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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

oh no the baby is well--and now the mother is amnesia affected?

only sanskaar will have these kinda misfortunes i tell ya.

very well written, especially the first bit and the bit where sanky holds his baby.

Super stuff shab.

Love ya--

Medha.

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: -Ros-
A very heart rending update.
For a moment, I thought Swara & the baby survived and she was having a flash back, but she was dreaming her favourite dream. You've penned down her physical and mental discomfort so beautifully, I was flinching while reading it.

Sanskaar, my poor baby. Him breaking down in front of Swara was just.. 🥺
Swara was the only one whom he could be vulnerable in front of, but now he can't even do that.
I'm glad he has their lil angel- a little replica of her mother it seems- to cry & seek comfort in.

I'm eagerly waiting for the next part. ⭐️

Thnks ros :)

That dream brought her back . she couldn't see/imagine anything bad coming towards those two precious soul. For whom she lives. Thnks again

Sanskar I know ..he is going through much much ! Beyond a person could take. He still have a hope. a hope have the power to build again from the strt .

I love the lil angel already . she is a precious baby. Both the parents "jaan" resides in her. And she her parents peace.

Will update soon ;)

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: chibi_deea
Wonderful 👏 It's perfect. I love it. I love the way you described everything. Eagrtly waiting for the next part 😊

Thnks :)

Glad u liked it :D

Will update soon ;)

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: butteru
Aww .. Poor Sanky .. it was a heartbreaking but nice part
i thought Swara and Sanskaar were going to be together but 😭

plzz continue soon ..

and thanks for the pm

Thnks :).

They will be together..they are meant to be!

It's just "waqt ki azmaish" . they had always been sacrificing types in love and their love walk away . now they will discover another form that is deewangi and living love.*I guess I dnot make sense anymore😆*

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: swa291
Poor sanskar ...
Swara does not remeber him.
Now he do have an angel in his hand for whom if not for him she has to remember everything

DAT he is poor soul !

Fate hav played it game.

Arrey. She remember them both. Nd love him even more than before.

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
omg i feel for sanskaar
god she lost her memory
sanskaar n baby scece was so emotional
u mde m cry
this is called irony sanky is sad cause of swara n happy for his lil angel
update soon
n thanx for d pm

I knw.

Aww srry for DAT.

When he had no hope ..he saw the light at end of tunnel. He was broken beyond amend. She put him back not completely yet ..but still she did put him back together

Will update soon ;)

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: ritika52
a vry emotional update...
plz continue...

Thnks ritika :)

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa
Awww...
Poor sasnkar..

How missed her and when she was back they again got seperated..
Plz dont tell me you are bring ragz back in next update..

Plz NO..
😔

Just continue without Lux and ragz..

pretty swaSan Princess is also now fine with fer mother being fine..
Love the mother daughter bond symbolized using the dupatta..

Loved it..
Continue soon..
Thank you for the PM..

Yeah got separated again.

Ragz n laksh ? They might be back ..after all they are all wat she remembers .

A daughter is closest to her mother. A child dsnt knw any other person than her mother ..that is miraculous relationship they share.

Thnks :)..

Will doo soon ;)

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: svg98
Beautiful update..
Everything was superb..
Cant wait to read more..
Update soon..

Thnks :)

Glad u liked it :D

Will do soon ;)

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: medhasankar
oh no the baby is well--and now the mother is amnesia affected?
only sanskaar will have these kinda misfortunes i tell ya.

very well written, especially the first bit and the bit where sanky holds his baby.
Super stuff shab.

Love ya--
Medha.

Well yes 😆 this happens when I think too much into emotions.;) nd also read when the writer is sadist :P

Thanks medha

Mglad u liked it :)