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@nut-kut-86

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Bahut ache. Woh ghar ka description hi mete raunte khade kar raha tha. Walking ghost and aditya dono cute. Kahani din ba din darawni aur dilschap hoti jaa rahi hai
Aur aapk lekhanshaili ka toh jawaab hi nahin.

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Swathy

@SwathyS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

As always am afraid to comment.
You write so well that i feel like who the hell am i to comment on your works.

Keep writing and eagerly waiting to meet the bhoot of MM

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foresight

@foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

beautiful in every part. loved everything right from the bad omen, to laksh actually misleading swara making her think she has a chance (which she does), to the entire scene of the shadow person. you have build up amazing atmosphere here. i loved the clues from aditya and now i am wondering what was in the prasad? some hallucinogen? will sanky help her out of the effects? or the plot while she is under the influence? hopefully she will go searching for him as much as he too comes to warn and protect her

your story always pulls me in...looking forward to the next part already.

are you planning yo write a book at some point in time?

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Glued to the plot...

The suspense is awesome...the shadow, the warning, the majestic description of the castle...I'm hooked...

Phoenix...was he really Sanskar...

Even though Sanskar is confined into the room...please make his entry really damakar..full of suspense and he needs to be shown bigger than life...

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Vianna

@BookWormV

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Great parts 2 and 3. Am really looking forward to this story. These shadows and ghosts!! awesomeness.!!! Loved it.!
Update soon and thanks for the PM.
-V

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moonstonespirit

@moonstonespirit

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

With every update, its getting more and more mysterious!!

So Laksh knows Swara doesn't love him. I think he knows who the phoenix is. Will he help her find it or will he push her in the wrong direction?

Swara and Sanskaar have conversed before? If they havnt meet, is it through email/ phone?

Ragini has mixed something in the prasad? Sanskaar must have heard AP telling Ragini about it and warned Swara.

Parineeta's ghost theories 😆

Waiting for the past to unveil and update soon 🤗

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maaneetfan

@maaneetfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

OMG its starting to get sinister now...everyone has secrets and agendas it seems...but why is sanskaar kept hidden so tht ppl think hez a ghost??? I first thot they think him mentally unbalanced but now it seems something else. Tho fr him to accept tht seclusion tamely, is kinda beyond me

Swara's phoenix and laksh...they r connected too and laksh being so sure tht she wont ever go back means tht he is the one responsible fr her losing her love. ..looks like he is more dangerous than he seemed earlier

Tooo many questions. ..will they be answered soon saku???

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Jwala

@LoveSriNal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#148

saku.. you are making me more confused. . actually swara want to find her ex love or as you say phoenix. . like swara me be feels that she is using laksh.. or he is just her best friend and other all their drama.. or like the show lakshji is a stupid here.. I can't understood the real fact here.. I know sanskar is the ghost. na? he tried to scare our adu na? is there drugs in the prasad? I'm not getting anyone here.. too confused. . like they are lying to themselves and also to us.. I think I get more clarification in next update. . continue soon saku..

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: nut-kut-86
Bahut ache. Woh ghar ka description hi mete raunte khade kar raha tha. Walking ghost and aditya dono cute. Kahani din ba din darawni aur dilschap hoti jaa rahi hai
Aur aapk lekhanshaili ka toh jawaab hi nahin.

thank you dear😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: swa291
As always am afraid to comment.
You write so well that i feel like who the hell am i to comment on your works.

Keep writing and eagerly waiting to meet the bhoot of MM

Everyone's opinion matters dear, there is no reason to be afraid of voicing it😊

You'll see the bhoot soon🤢