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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg..awsum..i was too Blushing while reading..yaar jaldi se yej Shaadi Waadi complete karo aur jaldi se SwaSan ko gjar bhejo..i too cnt wait anymore ( Hope u got wat i mean 😆 ) jaldi se..n Continue soon this tym n big one plz
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Originally posted by: anu012

Superb story dear
loved it
read only 11 chptrs till now & all chptrs (1-11) r Awsome ... beautifully written
keep writting

thnks for pm sujay

Thanks a lot. Glad to know that u liked the previous chapters. Please read further and let me know ur suggestions.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

My friend,

First of all sorry for my late reply.
This update awesome. And it was a romantic update.
The swasan romance was really nice.
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm

It's ok mate. We get busy at times but it's all right. Thanks for ur appreciation and I will surely update the next part soon.
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Originally posted by: Goldie93

Omg..awsum..i was too Blushing while reading..yaar jaldi se yej Shaadi Waadi complete karo aur jaldi se SwaSan ko gjar bhejo..i too cnt wait anymore ( Hope u got wat i mean 😆 ) jaldi se..n Continue soon this tym n big one plz

Thanks a lot. And yes I know yeh shaadi ka drama zyada mazedaar nahi hai but tolerate it for 2 more parts sorry one and a half pary uske baad sirf SWASAN hi SWASAN (I got what u meant) and because of my exams I could not write a big but as now it's finally over i'll write a big one. Thanks again.
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Loved the entire update.

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superb chptrs dear
loved it
cont soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anu012

superb chptrs dear
loved it
cont soon

thnks for pm sujay

Thanks a lot and I'll try updating as soon as possible.
Really thanks to Sujay for PMs he had sent.
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Chapter-19

Finally they slept in each other's embrace. In the morning they had their daily routine and finally went to take Aakash along with them to the hotel to start the functions.

IN THE HALL

As usual nobody was awake except for Dp and Ap and now it was their duty to wake up everyone. Sanskar went to wake up Raksh, Laksh and Ragini as he had not spent time with Raksh since days. Aakash went to Uttara. Swara went to Pari and Aadarsh. They decided the dress code to be green, purple, violet or pink, white or light red.

Finally everybody was awake by 12 and ready by 2pm. Dp and Ap, Laksh, Ragini, Sanskar and Raksh, Aakash Pari and Aadarsh came down as the function was supposed to start by 2:15pm as per the muhurat by Panditji.

Pari by mistake spilled water on Swara's dress. So Swara had to change her dress which Pari gave her. Sanskar was not aware of it as Sanskar was with Raksh. Everybody was waiting for Uttara and Swara to come down. Sanskar was very busy with Raksh that when Pari told the reason for Swara coming late he didn't hear it and was finding her everywhere in the hall. The guests came. And finally the awaited moment for the arrival of the bride and a partner came. Swara was like the Maid Of Honor and she was the one to have brought Uttara down. Sanskar went near the staircase and so did Aakash. They went nearer with their mouths open.

Uttara was wearing a very beautiful lehenga.

https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/236x/38/43/11/384311adc6750f2041c1bd7acd63ee61.jpg(imagine her in this dress)

Swara held her hand as it was a custom that there should be someone to bring the bride down holding her hand. Swara was looking too damn beautiful. Sanskar was awestruck to see her. He felt like she is just an angel coming down.

Swara's Dress

http://www.voonik.com/recommendations/lhengha-choli-red-x1-krishna-fashion007-lhengha-choli-red-x1--3

( I was not able to add this one so added the link. if interested you can go through the link)

Sanskar just kept on staring her. Swara, by gestures, asked him what was he staring at. Sanskar just winked and Swara understood. Swara took Uttara to the place she was supposed to sit and Aakash and Sanskar went to Aakash's place where he was supposed to sit. It was like they were seated in front of each other on different couches but there was a distance of a path between them. Sanskar again and again took glances of Swara. He so very wanted to spend time with her alone. Swara saw his expressions and blushed but tried hard to not to show to show it. Laksh and Ragini decided to tease them.

They went to the stage and took two mics.

La- Hey everybody! Aaj meri behen ki mehendi hai...

Ra- Great information Laksh ji. Main baat yeh hai ki abhi jo love birds ek doorse ko stare kar rahi hain ya ek doosre ke saath time spend karna chahti hain please control your emotions (Sanskar and Swara understood that they were referring to them and Swara blushed whereas Sanskar did not pay any heed to them and stared at her.) because we are about to start a game.

La- Great Ragini! Tumhari information mere se zyada acchi nahi thi. Par chodo. So now let me explain the game. There will be 2 teams" One of the bride and the other of the groom. We will ask each and every member to come from each team, might be as a couple or solo and we will play any music of our choice. They will have to dance on it as per their choice. And we can also bring couple of two teams together. You can say it is an extempore dance. So ready everyone?

They all just nodded.

Ra- But before we start with it we will have to distribute the teams equally. So me and Laksh ji will be on Aakash's side and Pari bhabhi and Aadarsh bhaiya from Uttara's side. Papaji and Mammiji from Uttara's side and chachiji and chachaji from Aakash's side. Well left out are Swara and Sanskar. Sanskar will be from Uttara's side and Swara from Aakash's side. Sorry hum Ayesha ko toh bhool hi gaye. She will be from Aakash's side.

Everyone was satisfied except for Swara and Sanskar. Though Swara did not show it she was feeling like killing both of them.

La- Raksh beta come on the stage. (Raksh went to the stage) Raksh will take out chits from these two bowls which contain the name of the participants from both the sides. First Raksh will take out two chits from the same bowl, in the second place he will take out a single chit and then finally a chit from Uttara's bowl and one from Aakash's bowl. And then he will repeat the same procedure. Okay Raksh?

Rak- Yes papa.

Laksh handed the mic to Raksh and both of them went to Aakash's side.

Raksh took out two chits from Uttara's bowl. He announced the names.

Rak- Pari taiji and Aadarsh tauji.

They gave applause. Both of them came to the main dance stage. Raksh played any random song which came out to be Gerua. Both of them danced on it. The song ended and they went to their respective place back. Then Raksh took out a solo chit from Aakash's bowl and announced the name.

Rak- Sujata dadi. (marks were being given secretly by Raksh in a paper)

Sujata was very happy when she went to the stage. Raksh played the song Chittiya Kalaiyan. She started to dance in her own way. They all enjoyed it and she went back. Then he took out one chit from Uttara's and one from Aakash's.

Rak- Dadi (Ap) and chote dadu (ram)

Ram- Chora ye ke bol raha hai? Main bhabhi ji ke saath kaise?

Ap- Haan Raksh doosri chit nikaalo beta.

Raksh was about to take out another chit but Dp stops him. (I really want him to be a bit of cool)

Dp- Ruko Beta! (goes to Annapurna) Ek dance hi toh hai. Devar bhabhi wala gaana laga denge. Jao.

Ram- Par Bhaisa...

Dp- Hum keh rahe hain na jao.

They both went to the stage and Raksh played the song which was "WAH WAH RAMJI JODI KYA BANAYI" from the movie HUM AAPKE HAIN KAUN.

Everybody enjoyed their dance and the best was that dp clapped till Annapurna came back beside him. Then Raksh took out chits from Aakash's bowl.

Rak- Mamma and Papa.

Ragini and Laksh came to the dance floor. Raksh played the song "DIDI TERA DEEWANA" from the movie HUM AAPKE HAIN KAUN.

They danced and Laksh teased her all throughout. In the end Ragini hided herself in Laksh's embrace. They got back to their seats.

Raksh took a chit from Uttara's Bowl.

Rak- Bade dadaji.

Dp- Raksh beta take out another chit! Hiow can I dance...

Ram- Bhaisa je sahi na hai aapne mhaare ko bhabhisa ke saath nachaya na ab aap akele nacho.

Dp- nahi ram ye kaise ho sakta hai?

Ap- Eji chale jaaiye na.

Dp was melted by Annapurna's actions. He went to stage and Raksh played the song "AYE MERI ZOHRA JABEEN" from the movie WAQT.

He dedicated his dance to Annapurna. Annapurna blushed and everyone teased her.

Raksh finally took out the chits one from each bowl. Sanskar was waiting eagerly for his announcement. He wanted to know his partner for tonight. Raksh finally announced the name.

Rak- Sanskar chachu and... (he saw Sanskar's face and wanted to make him wait) and... and... arre papa I cannot read it!

Sanskar was feeling like hell. Laksh understood his intentions and slowly went near him.

Sa- (out of eagerness) Laksh jaldi jaa na.

Everyone saw his eagerness and laughed whereas Swara blushed. Sanskar sat there as if nothing has happened.

Laksh went and saw the chit. He was shocked at first but later gained the courage to say it.

La- Chit mein jiska naam hai woh AYESHA hai.

Everyone was shocked, above all was Sanskar.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry guys for posting this late. Actually i was planning to discontinue the FF but then I realised my situation when i was waiting eagerly for and FF to be continued but the author was not so i decided that for all those who were waiting for my FF to be posted I am sorry for the delay. Sorry to the silent readers also. Everyone please do comment.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter-20

La- Chit mein jiska naam hai woh AYESHA hai.

Everyone was shocked, above all was Sanskar. He so very wanted to dance with Swara. Ayesha understood his feelings and planned a drama.

Ay- Aah! Aah!

Swara rushed to her and looked at her leg as it was the place where she was pointing to. Sanskar later ran there and so did the other family members.

Sw- (panicked) Ayesha what happened? Show me your leg.

Ay- Nahi Swara it's just a cramp.

They made her sit on a couch.

Ay- Aap log chinta mat keejiye. I will be all right. Swara for now can you dance with Sanskar.

Sw- (understood her drama) Ayesha iss sabki koi zaroorat nahi hai. It's just a dance. You should dance with him. I don't have any problem.

Ay- it's not true. I am having pain.

Sw- (planned something) Okay then we should call a doctor and he will just give you a pain killer injection.

Ay- injection?

Sw- Yes one with 4cm of needle. It doesn't hurt that much.

Ay- Swara I am fine. (immediately stands up) see!

Everyone was shocked. Ayesha felt embarrassed whereas Swara enjoyed her victory and Sanskar was cursing himself for having such a tolerant wife.

Sw- Chalo ab jaakar dance karo.

Ay- Swara mujhe sach mein nahi karna hai. I will give a solo performance.

Rak- haan main bhi vs mein. Ayesha di vs. Raksh.

Ay- (Gives hi-fi) good idea Raksh.

Sw- Nahi lekin...

Sa- (glares and indicates Swara to keep quiet) Swara rehne do na when she doesn't want to dance with me it's ok.

Ay- No, No Sanskar it's not like that. Don't feel bad please.

Sa- No its not like that...

Sw- Yes Sanskar is feeling bad Ayesha so you will have to dance with him.

Ay- Ok Swara. (finally losing)

Sa- (monologue) Well done Mr. Maheshwari jab sab kuch theek ho raha tha you did a great job. Ab jaaiye keejiye dance Ayesha ji ke saath. Swara yahaan Raksh ke saath dance karegi and you go dance with Ayesha. (looks at Raksh) yaar mujhse acchi kismet toh Raksh ki hi hai. Kam se kam Swara ke saath dance to kar raha hai. Good Mr. Maheshwari keep it up (hits his head with his palm)

Sw- Sanskar kya hua? Apne aap ko kyon maar rahe ho?

Sanskar glares her which Swara understands and giggles in her mind.

Sw- Sanskar go na, dance with Ayesha.

Finally they both stood on the stage and song which Raksh played was KHEECH MERI PHOTO from the movie SANAM TERI KASAM.

They danced very nicely. Though during the whole dance Sanskar was looking at Swara's expressions and all he could see was her laughing and giggling.

After the dance got over Swara went to the stage and made an announcement.

Sw- great work Ayesha and Sanskar. Really loved it. Chalo par meri aur Raksh ki baari hai. Main Aakash ki side se hoon toh Raksh from Uttara's side. Let's see who wins after that and Raksh no cheating.

La- Swara mera beta mujh par gaya hai woh cheating nahi karta hai.

Ra- tab toh paake se karta hoga.

La-Ragini...

Sw- Shhh... lets start our dance. Raksh music.

Raksh played the song MAIYYA YASHODA' from the movie HUM SAATH SAATH HAIN.

Swara asked Raksh to wear a dress which was the same as Sanskar. He came and played the music from the beginning. Sanskar and everybody else was shocked but later laughed. Swara dedicated her dance to Sanskar.

After the song ended it was Sanskar was clapping like mad till she got back. Raksh came on the stage and announced the marks for each performance.

Ra- main points announce kar raha hoon which will be out of 10.

Pari taiji and Aadarsh Tauji- 8

Sujata Dadi- 9 wah dadi

Dadi and Ram dadu- 8 zyada maze nahi aaye

Papa and mammi- Hamesha ki tarah 9 and half

Laksh was about to say something when Sanskar interrupted.

Sa- Sahi toh bol raha hai. Sabse accha toh mera aur Ayesha ka hi hoga (looking at Swara)

Sw- (teasing him) woh toh dekh hi lenge.

Rak- Continue karoon? (everybody nodded)

Dadaji- 9

Chachu and Ayesha di- 7 and a half bilkul maza nahi aaya isse accha toh aap Swara chahci ke saath hi dance kar lete.

Sa- Main aur kya keh raha tha.

Rak- Aur mera aur chichi ke dance ko 10. Yeh mat bolna maine cheating ke kyonki iss par marks dadi ne diye hain.

Sa- (to himself) Tab to pakke se cheating ki hogi. Bahut jo pyaar ki hai.

Sw- Sanskar tumhare honth zyada nahi hil rahe.

Sa- Bachpan ki problem hai.

Rak- Toh finally winner hain Aakash bhaiya and team with 43 score and Uttara maasi and team losers with 42. Yayy!

Sa- beta tub hi maasi ki side ka hai.

Rak- Toh kya hua chachu, main toh bhaiya ki team ki khushi mana raha hoon.

Sa- (to himself) mana mana, papa ka bhi upar ka maala gayab hai.

Sw- Sanskar ab kya kaha?

Sa- Kaha na bachpan ki aadat hai.

Swara understood that he was really angry from her.

PRECAP- Sanskar angry with Swara and Swara trying to apologise.

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