Phoenix SwaSan SS Finale pg40 - Page 33

Ragini ki madad sabse bada jhatka tha accha wala. Ek vichaar aaya tha kaash mere paas paise hote toh mein aapko manati buk likhne aur mein kitne jyaada paise kamati yeh toh andaaza bhi nahin laga sakti. Khairr chodiye sheikh chili k vichAar par agat jo aap kabhi buk likhe toh bataiga jaroor.publish na kar pai toh thik padungi jaroor.

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Saku...as Viji says...Sheldon!...

It's was like reading 'Not a penny more, not a penny less..'

Everything that was given, was taken back...

Read 6-Finale part in one go... you made AP a diabolical villain... I really loved her...

Phoenix was flew all the way up...Raised from ashes...

What a thriller!

thanks dear it means a lot to me! Glad you enjoyed it!

@ Nut-kut aap aisa soochti hai yahi bohot hai mere liye. Thanks a lot!

Great story as always. Thank you for another good read.

Its just awesome...i like this ragini...she is a kind person...loved this again...u should consider publishing these stuff...u r just awesome

Hey sakura

Sakura My girl.. 😳 Firstly,I apologise I could not continue reviewing it.. I was out for a wedding n now m back and seedha seedha land maara phoenix pe.. that too the whole ff completed.. what a delight for me !

I would keep it short and say you successfully maintained my engagement in the story that I could literally feel the wibes pass through me in every update !

Loved it.. N d best that i like about your works is that they aint an inch dragged too.. Words that are required are weapons in themselves which makes you a winning king always by the end..

Write something super soon.. Waiting !

saku.. my darling this was the best part in this ss.. I'm very sad that it finished. . what a super duper finale update.. I too think sanskar killed laksh.. I felt bad for that.. Thank god he didn't. . so ragini was a doll in the hands of annapoorna but she change herself for her friend sanskar.. I totally loved ragini here.. I tol think ragini will be under the veil.. sawsan convo was beautiful. . I have a fear of losing anybodies life here.. but you made it a happy ending.. in this update I really loved all parts.. the main thing I felt that here and in the show laksh is same laksh.. with super blooper stupid plans and plotting. . I really wish him to see as a good villian.. why you made him dumb here too? annapoorna thought that her son will be her main soldier. . but she don't think that her son only knows to make some stupid plans.. but he acted well to swara.. ok saku..I'm stopping my bakwass.. and for my last comment you said na I'm the only one you don't confuses with your crazy stories.. ha ha ha. right. I'm very brilliant .. like lakshji.. am I? oh god.. anyway waiting for your next series. . waiting for a beautiful name and amazing story.. come back soon dear..

saku one more thing. . if you can please made an index containing all your works link and keep it as signature please. . then everyone can easily get your works to read na.. if possible please do it

beautiful ending to a beautiful story. Ragini finally came through in her friendship. Annapurna trapped her self in her own plot...oh my how things have turned...and then got caught. laksh tried to be the commander of the army, without realising that his army consisted only of his mother...and no one else. 👏 👏

How come im always so late to knw abt these updates :(:(:(