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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: manasie23
Part 2- aaawww it was such a cute update Viji... So similar to yesterdays episode yet so different and finally Sanskaar s not dragging his hurt and has forgiven her after the reasons given by her for doubting him even for a second...
And the kiss was 😳
Please dont redeem Lakshya he needs to learn soo much more before his redemption

Hi Manu...Thanks so much yaar. 🤗 🤗 Yeah, I incorporated bits of yesterday's awesome, spectacular scene in this chapter. 😊 It was just so mindblowing, I wanted to include it, made some changes in the dialogue to make it fit into my storyline.

SwaSan are just pure magic, na? I was in dreamland when I wrote their reconciliation scene and the romance scene. 😳 ☺️

Ok done, I will be redeeming only Ragini here...anyway you know my feelings for Lakshya ji. 😉

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Vianna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

As usual another splendid piece of writing by you! Hats off.!

Ragini's thoughts in Part 1, SanGini conversation in part 1, Sanskaar's feelings in Part 2, Swara's guilt in Part 2, SwaRagini conversation, SwaSan conversation, description of the Raagas!! They are just beautiful. You write so descriptively and beautifully that I don't want to stop reading. Absolutely great work!

Loved it. Keep writing. Please update soon. :)

-V

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: kavya11234
Hi.. I just read ur part 1 and the way u portrayed ragini and her path of redemption is just so good.. I think ur fabulous writer and I definitely feel that u shd publish a book..ur so talented.. Pls do pm me the second part..eagerly waiting..

Hey Kavya...wow that was very generous praise, dear. You really made my evening with that comment. 😊

Very glad you liked chapter 1. Chapter 2 is already up. Do read it and let me know what you felt. Had sent you a PM with the link, as well.

Cheers

Viji

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maaneetfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Part 2 ...sigh wht can i say...the answer to all my swasanian dreams...are v ever going to b so lucky to see such in the show??? I guess not! So we get the 2nd best thing tht is to read such beautiful stories...every part is evocative and wht i really loved was the war going on in ragini's mind whether to choose good or evil n then the decision tht she took even tho it isnt an easy path...tho m sure when she sees the fruits of her decision she is not going to regret it 1 bit!

Dunno abt lakshya...on the one hand I would like him to b redeemed but on the other i feel ragini deserves much better than him only if she would realise it.

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kavya11234

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Thank you so much for the pm...just read ur 2nd part and as usual fabulous writing.. Thank God their mu is solved.. Ur a very talented writer pls do think about writing a book..

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: bwvianna
As usual another splendid piece of writing by you! Hats off.!

Ragini's thoughts in Part 1, SanGini conversation in part 1, Sanskaar's feelings in Part 2, Swara's guilt in Part 2, SwaRagini conversation, SwaSan conversation, description of the Raagas!! They are just beautiful. You write so descriptively and beautifully that I don't want to stop reading. Absolutely great work!

Loved it. Keep writing. Please update soon. :)

-V

Hey Vrinda...🤗 🤗

Thanks so much yaar, am glad you liked both chapters 1 and 2. I wanted to write this TS with a music theme; Swaragini started with that theme, with the sisters so involved in music. But these days, on the serial, we hardly get to see any linkage with music at all. Just an occasional bit about Swara going to Benares to recruit a music teacher. 😊 So I really wanted to write that here.

Am so happy that you liked it. I will start work on Chapter 3 later today, but might take a bit of time, as work is a bit hectic these days, ahead of the Xmas holidays.

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718075

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

In reserved my post on page 18 :)

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: maaneetfan
Part 2 ...sigh wht can i say...the answer to all my swasanian dreams...are v ever going to b so lucky to see such in the show??? I guess not! So we get the 2nd best thing tht is to read such beautiful stories...every part is evocative and wht i really loved was the war going on in ragini's mind whether to choose good or evil n then the decision tht she took even tho it isnt an easy path...tho m sure when she sees the fruits of her decision she is not going to regret it 1 bit!
Dunno abt lakshya...on the one hand I would like him to b redeemed but on the other i feel ragini deserves much better than him only if she would realise it.

Hey Tasneem...🤗 🤗

Let's keep the faith, I am sure we will get some lovely, tender romance between SwaSan, on TV quite soon. 😉 Am so very glad you liked this chapter, thanks for your very lovely comment. Yeah, I wanted to show Ragini's redemption in a fairly realistic, gradual manner. It wouldn't happen overnight, she is an intrinsically good person, but she has allowed herself to be so overcome by an almost fanatic level of obsession, it wouldn't be easy for her to find her way back easily. But I wanted to show her slowly realizing, that she has an option, a rare opportunity to come clean, and make amends.

Yeah, I think I am only going to redeem Ragini in this Fic. 😊 I am biased against Lakshya, anyway, I don't think I can write about his redemption convincingly. And I agree with you, Ragini does deserve better than him. And not just because he broke her heart twice by snapping off his engagement with her. This action of his no doubt pushed her on the path to wrongdoing, but I also feel Lakshya is just incapable of feeling for Ragini the way she feels for him. He is just too much in love with himself! 🤢

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: kavya11234
Thank you so much for the pm...just read ur 2nd part and as usual fabulous writing.. Thank God their mu is solved.. Ur a very talented writer pls do think about writing a book..

Thanks again Kavya, for the lovely compliment. 😊 Am really glad you liked both chapters, and your comments have seriously made my evening. 🤗

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Sudha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#150

OMG, that was s awesome, the moment sanky says he is going to kiss her i started blushing☺️ actually imagining this scene in my head.❤️. Beautifully scripted with some equally beautiful dialogues. Thoroughly thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Thanks for the pm, Viji😊

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