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Malangan

@TeriMalang

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: princess_tara
superb update

Thnks tara :)

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Sneha Ray

@sneharay

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Read both updates together..

Its mindblowing..update soon

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Shab...sweetheart...how could you stop there, yaar? 😭

I was feeling such a mix of emotions...happy that Swara has recovered consciousness and is out of immediate danger; the baby too is doing better, but feeling so bad that Swara has now lost her memory.

The way you had described Sanskaar's emotions was awesome. No other word for it. The way he cradled their daughter in his hands, when she could finally be taken out of the incubator; the way he had kept one of Swara's dupattas in the incubator so their daughter could sense Swara and feel peaceful...so well written yaar.

Please update soon. I would also dearly like to know if RagYa were somehow involved in Swara's accident.

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: -Prithi-
emotional update

I hope u liked it :)

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: sneharay
Read both updates together..
Its mindblowing..update soon

Thanks Sneha :).will update soon ;)

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Shab...sweetheart...how could you stop there, yaar? 😭

I was feeling such a mix of emotions...happy that Swara has recovered consciousness and is out of immediate danger; the baby too is doing better, but feeling so bad that Swara has now lost her memory.

The way you had described Sanskaar's emotions was awesome. No other word for it. The way he cradled their daughter in his hands, when she could finally be taken out of the incubator; the way he had kept one of Swara's dupattas in the incubator so their daughter could sense Swara and feel peaceful...so well written yaar.

Please update soon. I would also dearly like to know if RagYa were somehow involved in Swara's accident.

Viji 🤗

I had to stop there orselse I would indulge in deeper emotions.

I had this plan frm the beginning where swra loses her memory.forgetting sanskar and his existence.

TBH I felt really bad for sanskar. He is dealing sumthing so grave with much patience. Where he has no command over anything.its like fate playing and sanskar is just a puppet .

Sanskar as person learned everything from the tough reality he faced. He is practical man.who knew wat to do and wat not. But this tym he is clueless.

He shares a special bond with his daughter,she is just not his love but also soul frnd. Which he needed at the moment. And she responded at the right tym. These three are connected by soul.he made himself so strong where ppl saw him as a person who dsnt need anybody. Little did they know. The strongest person also needs a shoulder where he could bury all the stress and welcome new day with new found strength. Till ungrateful day swara was his sanctuary. Ryt after DAT everything changed. And little angle came forward to play her mothers part for a time being. Coz both mother daughter know ..their man couldn't do without them.

Thanks ,m glad u liked...this coming frm ur fav writer is overwhelming :D

Will update soon ;)

Well,RagYa they do hav a part..not in accident definitely in the memory loss.

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Hey Shab 🤗

What a heartrending update. The whole situation from the hope offered by Swara's revival to a desperately longing Sanskaar, only to have that hope cruelly marred by the amnesia and for her not to recognise her own life, whose life she also is 😭😭. Angst but beautiful angst- and yes, there can be sublime beauty in pain too. Am not quite a sadist but see the importance of pain in epic love stories and as you will probably know from my writing, I do like my angst-filled tracks! I usually don't like amnesia tracks but the writers on this forum can make them sensible and as you did, explain them medically in a realistic manner so it worked for me!

The song is of course awesome and those lines are pure magic. Sanskaar's reflections are always heart wrenching when done properly and you certainly did that! And the sadness that Swara doesn't even know of their baby. Really looking forward to read them discovering each other and finding each other again. Very nice.

Lots of love xoxo

PS:

Dard aur tanhayiyon ka yeh silsila hai

Tera aur mera abh ek falsa hai

Lekin hogi iss raat ki bhi ek subah

Jiske baad na honge phir hum judah.

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Avneet kaur

@avihothi

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Awesome story.

Hope swara regain her memory soon.

Update plzzz.

Plzzz pm me about update.

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

i cried for sanskar and swara

oh god i hope swara remembers soon

thank god at least the little angel is safe

please do continue

bye sumi

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
i cried for sanskar and swara
oh god i hope swara remembers soon
thank god at least the little angel is safe
please do continue
bye sumi

Hey sumi :)

I hope u liked it.

Swaras memory...well it will come with time;)

She is safe . she have to be safe .

Will do soon :D