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Posted: 9 years ago
yooohooo..
yup me is making her grand entry..

Chapter 4:

Saku..
I am a big Perry Mason fangirl. and this chapter reminded me SO much of him.
Sharp, Snap, Smart, Sarcastic and deadly..
Vic was Paul the detective.. though Paul happens to be languid and this one is a smart alec.

So so loved the courtroom scene. the cross examination, objections and the way our guy mauled everyone in his way.
Bravo
wonderfully penned down Saku.👍🏼

Edit: I yam still commenting😳. in a moment.

Edited by Banjaaran... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Watta Christmas treat! !! Double bonanza! !! How did v get so lucky!!
The storm has truly unleashed!! I was so happy at SK's initial decision but the enemy spoiled it all!!! Ugh Laksh is pretty disgusting. ... swara was truly cursed...no one loved her unconditionally n now tht sk does they dont intend to follow it through

No words fr this ragini!!! Poor swara she just goes to her mom fr some comfort and ragini gets her arrested!!! Shucks i could kill ragini...hope thts wht sk does to her...strangle her!!!!

Vic is one perceptive chap...but thts why he is sk's partner m sure. ...no innocent would do fr working with the likes of sk...

So its finally out...durga prasad is his dad not uncle...so thr is no ram prasad in this story?? And why was he the unwanted child?? I really cant wait to hv their whole past unfolded...so many questions!

Oh heavens...how will sk get swara out of jail again ... m sooo anxious fr the next update. .will v get some more treats bfr Christmas? ?

Dunno whts wrong with my buddy list...ill check if u r blocked by any chance...thanks fr trying tho saku
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Posted: 9 years ago
Saku...
Lots of love for 2 updates in one day...
So many things happened...i felt happiness,sad,angry...all emotions ..in this 2 chapters
ahh..ragini...what a woman..and lakshay...such a jerk .
Swara has to bear everything again???.
Plz SK save her n protect her by keeping near you...
Excited for next update
love
Simi 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
looks like ragini dont know about sk it is going to be fun when he introudeced himself as a son of the maheshwari house to ragini waiting for the next update please pm me dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
woh!! two really amazing parts. sanskar back now, forced to push swara away..led by his fear he fell into the trap and took swara down with him. now he needs to get himself back in the game, not just as SK but i feel with his whole self and counter the rest of the maheshwari. brilliant brilliant updates saku 🤗 🤗 i feel that sanskar now will be in full form. he loves swara deeply and she has been targeted, he is not going to stop and he is going to be willing to annihilate all those who hurt her. so will we get his back story in the next one as he goes home? yippee!
by the way...loved your writing...some real gems in there..."i think it already rained" 😆 😆
Edited by foresight - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing story read all the recent three parts in one go,enjoyed it a lot Sakura👏👏👏
Continue soon😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow two updates!! How we got so lucky!? Btw Thnx :)
So SK's secret is revealing slowly. Won't ask you anything coz I know you will reveal when time comes.
SK & his Casper <3 He is still trying to keep her away from him even though he knows how she feel & his feelings as well. Okay can understand he is trying to protect her Bt she will be safe if she is with him. And it's proven now, just some time away from him and she is framed!! Vic is right.
You forgot to PM Bt thank goodness I was bhatkayoing here and thnx for double updates.
Though got double updates still can't wait for the next one. You made me greedy ;)
And lots of love & hugs for you :)
PS: Can't wait for the meeting of SK & Ragini. Gosh she is going to regret soon. SK is all ready to unleash himself & save his Casper. Bt how? Lets just wait!
Edited by Nupur_5 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
And i was thinking i cant hate anyone more than Ragini you made me hate Ragini even more😡😡.. And Swara am not saying anything on her... My dear dear SK😭 He has to fight DP and also swara's foolishness and stubbornness...

So Sanskar is DPs son waiting to know what is their back story and what happened between them... from everything till now he is neither goo nor innocent..

And i think Lakshya is nothing more than a weak puppet being played by someone ... Waiting to know who is puppeteer DP or Ragini or someone else
Edited by swa291 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Double treat! 😃 You have just spread your good spirits to me by posting these two chapters. Was eagerly awaiting them 😊 Finally Swara knows that Sanskaar is a Maheshwari. I have been dying to ask: Who have you based Vikram on?? I love this guy with every update. Please do not let him be the mole. Seriously this guy is amazing! Love him almost as much as Sanskaar. Every serious guy has this rakish best friend and Vic is definitely fulfilling his part. 😆 😉

Coming back to the chapters. Some areas that made me laugh out loud were when Sanskaar is saying I know how to fight DP because I know what goes on in his BALD head 🤣 and the part where Vic is saying that you have proved that you are Sanskaar, son of MENTAL MAHESHWARIS. 🤣

The victim's apartment inspection scene, the photographic chip and photo frame mystery, its all making my anticipation grow more and more. Lakshya wala scene, SwaSan scene, Sanskaar and Vikram scene, everything is going in such an awesome flow that I just don't want to stop reading! The way Swara caught on to Sanskaar's past tense usage and the sword and shield reference. I am loving this story more and more.

I cannot wait for the SanGini confrontation. Really looking forward to it. Please please do not make us wait until after New Year for another update.! Waiting eagerly.

-V

P.S.: Are you writing a spring story? I read someone state so in a comment. Please let me know too.
Edited by bwvianna - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ahaha double update Great Saku 🤗
Full emotion packed updates
For a moment SK was walking towards her light. And suddenly closed that door poor Swara 😭
Maheshwari's no word for them just disgusting Ragini she ll never change
Waiting for next update Saku

Love Jami

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