New SwaSan SS: A search for her (ch5 pg7 updated)

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Daddy! why are you crying? and where's mumma? why did dadu ( grandfather) threw mumma's photos on the floor?

simple questions were appealing in little swati's subtle mind about her mother's sudden disappearance

meanwhile, her father's bold eyes were continuously bleeding tears...

still,to cheer up his daughter's mood he said caressing her hair

'baby! cuz i've lost your mumma! we need to find her soon! we should na?come on! hurry up ! let's leave_

swati:daddy!(sternly) how can you lose my mumma?

'baby!i've done the biggest mistake in life i know! but let's hurry up! we'll find her ok?

little swati couldn't do much but nod

And the two left their house to search for their precious gem ''swara''

THE MISSION BEGAN
''a search for her"

people please deliver your reviews postively so that i can continue.only ''if u like it''...please please comment and like

ESHA

Index
Prologue and synopsis
- page 1
Chapter 1 and 2
- page 3
Chapter 3
- page 4
Chapter 4
- page 6
Chapter 5
- page 7
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sounds interesting...
Please add me too your pm list 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi swasanians!! i m esha and i m back with another brainy boring plot of mine...here's the prologue and the character sketch of my story ...New SwaSan SS: A search for her

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prologue

swara gadodia was a lively,bubbly,independent, modern,and a free- spirited girl only till her marriage to her love Mr.Sanskar Ram Prasad Maheshwari ''one of the known business tycoon of India''..though, Sanskar never barred her from wearing modern clothes or changing her previous habits..but sanskar's extra conservative and snobbish family never let off a moment to insult her..swara had changed her clothing and habits gradually after her marriage but she never let of her modernness and her second love ''her guitar'' ( her first love was only sanskar)...


swara and sanskar's meeting was an interesting one..they met during one the political campains about cleanliness which sanskar sponsored..swara was a neat and tidy woman who always loved to participate in nature-related campaigns..it was for the first time when sanskar sponsored a campaign and it was for the first time for our mr.delicate to stare a girl none other than bubbly swara...we could it was ''love at first sight for both of them''...they met again at a coffee shop,and again,and again..it was now a official dating..their respective families knew about their secret meetings but never intereferred or questioned them ''god knows what was in their tricky minds'' they say na ''Maheshwari's will be maheshwari'''

swara was the only daughter of mr.shekhar gadodia and mrs.sharmistha bose-gadodia...and the same was sanskar ; the only child of mr.ram prasad maheshwari and mrs.sujata maheshwari..

swara and sanskar married with the proper consent of the gadodia's but against the maheshwari's..as swara was a half bengali it was always against the sensitive marwari's ...although they never spoke anything against her but some evilness is in store for their modern yet sensible bahu..

swara and sanskar had married in half bengali and half marwari style..they were very happy with each other and happily consummated with each other

their romance and consummation will be in the chapter one

the chapter will be continued from their marriage-

so people i hope you liked my mingle of the character sketch and the prologue..

lots of love
ESHA 😳

please deliver your reviews
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Posted: 10 years ago
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InDex

Chapter 1 and 2 on page 3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Excited for the update !!!!! 😃
Hope u do not separate swasan in your story !!!
Plzzz give next part soon 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting. ...
Dad daughter in a mission to find mumma...nice start...
Pls continue soon. .
If possible pls sent pm
And one opinion...can u pls avoid using skyblue colour as sometimes it is difficult to read..?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Annei123

Excited for the update !!!!!😃

Hope u do not separate swasan in your story !!!
Plzzz give next part soon😛



Thanks Annei!! No I am not going to seperate SwaSan..and yes! I'll update the next chapter soon !! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sarathy321

Interesting. ...
Dad daughter in a mission to find mumma...nice start...
Pls continue soon. .
If possible pls sent pm
And one opinion...can u pls avoid using skyblue colour as sometimes it is difficult to read..?



Thanks for your honey sweet comments 😛 glad u r liking my work 😃 I'll update the next part soon!! 😳 yup! Actually I was just experimenting with colours 😆 I'll take care about blue next time 😉 sorry 🥱 !!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting concept completely new and wonderful 👏
Nice prologue
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvakanksha

Interesting concept completely new and wonderful👏

Nice prologue
Continue soon



Thanks akanksha!!
Its really a great achievement for me that you've approved my work
😆 😆
I m not going to disappoint anybody now and you people will surely enjoy reading it...
😉 😉
Glad u liked it 😳
Will be continuing soon 😆
Thanks again!! 🥱
Lots of love
Esha 😳

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