In Sickness and in Health ||A SwaSan OS||

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Thanks all of you for reading and liking my piece :)

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Very well written Sree---

and I loved the portrayal of understanding and trust between them.

he sleeps away from her coz he does not wanna disturb her.:))

lovely piece..had a meant to be love story kinda feel to it.

love--

medha.

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Originally posted by: medhasankar
Very well written Sree---
and I loved the portrayal of understanding and trust between them.
he sleeps away from her coz he does not wanna disturb her.:))

lovely piece..had a meant to be love story kinda feel to it.

love--
medha.

Thank you so much, Medha. It means a lot coming from an amazing writer like you.

Thank you so much for the lovely comment.

Love

Sree

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Originally posted by: sneharay
Its Wonderful.. 👏

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Something diff, beautiful. Thanks. :)

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Such a beautiful OS! I loved the bond between Swara and Sanskaar, how Swara was able to feel and decipher Sanskaar' emotions and how she comforted him! You wrote their emotions so beautifully and they came across so clearly!

Please write more in the future!

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Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
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I'm madly busy at the moment sis, I promise to read and unres at the wknd, hope that's ok, love ya xxx
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It's half past midnight and read this and had to comment. Such a lovely read. I loved the connect between them and the perfect understanding they share as a married couple, in total and complete love with each other. I love how Swara knew something was wrong and he was trying to protect her from it. The sleeping far from her was quaintly poignant and I loved Swara's wife avatar here- comforting him and making him lean on her too like she does on him. Their love and total soul connect shone through and I'll sleep happy having read this! Nice work my sweet, hope you'll write more!!

Shru Di 🤗

I'm glad you found time to read and comment. Thank you so much for such a lovely and encouraging comment. It means a lot coming from such an amazing writer like you. My aim of writing this piece was basically to bring about the mutual trust and the fact that even Sanskar sometimes need a shoulder to lean on.

Thanks once again. Love you <3

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Originally posted by: SmileMore
Something diff, beautiful. Thanks. :)

Thanks, glad you liked it :)

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Originally posted by: anu91
Awesome!!!

Thank you :)

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Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
Such a beautiful OS! I loved the bond between Swara and Sanskaar, how Swara was able to feel and decipher Sanskaar' emotions and how she comforted him! You wrote their emotions so beautifully and they came across so clearly!
Please write more in the future!

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Your comment means a lot. I'm happy that I could bring out the emotions.

Will definitely try and write more

Thanks dear :)

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