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Zephyr8

@Zephyr8

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Posted: 9 years ago

#201

As always...brilliant update. Making more sense for sure but lots to unravel yet. Looking forward to the next.

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Mansi

@Princess_Mansi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#202

The whole description was just awesome

The secret passage

Annapurna and DP I think have got the clue about Swara

What secrets is Annapurna hiding from DP?????

Lakshya is a very weird character??????? I think he knows something about the past??????

So Kavita was murdered??????

Swara believes Sanskar is either dead or trapped?????

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#203

Saku my dear...can I say you are one of the most delightfully wicked people I know? 😛 You gleefully say things are becoming clear, and all the time, you are playing smokes and mirrors with us! 😆

Hmmm...but I must admit, you are drawing the veil back a bit in this chapter, but a lot of questions still remain!

The part about Swara being secreted away in that vast hall beyond that trick glass mirror, reminded me of "The Phantom of the Opera". 😉 This one is similarly tantalizing and eerie!

So Swara is Kavita's sister? And Sanskaar was in love with Kavita? Or was it Swara all along? Sanskaar was saying that she took too long to come back---so that means he was her phoenix all along...but why then does she not recognize his voice? 😕

Chalo, no point giving myself a migraine. 😆 You will reveal the clues one at a time, I guess, and I am eagerly looking forward to the next chapter.

But I still say you are wicked---in a nice way! 🤗 🤗

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NITI VYAS

@nut-kut-86

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Posted: 9 years ago

#204

Sorry aak pehle update par cumnt nahin kiya par ab mujhe pata nahin mere sabd 1% bhi keh payenge jo aapki kahaniyo k baare mein kehna chahti hoon.aapki kahanoya padk serial mein joh pagalpan chal raha hai usse sukun milta hai. Update mirror doorway and swara kavi ko kaise pehchanti hai. Aur sanskaar agar joh swara ka pyaar tha toh woh use pehchaan ku nahin payi. Kitne sawaal ab aap hi unka jawaab de sakti hai aapki kahani mein.inteezar rahega

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#205

Wow again Saku..

this keeps better and better..
i love good mysteries.. this is a terrific one with all right ingredients.

and as i hate to analyze mysteries; for i like to be shocked.. wont think or write anymore...
but gotta say.. the updates are pure awesome-sauce.

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#206

Okay so sanskaar came into her room.

already he seems quite taken with her by the way. is it because he has noticed her similarity with kavi, (her sister?)? like he used to love her right?or have u somehow twisted that??maybe adarsh did the mistake of loving a bengali girl...and sanky was attached to adarsh or something.

I dunno somehow it seems that kavi and sanky were never together here...just my guess.although then what he did to earn the maheshwari wrath i have no idea. might be wrong really. is the phoenix adarsh by any chance.

oh i am gonna let you go on with your spiel...confusing myself now.and u boo.

I loved the commanding and intimidating tone of the AP_DP scene.

and the menace in the nonchalant way sanskaar tells her to go find her in her golden cage.

I gather Lakshya does not know that sanskaar has been hiddden here. but he does know who the phoenix is.

Continue soon.

love--

medha.

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maaneetfan

@maaneetfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#207

Read the last 2 updates at 1 go n wht can i say...wow!! Haven't read such a gripping mystery in ages!!! N yes many answers hv come...annapurna is soo totally dark..ragini seems an angel beside her.

So kavita was swara's friend? ? Is she the phoenix? But she is definitely sanskaar's lost love thts fr sure. ..tho cant make out if the maheshwari parents or laksh killed her??? Again laksh seems much lesser in love with swara than ever...tho not still getting why sanskaar is hidden n more why he doesn't protest? ? Is annapurna so dangerous thht she would kill him otherwise? ?

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Jwala

@LoveSriNal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#208

saku.. this update was shocking. .I have a doubt that sanskar was swara's phoenix. . but I'm more confused. . is he kavitha's love? then swara is her either friend or sister.. I guess friend.. howdid she murdered. . is swara has any secret plan.. is that why she came to MM? I have a doubt that Annapoorna behind all this.. I think she is selfish for her own son's and so she take away sanskar's happiness. . and ragini is a pawn of Annapoorna I guess such that.. continue soon saku.. you are loving to give us shocking surprises..

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Jamina Mohammed

@Snowflakes.

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#209

Wow just read 5 parts in one go
Brilliant Sakura 😳 Full Of suspense great
Btw m little confused from where Kavita entered
Somewhere I thought swara phoenix is sanskaar
And in latest update a thought is he loved Kavita

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Nupur

@Nupur_5

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#210

Kavi?? Did you mean Kavita??

SANSKAAR said Swara took too long to come back! What does that mean?? Too many things coming to my mind. Don't know which one will come true at the end.

SANSKAAR - Phoenix!!!

Who is Phoenix? Till now I thought it's SANSKAAR, Bt now Lil confused. Though still think it's SANSKAAR.

Is it? Or someone else??

Why I'm thinking that in this piece, SANSKAAR & Kavi had no love connection? Or am I wrong here??

Ohh lets see what you stored for us ;)

Amazing update as usual. You are a creator you know, creator of some masterpieces! Yo made me come out from my Silent Reader mode.

Update soon & thnx for the PM.

Edited by Nupur_5 - 9 years ago