The Best of Things - FF (RagYa, SwaSan) +16 Part 44 on Pg 145 - Page 52

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Bubble my dear pal...I'm sorry I've not been very regular in commenting. Was on travel earlier this week, and I guess you aren't sending pm's for each update now na? I just caught up with the last 4 chappies today and I shall comment in more detail tomorrow (just bushed now). But just wanted to say for now, that you have maintained the pace very well, and things are really heating up now. 😊

Ragini is so machiavellian in her manipulation...God she's so very sly. Even when things are going her way, she still wants to have absolutely no doubts whatever...and she's not even prepared to rein in her destructive impulses unless carefullt cajoled to do so. For the first time, you made me feel sympathy for Lakshya. ...something I ONLY feel when I read your work. 😆

More tomorrow...but thankfully, sitting on fence Swara finally at least told Sanskaar what she wanted. 😊 It still isn't an "I love you" or "I want to work on our marriage" but hey...I want to stay...is an immense step for Swara na? 😉

Originally posted by: indrani7495

Hey bubble...i love ur fiction series...read ol the parts from 23-29 in a go...luved them ol 😃 sorry couldnt comment earlier coz my xamz wer going on!! 😒 luvd the swasan kiss as well as in part 27 wen sanskar finally asked swara wat she wanted instead of assuming!!! 😳 😃 waitin for bua to come!! 🤣
Thankew so much for ol the pm's dear bubble 🤗 n sorry agn for commnting late!! 😒

Originally posted by: simsen23

wow...swasanlak was awesome...but waiting for that flat bed to shift from swasan room..hehe... 😉

Originally posted by: soapbubble

Yeah Swasan finding a lot of support in the house... and most importantly each other!

I'm not Malayali Naina, but enikku kurachchu manassilaakum 😃

I read you FF in last two days... Loved it :) Awesome job with the scenes, emotions, story-line.. I loved how you have somehow retained every person's characteristic...

Hey Bubble (guessing that's your name or how you wish to be addressed),

I stumbled upon this fanfic today morning and have been devouring all these amazing chapters for breakfast!! I can't seem to stop once I started and needless to say all my Sunday morning plans have gone down the drains! 😆

The start of this fanfic made me a little apprehensive regarding Lakshya but by the Part 29 I have really fallen in love with the way you have portrayed Lakshya Maheshwari! I have to say that this is possibly the first time i have ever liked Lakshya in any fanfic. Most of the times i just feel pity or plain indifference towards him but your fanfic has compelled me to not only like him but like him almost as much as i like Sanskaar! Bravo, Bubble!👏👏

Every character is portrayed with such correctness. It just makes sense.!

Your writing style is really very good and this plotline is fantastic. You have written everything so beautifully that you have made a fan in me for your writing! 😊

I have gone through all the emotions while reading this fanfic. The contentment when Lakshya finally found his way, the need to smirk when Lakshya went all 'Jealous, darling?', happiness when you had shown the bonding between Swara-Sanskaar, the small interactions between Lakshya and Sawara also made me pretty happy instead of dread that usually fills me when such a scene is shown. The 2-3 chapters based on Swara-Sanskaar 'kiss-scenario' made me laugh out loud and the whole Ragini becoming Ragini scenario made my heart drop. Everything is written in such a flow and I want keep reading and reading! If I had it in my power I would have sent this whole fanfic to the CVs, seriously this would make such an amazing plotline for the show with the required drama and the much required sensibilities and logic.!!! *sigh* Wishes will remain unfulfilled in that aspect.

I have to mention I am actually looking forward to the RagYa aspect almost as much as the SwaSan aspect in this fanfic. The Lakshya-Sanskaar-Swara bonding is so fantastically shown that it warms my heart! Part 29 was amazing. The way you ended it. Beautiful!

Really looking forward to more updates soon. :)

-V

P.S.: Is it possible to send a PM on your next update? Would really appreciate it! :)

Oh love the buasa twist!! Superb update!!

Originally posted by: hp_2006

😃wow..nice ..you can understand malayalam..🤗

are you a tamilian..😳 i know tamil..

Originally posted by: anotheranfan

I read you FF in last two days... Loved it :) Awesome job with the scenes, emotions, story-line.. I loved how you have somehow retained every person's characteristic...

Originally posted by: bwvianna

Hey Bubble (guessing that's your name or how you wish to be addressed),

I stumbled upon this fanfic today morning and have been devouring all these amazing chapters for breakfast!! I can't seem to stop once I started and needless to say all my Sunday morning plans have gone down the drains! 😆

The start of this fanfic made me a little apprehensive regarding Lakshya but by the Part 29 I have really fallen in love with the way you have portrayed Lakshya Maheshwari! I have to say that this is possibly the first time i have ever liked Lakshya in any fanfic. Most of the times i just feel pity or plain indifference towards him but your fanfic has compelled me to not only like him but like him almost as much as i like Sanskaar! Bravo, Bubble!👏👏

Every character is portrayed with such correctness. It just makes sense.!

Your writing style is really very good and this plotline is fantastic. You have written everything so beautifully that you have made a fan in me for your writing! 😊

I have gone through all the emotions while reading this fanfic. The contentment when Lakshya finally found his way, the need to smirk when Lakshya went all 'Jealous, darling?', happiness when you had shown the bonding between Swara-Sanskaar, the small interactions between Lakshya and Sawara also made me pretty happy instead of dread that usually fills me when such a scene is shown. The 2-3 chapters based on Swara-Sanskaar 'kiss-scenario' made me laugh out loud and the whole Ragini becoming Ragini scenario made my heart drop. Everything is written in such a flow and I want keep reading and reading! If I had it in my power I would have sent this whole fanfic to the CVs, seriously this would make such an amazing plotline for the show with the required drama and the much required sensibilities and logic.!!! *sigh* Wishes will remain unfulfilled in that aspect.

I have to mention I am actually looking forward to the RagYa aspect almost as much as the SwaSan aspect in this fanfic. The Lakshya-Sanskaar-Swara bonding is so fantastically shown that it warms my heart! Part 29 was amazing. The way you ended it. Beautiful!

Really looking forward to more updates soon. :)

-V

P.S.: Is it possible to send a PM on your next update? Would really appreciate it! :)