The Best of Things - FF (RagYa, SwaSan) +16 Part 44 on Pg 145 - Page 67

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanavi

What a nice description of Date. Sanskaar is so mischievous nd naughty, Swara is also njoying the tease.
Grt update


Thanks - Swara is enjoying herself - and feeling secure too 😃😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: eshat.k

How thrilling! 😛 thank you bubble for your another swasanlicious update 😊
Loved it thoroughly 😃 what a sweet date plan! 😉


Hahaha - thanks Esha!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey bubble when will you update
Next part. 😲
Waiting for long time. 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Hahahahha loved this update...teasing and cute Mr Maheshwari!! Lol I so laughed at 'if you are a bad girl you get 2!!!

Can't wait for this date to proceed and the next!



Yeah, they are actually flirting 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Lovely couple of chapters Bubble.

I might be in the minority here, but I didn't feel very sorry for Ragini...Not too much, anyway. Perhaps that sounds rather harsh, but she's got to learn the consequences of behaving a certain way.

Just like we discussed earlier, that Swara needed time to take the physical aspect of her relationship forward with Sanskaar, since she'd only just realized where she wanted to take their relationship; similarly, Ragini needs to be read the riot act to, when she violates the explicitly stated understanding between her husband and her, that if at all she has any doubts or qualms, she would come to him. Not try to go behind his back and stir a hornet's nest with the elders.

Good Lord in Heaven, I never thought a day would come when I would say this: but Lakshya had been so circumspect and right and giving, in his relationship with her. He'd promised her his fidelity and companionship, and from the beginning, he had told her---while he would treat her with regard and affection, it was upto her to really earn his respect and love.

She failed spectacularly...and not due to any act of omission or commission on his part. She was paranoid and insecure, pure and simple...but then she also lied about it and tried to create a melodramatic scene. As any woman worth her salt should know, those last two, are the things any husband hates the most---even when things in the marriage are perfectly fine, which is definitely not, in their case...

Whew!! Sorry, I got carried away there. But it irks me sometimes when characters who so obviously act in a calculative, sly, and conniving manner, expect to get forgiven so easily. I want to say: Work for it, Ragini darling!! Life isn't a bed of roses! Deal with it!!

Moving on to the much more pleasant and dreamy territory 😉 of your next chapter--Oh My God, SwaSan...words would not do justice to the light hearted banter, the sheer effervescent joy bubbling out of both of them as they step out on their first date.

Sanskaar's mock serious expounding of how exactly the dates would go--step by step delineation of how he would be planning to get close to her, get her accustomed to his touch, his caresses, were so funny, and yet so cute! I wonder how he managed to keep a straight face! And I just loved how well he's read Swara. He looked at some diamond earrings, but then realized that Swara would probably value lovely knick knack earrings made of peacock feathers more...She is, after all, a girl who looks at the value, and not the price of things. Her sister, of course being her polar opposite! 😛

And Swara, Swara----the end gave her intentions away slightly, didn't it? She was pouting slightly in mild pique, asking if she needed to tolerate a ghastly horror movie for just one kiss! And Sanskaar, being Sanskaar, had the killer one liner up his sleeve: if she was good, she'd get one kiss, and if she was bad, she might just get two!!

Oh, Bubble, Bubble...such a wonderful mood that last chapter left me in. I missed this so much on the serial, the friendly, naughty banter between SwaSan. There, they careen from one crisis to another, one villain to battle after another. So refreshing to read of them having some normal, real life, couple time. 👏 👏

Loved it, dear. Thanks for the PM.

Cheers

---Viji



Oh yes, Ragini has got to earn trust again, if she wants her life together.
And so glad you liked Swasan 😊 I was indeed trying to show how Sanskaar 'gets' Swara...
thanks so much for your comment and apologies for the late response - I've been travelling.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MusicAddict

Thats unfair Bubble! You left it like a cliffhanger! I was loving it sooo much!
Update soon, thats all I know!


Thanks 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bwvianna

Bubble,
Fantastic updates. Loving Ragya sand SwaSan. Last update was very sweet and hilarious! Loved their nok jhok. Very enjoyable! Update soon. :)

-V


Thanks! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Anglaise

Amazing Update .
Ragini is changing herself right. Hop she will be back. wer was lakshya? And what happened wen she blocked sanskar. Hope lakshya is safe. In one side lakshya is give her space to analyse her deeds.That was much needed. Im glad that she realised swara and lakshya is no more and both moved on long back.Nice Update😳.
Wow Swasan was too cute🤗. Omg Sanskar was super cute. Thoroughly njoied their convo. I too agree with Sanskar regarding watching a horror movie😆. Swara too was so sweet. Nice Update 😳. Update soon. TC


Heheh, yeah Sanskaar is outlining his plans for Swara...
Lakshya is missing in action - but maybe Ragini has a clue now.


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: whity.007

Hey bubble when will you update
Next part. 😲
Waiting for long time. 😭


Sorry for the delay - I'm travelling.
Will put up a part soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks so much for your comments, dear friends.
Sorry I haven't responded to each one but just a few who made some points

Putting up a new part soon

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