New SwaSan SS: A search for her (ch5 pg7 updated) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Nice...
Poor swati...
Hope nothing happens to her!!!

Continue soon!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Omg !! Awsum read all the 4 Parts in one go..its awsum..loved the Concept...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
To kill their little angel. I hate raglak. THey dnt knw wat xactly love is.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
arghhh this raglak
wht d hell was that wht tht poor soul did to you??
nice update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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<font size="5">[COLOR =red]hey hi friends!! this is esha again ''sorry for the extra small update'' but here i present you people with my extra long chapter 5 ...people i am not going to post for 2 more days so here is the long update...and yes thanks every buddy of mine who took the initiative and commented atleast 1 line '' it means a lot ''...and my special thanks to my friend Goldie for appreciating my try a lot ...love ya !! Here We Go-[/COLOR]</font>


<font size="6">CHAPTER 5 </font>

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Ragini and laksh were extremely enraged by SwaSan's closeness... though they didn't realise that it wasn't their love for SwaSan but a merry attraction... laksh had already betrayed swara earlier but he didn't realise what swara had gone through...regular counselling to free of depression, family persuasions and an extremely painful heartbreak...after swara married sanskar, she took time to understand that she needed to start a new life...

Sanskar had given her a whole amount of time to accept him...and there laksh was busy being a Casanova and wooing other women...laksh was a rich spoilt brat unaware of the fact of swara being extremely emotional and possessive...

After giving birth to swati..swara heaved a relaxed sigh...sanskar was tension-free of swara being depressed again..he was a lot scared during swara's pregnancy of a possible miscarriage of swara being stressed.. but fortunately she delivered a healthy princess..

On the other hand ragini and laksh were planning a foolish murder plot of swati..
Indeed foolish!! Laksh read out his plan

''ragini listen carefully first we need to kidnap their daughter and stab her in a forest..so that we stay out of being suspects!! And here lady!! Please do remember to switch your phone off or else we can tracked by"

Ragini's stone heart melted a little

''Laksh! Can't we put off the plan of killing that innocent!! We can either kill swara instead!! And separate SwaSan" Hai na?

''Are you out of your mind you idiot? How can we kill swara? Don't you remember I want her? You'll get sanskar and what about me? Will I go to hell?''

''OK!OK!! Calm down!! But let's not murder that little one!! We'll plan anything else''

''No! You shut up foolish girl!! She's an obstacle..and lucky hates hardships
I will finish her off soon! Wait and watch ''

And there ragini was helpless and laksh was determined...

Maheshwari mansion-

Swara was busy working in the kitchen..swati was sleeping...the Whole MF except SwaSan and Swati had gone out for a bhajan..Sanskar was busy with his laptop when an idea struck him..

Sanskar tiptoed to the kitchen where swara stood back facing him..she was humming a sweet tune and was chopping veggies...

Sanskar back hugged her tight making swara scream her lungs out..sanskar put his finger on her lips..

''Sshhh! Swati will wake up!"

'What are you doing here?'

''What? Romancing with my wife!! What else?"

'Excuse me ! I know that but why do you want to do it here in the kitchen? Bedroom is on renovation kya? '

''Hello! In the bedroom you are only busy cuddling swati and you keep ignoring Me!! I envy Swati!! She took my old romantic Swara away!!"

'Oh My God ! Sanskar you envy a little girl? Chhee! And yes Mr.lover boy I don't ignore you!! And yes I am still the same '' your romantic swara'' '

"Than prove it!! You don't ignore me and still you're the same! "

'How?'

''Kiss me!"

'OK! I'll not hesitate because I want to show my husband that I love him the most'

''Begin your work then ! "

And there the time stopped...everything stood still to let two love-birds romance in peace...

Swara highened her toe to touch her lips with her tall Hubby's lips...she touched them with hers...melting in pure love...they kissed..and then it turned into a passionate smooch...connecting two lovestruck hearts again...spreading utter bliss

And they kept on kissing unaware of the fact of MF's arrival...uttara called her bhabhi aloud..breaking their precious moment.. somewhat uttara had seen both of them so close...she turned back

'''Ahem! Ahem! If u people are done!! May I come inside?"'

SwaSan were deeply embarrassed and sanskar turned around back facing uttara
Smiling at his foolishness he pinched swara to take her in senses

Swara: Woh! Woh ! I have some work

And she ran away...leaving sanskar alone to handle the situation...

Sanskar: areyy!! Utarra tu itne galat time mein entry kyun Marti hai?? Dekh nahi rahi thi? Mai Teri bhabhi se romance jar raha tha!!

Sanskar accidentally blurted this out!! Leaving uttara in a state of shock
But then the silence ended..uttara bursted out laughing

'' sorry bhai! Woh sabne paani manga tha!! Toh lene aai thi ! Agar mujhe patha hota ki yahaan pe romance ho raha hai toh main aaplogo disturb nahi karti !!"

'Chup kar shaitan' and sanskar ran away to his bedroom leaving uttara laughing her stomach out...



Edited by eshat.k - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Hahahahha..lol...nyc ..Cute n Sweet Romance of SwaSan...loved it..continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Such romantic update😳
Sanskar chahta Swara prove kare ke woh uski wohi romantic wali Swara ha how sweet☺️ and their kiss☺️
Swara's dailog

'Excuse me ! I know that but why do you want to do it here in the kitchen? Bedroom is on renovation kya? '🤣
thanks for the PM dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
hey esha,
first of all sorry for not commenting regularly, i completed reading all the parts today. Actually due to this stupid frustrating current track going on in the serial i am unfortunately losing interest in swasan so not reading any ff/ss/os but saw your pms and decided to read your ff.Its great loved it especially swasan's intimate scene, trust me i would die for the cvs if they agree to include even one of them from your ff in the serial. The story line is different and refreshing. Please continue, i enjoyed reading it. Pm me your updates please. I am not even watching the serial currently but i have decided to be active on the forum atleast. I dont want to loose hope for swasan because i love them. Anyway your work is great and engaging 👏...thanks for the pms.

akanksha
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Goldie93

Hahahahha..lol...nyc ..Cute n Sweet Romance of SwaSan...loved it..continue soon



Thank you so much...at least you enjoyed my bakwaas 😉 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kushimian89

Such romantic update😳

Sanskar chahta Swara prove kare ke woh uski wohi romantic wali Swara ha how sweet☺️and their kiss☺️
Swara's dailog

'Excuse me ! I know that but why do you want to do it here in the kitchen? Bedroom is on renovation kya? '🤣
thanks for the PM dear



Aww thanks so much 😳 you've made me super duper happy 😃
Glad that I could at least make you laugh by my SS's 😛
Thanks 😆

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