Sab iss dil ki hi toh mushkil hai(a RagLak SwaSan ff)

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radha 🦚

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: rinku95
Amazing
Raglak interesting story
Continue soon please

Thank you [:D/] 🤗

Edited by Radhadreamlove - 9 years ago

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Niyati Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove

Thanks ya..
Aur RagLak mein abhi ladai hui kahaan hai?

Yrrr u only said ki more RagLak fight

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radha 🦚

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Niyatiswaragini

Yrrr u only said ki more RagLak fight

I meant ye ladai toh bas trailer tha picture toh abhi baaki hai mere dost...

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Niyati Gupta

@Niyatiswaragini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove

I meant ye ladai toh bas trailer tha picture toh abhi baaki hai mere dost...

Hahaha ,,,, Tom n Jerry h kya😆

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radha 🦚

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Hello friends. .thank you for appreciation my nonsense work...n sorry for making u wait..(although none of u would be waiting 😆)
Chapter 5
It has stopped raining n Ragini n laksh were dieing to go away from each other. .
Laksh- thank god baarish ruk gayi ab chhutkara milega tumse...
Ragini- oh plea..ek minute kya kaha aapne Thank GOD...u mean GOD..
Laksh- woh mooh se nikal gya
Ragini-haan haan.wohi toh..(laughs)
Laksh- bhagwaan ka toh pata nhi par maa bachpan mein bataya krti thi ki...
Ragini- ki?
Laksh- jo rakshash(devils) hote the na woh bilkul aise hi haste the jaise tum
Ragini- kya? Mujhe na aapse kuchh baat krni hi nhi..
Laksh- toh main bhi nhi mar rha tumse baat krne ke liye..
Ragini- marne se rokenge to nhi hum aapko..thodi help krein? Thoda zeher chahiye ya building se dhakka doon?
Laksh-shut up..chalo tumhe ghar chhod deta hoon..
Ragini- nhi hum chale jaate hai..
Laksh- tum haan bhi kehti toh bhi nhi chhodta tumhe ghar..formality thi kr li..
Ragini- hahaha(fake laughter) bohot hasi aagyi..

They both go..
Laksh- kya ladki hai(giggles) ms. Hum
He runs his palm on his lips n then laughs again..

Swaragini's house
Swara- Ragini kahaan reh gyi thi? Itna late?
Ragini- woh Swara baarish..
Swara interrupts- yeh jacket?
Ragini- woh uss park wale ladke ki hai
Swara- tum uske saath thi?
Ragini explains the whole scene..
Swara- jaao tum change krlo..maine khana bana diya hai
Ragini- as usual Swara..phirse tumne bana diya..I love tumhare haath ka khaana
[Me: hey Swaraholics u asked me to show Swara sanskari.. she knows to cook n also her culture.. I'll show that in future)

SanLak house
Sanskar- lucky kahaan tha yaar?
Laksh- bhai bas woh aise hi..
Sanskar- heyyy...tu mandir gya tha..
Laksh- nhi kyun? Achha yeh tika ..baarish mein bhi nhi mita..
Sanskar- tu bhagwan par vishwaas krne laga?
Laksh- nhi woh subah main park hya tha...(bla blaa blaa whole park waala scene)
Sanskar- achha...vaise kaunsi gori mem phasaayi?
Laksh- kya?
Sanskar opens the front camera of his phone n shows it to Laksh..Laksh notices lipstick mark on his lips...he remembers when he runs his palm on his lips..n also when he covered Ragini's mouth..

Next Noon
SwaRagini's house
Swara- Ragini main jaa rhi hoon
RAGINI- kahaan?
Swara- shopping
Ragini- kiske saath?
Swara- jessica..
Ragini- okay..

In mall

Swara on phone- hello jessi.. I m where u said ..8th floor of the supermaker mall...
Jessica- m sorry Swara ..I can't come..
Swara- kya nhi aa rhi ho kyon?
Jessica - sorry what did u say?
Swara- I mean y aren't u coming ..
Jessica - m with Jason..some private time..
Swara- wohooo..private time? Sorry to disturb..carry on..

It was raining heavy.. she went through the elevator.. Sanskar too was in elevator.. but they did not notice each other..
Achanak power goes off...elevator stops...
Swara- oh shit ab ye kya hua?
Sanskar- lagta hai powers chale gye..
Swara- Sanskar?
Sanskar- yes but..oh Swara tum yahaan..
Suddenly Sanskar's phone beeps..
SMS from laksh- bhai tu jahaan hai wahin reh...stormy weather kile kaaran roadways band hai..
Swara's phone beeps
Ragini'SMS- Swara tum theek ho? Mausam bohot kharaab hai isliye powers band kr di gayi hai 4 about a day..tum wahin rehna..

SwaSan together- lights gyi..
Swara- ab? Mujhe bohot darr lag rha hai..
(She starts crying in tension)
Sanskar humbles dekho dekho plz ro mat..thodi der main mein aa jaayegi light..

She is still crying...
Sanskar cups her face- dekho plz mat ro..
Swara- ab kya kareinge?
Sanskar- ab hume yahaan rukna toh hoga..toh kyon na tum mujhe apne baare mein bataao?

She stops weeping

Precap
SwaSan n SwaSan only..

Sorry maa bula rhi hai or I would hv written it abhi..
Will update by next week..
Sorry

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Niyati Gupta

@Niyatiswaragini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Hiii Neha wow bebs ye bht pyara tha..

SwaSan in lift ... Lovely ..

Yrrr jaldi update krna plzzz

N RagLak I m loving them ...

Dude u saw ragini's new avtar in show ..😲

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yusu1993

@yusu1993

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

raglak are too funny

enjoyed alot reading their nok jhok..

sanskaari ragini looks too cute while fighting on sanskaar's

swasan scene was cute too

carry on...

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Jwala

@LoveSriNal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Nehu.. superb.. I loved the raglak scene. . if they are positive they make a wonderful couple.. I wish in our show also they will became positive. cvs are wasting their talent.. I loved the fact that you give both couple equal importance. . I loved the swaragini bonding also.. missing it in the show.. waiting for the next update.. wish I got some romantic moments