Phoenix SwaSan SS Finale pg40 - Page 34

Sakura 🤗 This is amazing!! You have left me speechless. Two moves and checkmate.

AP was caught in her own web of lies. I am glad that she is now in a place she always belonged. I wonder how DP will react.

Your Ragini reminded me of the Ragini of initial days. She would be swayed for a moment but in the end she would do what is right. With Ragini jumping ships, AP received her first blow. And sedating laksh to lure her into the battle ground, followed by the final blow!! It was done brilliantly. Take a bow 👏

So the phoenix was born from the ashes and is now free to pursue its dreams.

Will there be a sequel?? Or another OS series?? Waiting for your next story...

I think I should start by apologising since I have always enjoyed reading your stories starting from "Ice King" but never making an attempt to let you know how wonderful they are and they actually make my day😃...sorry about that...😛

all your works have been outstanding but this one really takes the cake👍🏼 ...Phoenix is on a different level altogether for me...the way you incorporate twists and turns making the reader wanting for more at the end of each chapter is mind blowing 👏...thriller and action is my fav genre followed by romance and when combined it becomes win win for me...the confusion regarding swara and kavita in the beginning nearly had me pulling my hair so as to comprehend what actually had happened 😔...after a while I gave up and sat back patiently to see how your story unfolds ...and whoa patience really paid of well...what a finale...mind blowing...and above all what a villain 👍🏼...Annapurna sure did send chills down my spine...but why did she murder sanskaar's parents...🤔

your twists and turns are so intricate and at times subtle that I have to read all the chapters again to understand what's happening 👍🏼...Bravo girl...you are one of the finest writers I have ever come across in this forum...I always look forward to your works and from now on hopefully I will make a habit to leave my comments as well ( enough of being lazy...😭..)

Regarding this story what to say...I loved each and every part...( well that's an understatement I guess..)..it blew me away...this fic is my fav amongst all your works closely followed by "ice king"...

Thank you for writing such wonderful stories...plz keep writing more...😃

Cheers

I love how you always have a number of chapters per story. It kind of seeing a short film but you still managed to capture a story filled with whole characters.

I liked how Ragini helped her friend and Swara. But still she can't give up on poor Lakshya and ended up marrying him.

This Annapurna seems like a character I would love to hate whereas I feel like my time are wasted when I see the real one on the show. She used to be okay now she became unbearable.

Last but not least I loved everything about Swasan. On every of your story even If the whole concept is different. This two characters remain the same and I absolutely love that.

Here to hoping many more SS from you. Do lemme know when you start a new one.