Icarus SwaSan SS Complete - Page 41

Saku
the scene between annapurna and Sk was superb
ah i was so happy reading sk's words for ragini
Seriously i hate ragini
And swasan scene was awesome
so finally..sk's secrets are out in front of swara
His casper understands him so much... 😊
So sk got the clue!!!!!whoz d murderer????
Wow...
Super excited for next update
lots of love
Simi 😃

I fear this story is reaching its end. But all good things end. 😭

Comimg to the update, this was heartbreaking, enthralling all at once and even after being a sad one you definitely made me smile towards the end.

The SwaSan scene was cute. His confession, the palm caressing , everything was written so nicely. I loved the fact that Annapurna had loved Sanskaar truly, even if she betrayed him later, she loved him and that is nice.

" That familiar footfall, almost as if conjured from her fraught mind in order to get a moment of illusionary
happiness, jerked her out of her trance and broke her connection with her past self. Annapurna opened her eyes slowly and turned in a swift motion, the aarati thali still in her hand, the lamp casting a soft glow on her face. "
Oh this one reminded me of Kabhi khushi Kabhi gham.

" What else should I do when they've put the woman I love behind bars? "
This line made me feel giddy and the fact that they bicker like an old married couple is so cute. 😉

"He closes his eyes, his finger still tracing a pattern against the backside of my palm.
I love your mehendi,' he says softly after a moment. Its traces are still there... so dark... "
I don't know why but I find this scene cute. Can Someone give Cvs the idea with Swara glaring at Sanskaar and him tracing patterns in her hand , blabbering about how beautiful they look. It will be nice.

Dp should go to jail. That cold blooded murder 🤢 . And the last line, Good Job Casper was so sweet.

Well everything you write, I find it sweet. Anyways will be waiting for your next update tomorrow.

Love
- Ahana

PS. I am still busy brainstorming about the murderer and Who Vansh is 😕 . Nicely done Sakura 😃

Superb chapter!!! So sharp and opens a whole Pandora's box!!!

Brilliant update Saku sorry no time to comment in detail but I seriously loved it...
Also just one doubt in the prologue you mentioned she was convicted for murdering her love... So who exactly was vanshvansh?!

wait annapurna is not his real mom but she loved him isn't, thats why she subsonsiously know sanskaar was the one hearing the footsteps but durgaprasad hate him for the property is he also his son how can a father hate his son

wow that was one amazing update dp i dnt knw wht to say i hope u will give him the punishment he deserve evil is the word fr him. I lvd this story a lot especially the line in part 7 u shouldn't give the power to break u or mend u . It really have deep meaning

This just left me speechless...dp is so cruel...how can someone do that to their own kid?? Poor kavi...they killed her in cold blood...its so touching..poor sk...now wonder he fears losing his casper.

But why is ragini lying?? Who was Vansh?? What did Swara have to do with him??

read all last 3 parts now...
sigh!! SK!!
take a bow!! after suffering from so much hatred, betrayals he didn't lose hope to live, emerged as a true fighter and winner. now I am getting why was he so apprehensive to accept his feelings for Swara. never felt so much respect for a fictional character. but he stole my heart.
I just love how Swara has immense believe ,faith and love for him. without knowing cause, she felt hatred for Durga prasad. *pat on the back*
SK and Swara both got disgusting and cruel and heartless persons in name of parents. no words for their so called parents. selfish people.. ugh!! ..
atleast now SK and Swara have each other..
and Vic is indeed a true friend... I adore their friendship.
love to see SK fully in action.
and him brushing
the top of Raagini's veiled head. Kush
raho , as long as you can,' . 🤣 🤣 I am sure Raagini definitely had felt chill through her spine. by the way, one query how much elder SK is from Lakshya?? :P
and this para...:))
"What else should I do when they've
put the woman I love behind bars?"... don't give up.
finally!!!
and it means that it was already decided that Raagini will be daughter in law of the house, quite similar to Annapoornaa!! all by DP or with someone???
hope, everything goes well with SK and his Casper now onwards.
Saku,you really know how to keep Suspense till the end. eagerly waiting for the next part.

Fantastic update as usual.! Loved how you described Annapurna's thoughts, it was so heartbreakingly beautiful. I so loved it. And that Sanskaar entry into the house, his own house. Brilliant twist there.!

The SanGini conversation even though it was short was pretty entertaining. :) I was grinning when he was like 'won't you take my blessings?' And then 'khush raho' as long as you can'. I can so imagine Ragini's sudden fear here.

Finally we get the entire history between the Maheshwaris. It was brilliant. You know what struck me as complete brilliance is how you have portrayed Annapurna. She knew that Sanskaar wasn't her child but that love she has for him even after backstabbing him is sheer brilliance. Motherhood! And Sanskaar is Durga Prasad's kid but he hates him to the core just because of his ego. Fantastic contrast shown!

Loved this update and awaiting next with greater anticipation. :) Update soon.

Edited:

Completely forgot to mention that I adored the way you started out that scene between Swara and Sanskaar. I mean they say 'I love you' to each other in such a matter of fact way, its so cool. They just say it during an intense unrelated conversation and it is so not a declaration of love you expect. ;) Loving this story.

-V