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Indrani

@indrani7495

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Another beautiful...beautiful os... loved it very much as always!!😳

Edited by indrani7495 - 9 years ago

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

for some reason I almost cried reading this, seriously had a lump in my throat! It is a wonderful piece of writing, especially the ending and beautifully innocent and simple too!

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

There are a hundred ways to say you love someone but actions will always speak louder than words. This Swara was super adorable in her innocence! 😳

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Nityah

@-StarlitFire-

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Awww... once again a sweet OS... while other one was with touch of fun... This one is calm and serene... So beautifully written... Absolutely loved it Medha...
keep rocking...
Love
Nityah...

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arohijsp

@arohijsp

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Beautiful OS!
Thanks, I've been missing your stories now for about couple of days. As usual it's simple and affects straight to your heart.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Medhu...🤗

Already commented on your other OS "Beauty". Now for this one.

I think I've told you before, that whenever I read your pieces, I'm left greedily hoarding away some delectable phrases which appeal to me so much, which evoke some very special imagery.

From this OS, it was the superbly constructed "shovelling into his victuals ". 😆 It made me burst out laughing, I could actually picture Sanskaar digging hungrily into his super late dinner, after a long day at work. Too good.

The part about Sanskaar not knowing how to operate the microwave, and Swara having to tell him to turn the knob was 🤣. Once Swara comes back from the baadi, time to kitchen train the hubby. 😉

And yes, that last line about some habits being kept because we wouldn't want to change them for the world, was very apt, very touching. Wife having dinner "with" hubby, though she is visiting her maika. ...😳 can it get more romantic?

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maaneetfan

@maaneetfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Awww sooo adorable. ...kab aise swasan pal dekhne ko milenge...sigh! ! Waise even i dont like eating alone. ..

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Short sweet simple cute adorable

Simply SwaSan

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dimaag

@dimaag

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

A new concept for our cute swasan...awww its so cute yaar!! One simply can't comment without using the word cute. Liked swara the way she instructed sanskar and the way she actually bothered for himhim... 😉
Yaar when will we be able to watch these on the show? 😭
BTW it was very refreshing and realistic medha! 😆