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Malangan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
awesome
it was so emotional
update soonif possible do pm m

Thnks :)

Will do for sure :)

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Malangan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: -Ros-
Oh God. 😳
That was heart wrenching. 💔

You've portrayed Sanskaar's state after finding out about the accident very well.

I'll be back before you wake up. I hope he can fulfil that promise. I hope not only Swara and the baby, but also Sanskaar can survive this.

Could you PM me when you update? I can not miss this.

Thnks :)

Of course he will fullfill his promise. He never makes his swara half hearted promises ;)

The trio hav to survive. Warna humara Kay hoga ?(-.-)

Sure I will :)

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Malangan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: swa291
Oh god
Its sad to see sanskar going week

How the accident happened.

Waiting for next update

No he isn't weak yet.

That moment was his life shakening moment where his life had no idea wat could he do save those 2 lives which his breathing air and heartbeats

Accident...ermmm accident nts happen..that's why they are accidents ;)

Will update soon :)

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Malangan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Amrtina
What an emotional story
😭too sad

Owhh, I knw

Will TRY writing other update a lil bit happy maybe ;)

Edited by -TeriMalang- - 9 years ago

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Malangan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
A very good beginning but what caused Swara's accident? Was it really an accident or was it done deliberately? I hope that both Swara and the baby survive!
On a side note, absolutely loved the way Sujatha is pampering Swara. Such a refreshing change from the show!
I am looking forward to the next part very eagerly and I jope you update soon...

Thnks :)

Hmm maybe lack presence of mind...or may be its was destined to happen .I hope the same :)

Sujata is a kind of innocent soul. She loves to bump on conclusion on the basis of her thoughts. But I like this sujju more :D believe me ..I never wanted to be anywhere near to show . show lacks logic :P

Will update soon :)

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Malangan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa
ohhh god..
That so sad..

SwaSan ki kushiyo ko kiski najar lag gai..
Hope there angel is safe and Shono too...

Sad it is :(

Nazar maybe wohi hoga 😆

I hope the same :)

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Malangan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Wow Shab...so many emotions in this lovely chapter. You have portrayed Sanskaar's desolation, pain, fear, anxiety so very well. And before that, the happy glow of the soon-to-be parents, and the joy of the family, before this cruel blow of fate threatened all that. The wonderful way you contrasted those emotions made it seem all the more heartbreaking.

Eagerly looking forward to the 2nd chapter, and hoping that both Swara and the baby make it.

Also wondering about the accident--was it really just an accident or was it caused by Lakshya and/or Ragini.

Thanks for the PM and keep writing! 😊

Thnks viji :)

I tried my best to cover almost all the emotions :P

I tend to write anything everything heart wrenching n painful. M kind of biased towards this emotions ..coz it strikes the right chords with the readers ;)

I hope the same ;)

Well maybe a conspiracy or destiny let's wait for my mind to given in some idea about it :P

Thnks again will update soon :)