New SwaSan SS: A search for her (ch5 pg7 updated) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh in a happy family a big storm is gng to come. I hate both laksh n ragini. But y he came back as he dumped her.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: gayu6

Oh in a happy family a big storm is gng to come. I hate both laksh n ragini. But y he came back as he dumped her.


Hey thanks gayu!! Yeah laksh is the villain... it is mentioned in the story itself that laksh is a Casanova so he wants swara again for his pleasure 😛 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
nice update! as always laksh wants swara back after he has left her... but but... ragini wants sanskar😡 that's gross...
waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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it so nice of sanku to keep the baby name from his wife name starting letters.

Hate Raglak 😡😡😡😡😡😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Why do villian enter the happy story to make it worse??
Loved the update..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you guys...will try to update any soon 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
nice story
i hate ragya
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Superb update.
I read all parts and I'm waiting for the next part eagerly, please update soon I really wanna know what is the storm in SwaSan's life that causes problems on their lives...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 4

swara was now extremely devoted to her motherhood now..she was a briliant mom and a devoted wife !! ofcourse !! sanskar after the birth of swati regretted that why didn't he propose swara earlier? he could have saved her from that Devil!! though swara was now perfectly covinced by laksh's ''kindness'' and his ''change of mind'' but as said earlier sanskar was still suspicious about our Mr.Lakshya ragini gadodia *LOL*...the whole MF family contributed in swati's upbringing ...she was bought up in both Marwari and Bengali traditional values...sanskar would always insist on swara to bring up swati like an extreme bong and swara would laugh on it saying '' sanskar she is your daughter she won't let me make her like me'' and sanskar would simply wink


everything was going on well in MF but on the other side the devil Family was planning An evil plot

Laksh And Ragini Villa
Laksh:Ragini i want a divorce from you!! i don't love you anymore and i want swara again!! i can't tolerate her with that ''sanskar''...so you better leave!!

Ragini: same pinch my deary!! and don't dare to say anything against my sanskar!! even i can't tolerate him with anyone other than me !!

and there they stopped , laughed an evil laugh...the devils's horns grew their plan to seperate SwaSan began...RagLak united...Swasan Here We Come!!


on the other side...SwaSan was busy thanking god for their happiness unaware of the fact that RagLak are yet to arrive...Ragini and Laksh had decided to move away the obstacle between them and their so-called ''crushes'' that was swati!! swati was SwaSan's pride and their only life...they were connected eternally and externally to their princess...but there were two hell-souls busy making plans to kill that innocent little angel to fulfill their desires and attain pleasure...


so people here was my short update of chapter 4.. i know its short but actually i am busy eith some work so couldn't write any longer...please pardon but don't forget to give your reviews..

_ Esha 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks divs 😃
Surely will update the next one soon and will make it bit longer 😉

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