The Best of Things - FF (RagYa, SwaSan) +16 Part 44 on Pg 145

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SIMI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#581

perfect...i like this swara...not mahan but practical..update soon dear.

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Esha

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Bubble,this chapter was crisp and clear... totally practical and logical!! swara is being perfect machure and ragini is a perfect blinking idiot...ragini does'nt require simple sympathy but a way big taunt and mocks!! sanskar is a true supporter of his loved ones i must say' this chapter was delightful..Good! Laksh needs a piece of mind for sometime 😆

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Vianna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#583

3 amazing updates! Loving every bit of it. 😃 I love how Swara Sanskaar and Lakshya have in their own ways thwarted Ragini's becharapan! Amazingly written.!

Please update soon and keep writing!

-V :)

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#584

I'm glad Lakshya went away. Sorry bubble dear, I can't comment regularly nowadays...my schedule is a little full. But I am enjoying the story too much if the truth to be told and it feels unjust to me to read and like silently and leave...but what to do, I hope you would understand.

Your Lakshya is a man I admire...wit and strength and calmness all fitting to his description. So Ragini messed it up once more. I hope she would have the sense to rectify her mistakes this time. I like the tough face Swara gave her, she deserves no pity at the moment although even I felt A little sorry for her.

Continue soon!

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Ananna Islam

@M_Annu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#585

kabhi swasan scene bhi diya karo...the whole ff is about raglak but the story is on raglak n swasan n u didn't give us a proper part of swasan just i can read is about raglak..dear u haven't give us a single part of swasan..just only raglak u r giving..do something..

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soapbubble

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Posted: 9 years ago

#586

Originally posted by: simsen23
perfect...i like this swara...not mahan but practical..update soon dear.

Yes, this version of Swara is quite like the one in the serial but a bit more realistic, I feel.

Thanks Simi!

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soapbubble

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Posted: 9 years ago

#587

Originally posted by: eshat.k
Bubble,this chapter was crisp and clear... totally practical and logical!! swara is being perfect machure and ragini is a perfect blinking idiot...ragini does'nt require simple sympathy but a way big taunt and mocks!! sanskar is a true supporter of his loved ones i must say' this chapter was delightful..Good! Laksh needs a piece of mind for sometime 😆

Yeah, Ragini needs some hard talk - and yeah Laksh does need some time-out 😆😆

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soapbubble

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Posted: 9 years ago

#588

Originally posted by: bwvianna
3 amazing updates! Loving every bit of it. 😃 I love how Swara Sanskaar and Lakshya have in their own ways thwarted Ragini's becharapan! Amazingly written.!

Please update soon and keep writing!

-V :)

Thank you, V!

I loved how you put it. In fact, it struck me when you said it, that they were each rejecting her 'poor me' and 'I'm the victim' drama.

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Preeti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#589

Superb update
nice to see that Swara is not running to console her sister

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soapbubble

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Posted: 9 years ago

#590

Originally posted by: Sakura24
I'm glad Lakshya went away. Sorry bubble dear, I can't comment regularly nowadays...my schedule is a little full. But I am enjoying the story too much if the truth to be told and it feels unjust to me to read and like silently and leave...but what to do, I hope you would understand.
Your Lakshya is a man I admire...wit and strength and calmness all fitting to his description. So Ragini messed it up once more. I hope she would have the sense to rectify her mistakes this time. I like the tough face Swara gave her, she deserves no pity at the moment although even I felt A little sorry for her.
Continue soon!

No, no please read only when you have time... after all, all this is fun.

Thanks so much for your kind words 🤗 - I'm also going through your Frost series slowly and quietly 😊😛

Yes, Ragini stumbled once again. Me too feeling little sorry for her - lost girl.