Phoenix SwaSan SS Finale pg40 - Page 23

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...

Wow again Saku..

this keeps better and better..
i love good mysteries.. this is a terrific one with all right ingredients.

and as i hate to analyze mysteries; for i like to be shocked.. wont think or write anymore...
but gotta say.. the updates are pure awesome-sauce.

Originally posted by: medhasankar

Okay so sanskaar came into her room.

already he seems quite taken with her by the way. is it because he has noticed her similarity with kavi, (her sister?)? like he used to love her right?or have u somehow twisted that??maybe adarsh did the mistake of loving a bengali girl...and sanky was attached to adarsh or something.

I dunno somehow it seems that kavi and sanky were never together here...just my guess.although then what he did to earn the maheshwari wrath i have no idea. might be wrong really. is the phoenix adarsh by any chance.

oh i am gonna let you go on with your spiel...confusing myself now.and u boo.

I loved the commanding and intimidating tone of the AP_DP scene.

and the menace in the nonchalant way sanskaar tells her to go find her in her golden cage.

I gather Lakshya does not know that sanskaar has been hiddden here. but he does know who the phoenix is.

Continue soon.

love--

medha.

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Read the last 2 updates at 1 go n wht can i say...wow!! Haven't read such a gripping mystery in ages!!! N yes many answers hv come...annapurna is soo totally dark..ragini seems an angel beside her.

So kavita was swara's friend? ? Is she the phoenix? But she is definitely sanskaar's lost love thts fr sure. ..tho cant make out if the maheshwari parents or laksh killed her??? Again laksh seems much lesser in love with swara than ever...tho not still getting why sanskaar is hidden n more why he doesn't protest? ? Is annapurna so dangerous thht she would kill him otherwise? ?

Originally posted by: harshsriti

saku.. this update was shocking. .I have a doubt that sanskar was swara's phoenix. . but I'm more confused. . is he kavitha's love? then swara is her either friend or sister.. I guess friend.. howdid she murdered. . is swara has any secret plan.. is that why she came to MM? I have a doubt that Annapoorna behind all this.. I think she is selfish for her own son's and so she take away sanskar's happiness. . and ragini is a pawn of Annapoorna I guess such that.. continue soon saku.. you are loving to give us shocking surprises..

Originally posted by: princess_tara

superb

Originally posted by: -Jamina

Wow just read 5 parts in one go
Brilliant Sakura 😳 Full Of suspense great
Btw m little confused from where Kavita entered
Somewhere I thought swara phoenix is sanskaar
And in latest update a thought is he loved Kavita

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

Kavi?? Did you mean Kavita??

SANSKAAR said Swara took too long to come back! What does that mean?? Too many things coming to my mind. Don't know which one will come true at the end.

SANSKAAR - Phoenix!!!

Who is Phoenix? Till now I thought it's SANSKAAR, Bt now Lil confused. Though still think it's SANSKAAR.

Is it? Or someone else??

Why I'm thinking that in this piece, SANSKAAR & Kavi had no love connection? Or am I wrong here??

Ohh lets see what you stored for us ;)

Amazing update as usual. You are a creator you know, creator of some masterpieces! Yo made me come out from my Silent Reader mode.

Update soon & thnx for the PM.

Originally posted by: swa291

So swara knows what happened with kavitha intresting... Waiting for more.. Keep Writing

Originally posted by: foresight

and another beautiful layer of mystery pealed off...so many more to go

so it was Kavi who died, not RP. I wonder what happened to RP and Sujata. Was their death innocuous or was it something sinister?

Finally the phoenix met his love, but she could never realise he was so close and within her grasp. Why do I feel that while they saw each other and spoke to each other, became friends and feel in love, their method of communication was something unconventional...was be a device, may be some mental connection ...hmm 😕 ...questions questions. Could their first interaction have been some time after the bump key incident...i feel something serious happened after it

Was there a reason they choose new moon night to be the first time they met...the day they had the tragedy?

What deal did Sanskar make with AP? did he give up his freedom for Swara's safety or was it something else?

So the assassin is after swara...or has sanskar stepped out of his shackle to protect her ...may be he will need more time to come out of his cage...

looking forward to your next update 👏 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: Sakura24

You're obsessed with Ram Prasad and his wife, if this continues I fear you might uncover the mystery before I finish writing it

I have no supernatural powers involved so certainly no mental talks here🥱 Again fabulous foresight Sapna! The bump key indeed😉

I was earlier going to title this fic. MOON, does that give you some hints?

No, no Sanskar's still locked up safely.

I'll continue soon😊