Oh this one reminded me of Kabhi khushi Kabhi gham.
" What else should I do when they've put the woman I love behind bars? "
This line made me feel giddy and the fact that they bicker like an old married couple is so cute. 😉
"He closes his eyes, his finger still tracing a pattern against the backside of my palm.
I love your mehendi,' he says softly after a moment. Its traces are still there... so dark... "
I don't know why but I find this scene cute. Can Someone give Cvs the idea with Swara glaring at Sanskaar and him tracing patterns in her hand , blabbering about how beautiful they look. It will be nice.
Dp should go to jail. That cold blooded murder 🤢 . And the last line, Good Job Casper was so sweet.
Well everything you write, I find it sweet. Anyways will be waiting for your next update tomorrow.
Love
- Ahana
PS. I am still busy brainstorming about the murderer and Who Vansh is 😕 . Nicely done Sakura 😃