Sab iss dil ki hi toh mushkil hai(a RagLak SwaSan ff) - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: rinku95

Fabulous
Continue soon


Thank you so very much.. ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Nice..

continue soon..

ooppss sanskar made a mistake..
Hope swara forgives him..


Thanx..to know will she forgive him or not u hv to read further.. 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: harshsriti

superb nehu.. I want to ask you ine question why you r calling me di.. I like it because in IF only you are calling me di.. and I'm a south indian so no others call me di.. I really love that you r calling me di.. and really feels like you r my choti behen.. lovely update nehu.. swasan romance was beautiful. . poor swara.. she think sanskar as a bad boy now. . we can look how will he convince her. . missing raglak in this update.. continue soon dear.. god bless u sweet heart..


Thanx di..
N I call u di cuz I call u di..
Just aise hi.. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Goldie93

Wow..nyc..loved it ...plzz continue soon. .itna mait mat karwao plzz.update soon da nxt part


Thanx..
Kahaan.wait karwa rhi hoon?
I m.writing so quickly. .. 🥱
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85

Sorry sorry sorry friends. .I know I've been too late this time..notmost of u care about it..but ..yeah here it is..
CHAPTER 7

Sanskar- Swara plz ruko...meri baat toh suno. .

Swara is not stopping...she is really frustrated n broken after the last one hour...
Sanskar comes n holds her wrist..
Swara- sanskar mera haath chhodo..
Sanskar- Swara meri baat..
Swara shouts: sanskar I said leave my hand..
Sanskar with teary eyes leave her hand immediately. .

Here Ragini n Laksh come to know that powers are on at the mall now n some roads are also open..they both go to a same taxi stand..(Okay fine..disclosing a secret I wanted to tell it later but its okay..SwaRagini n SanLak live in the same building) ..it was the nearest taxi stand from their building. .

At the taxi stand
Ragini - taxi!!
Laksh comes behind her..a taxi comes..
Ragini n laksh together: Supermart mall..
Ragini: plz take me first...its urgent
Laksh: no no don't listen to her..take.me first..
Ragini: oh hello..hum pehle aaye the...
Laksh: par taxi ko maine pehle dekha tha.. btw ms hum ..kaisi ho..tum yahaan bhi mujhse ladogi?
Ragini: aap? Humara peechha krte krte yahaan tak aa gaye...
Laksh: oh hello. .main paagal thodi hu jo tum jaisi beemaari ka peechha karu.. mujhe urgent jaana hai..
Ragini: hume bhi. .hum jaayenge iss taxi mein
.laksh: oh really..I'll go first
Ragini: no I..
Taxi driver: u both have to go to a same place..I'll drop u both..
Laksh: sochlo ms hum last taxi hai yaa toh mere saath chalo yaa bye bye
Ragini: no no hum chalenge. .
She gives him a look in disgust. .

Outside the mall
Sanska: Swara meri baat toh suno.
Swara: kya kehna hai tumhe sanskar..??haan. .excuse dena hai koi..
Sanskar: stop it Swara..
Swara: aur tumhe lgta hai yeh sab hone ke baad I'll believe u?
Sanskar: pls.Swara
Swara: mujhe tumhari koi baat nahi sun'ni
Sanskar: fine..main tumhe paaglon ki tarah manaata rahu and u show such n arrogance.. go..

They both go in opp directions. .
(humne tumse..tumne humara rishta joda gum se
Ek wafaa ke siva kaunsi khataa hui thi humse.)
Both wipe their tears
(Kabhi bandhan juda liya
Kabhi daaman chhuda liya
Oh saathi re..kaisa sila diya yeh wafaa ka kaisa sila diya)

They reach far apart from each other. .Swara sits on the bench n cry badly n loudly ..on the otherhand sanskar while walking sits under a tree n cry: kavita kahaan ho tum...
(Woh vaade Woh iraade
oh saathi re kaisa sila diya ye wafaa ka kaisa sila diya. )


In the taxi..
Laksh n Ragini are sitting beside each other.. Laksh is busy on the phone n Ragini is looking outside.. suddenly laksh looks at ragini n admire her beauty..
Laksh: shakla se kitni bholi lagti ho tum..aur nahi toh kitni arrogant ho
Ragini: arrogant aur Woh bhi hum? Khudko dekha hai..sadu kahin ke..
Laksh: oh plz..
After a long pause..
Laksh: tum krishna ji mein maanti ho?
Ragini: aapko kisne bataaya...ab toh hum sure hain k aap hum par nazar rakhe hain...
Laksh: tum par nazar rakhoonga toh tum kha nahi jaaogi mujhe kaali billi.. yeh tumne kishan ji ka locket daala hai isliye pata lag gaya.
Ragini holds that locket in her fist n smile: bohot help ki hai inhone humari(she remembers how she n Swara united their parents)
Laksh smiles at her: mera to inse chhattis ka aakda hai
Ragini's smile fades n she gives an angry glare to Laksh: koi hai jisse aap nhi ladte..
Laksh gives a fake n angry smile.. n they both looks outside the windows..
Taxi driver: you two are from India?
Ragini: yes
Laksh nods
TD: do u like Hindi songs?
RagLak:yes
They look at each other..
Ragini: u know hindi?
TD: no actually.. my nephew brought me a hindi songs CD when he went India..may I play?
Laksh: yes sure..
He plays n song is played
(Moh moh ke dhaage
Moh moh ke dhaage
Yeh moh moh ke dhaage teri ungliyon se ja uljhe koi toh toh na lage kis tarah girha ye suljhe
Hai rom rom ik tara jo baadlo mein se guzre
Yeh moh moh ke dhaage
Teri ungliyon se ja uljhe)
They look at each other n there comes the FIRST EYELOCK b/w them..

SwaSan cry badly

Precap
Swara is crying when some goons come..
Police to arrest Ragini..


I hope u like it..

Plz do share ur views.. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
I know short tha but exams coming
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Lovely update
Can't wait for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Awsum...continue soon plzzz..iss bar late mat karo
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
Nice..
Continue soon..
Hope swasan mu is cleared soon..
Thank u for the pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
superb update nehu.. I like raglak more than swasan..

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