|| SwaSan SS : You are my boy || Chap2 Pg-4

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Shree....

@Shreeswathy

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Interesting start..

Laksh was rejected in the first sight itself.. Lol..

Continue yaar..

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Sakshi Shah

@sakshibshah

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Arey! Story writing! Good good.😛
U dint tell me...but koi ni...next tym keep a res or tell me cz i want to b the first one to cmmnt.😳

Umm...coming to this story!!
Start mein hi Sanskaar got attracted. And then she confronted him whch was interrupted by Lakshya.
Um...did he question on her to initiate a talk??😆 or was he protective??😉 (I'll tell u y i said protective, fb pe just ping me whenevr free)

Flirty Lakshya!! She shoved him off.. 😆

Maybe Swara was irritate due to Lakshya so she didn't say much to Sanskaar!
I want to read exactly WHY did Sanskaar comment on Swara's dress n why he expected the same from her. [You must reveal it, in any chap though]

But ha dont make Lakshya a neg charac, plzz.. 😛
N try not to make it "Love at first sight" for Sanskaar. Let it be Tashan n then as your plot is!😎

It was nice Sweety! Add more spice to it n it'll become more interesting. Update at regular intervals also. I'll wait for your updates. 😃
[Increase the font size!]
Fb msg, ok? Hv to give more review.
Keep writing.
Ur di.

Edited by sakshibshah - 9 years ago

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butteru

@butteru

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

lol Sanky ko bhi kuch aur nahi mila baat start karne k liaye .. 😆😆

nice start .. cute fight btwn sawsan in 1st meeting .. Wowww 😳

Sawara hamesha larne maarne k liaye taiyaar .. kidding 😆 she is cute i like her 😳

n wht can i say abt Laksh jee .. he get what he deserves lol 🤣 .. hamesha Sawara per try karne ka anjam 🤣 .. sry but i hate this guy lol

looking forward for next update

continue soon .. n pm me if u can 😊

Edited by butteru - 9 years ago

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-Ros-

@-Ros-

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Nice start! Swasan starts off on a fight, quite interesting.

Update soon. 😊

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

I Loved it , Do update soon . And i am just curious on one thing, You mentioned Sanskaar has Boy so i just want to know there age group when it all takes place .

Also Laksh is sidelined and not even friendzoned by Swara. Good for us .

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deep_

@deep_

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

noura its cute :)

font size 😔

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Rishabala693

@Rishabala693

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

I like it,please update the next part soon😳

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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Noura the start is awesome 😳 Their first meeting and nok-jhoks already started 😆
Continue soon 😳

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A true Shantanu lover *_*

@--Ana--

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Hey noura, you pmed me with this story, and I was like 'Noura writes too?' But what I read left me surprised. You really write well. I have no clue about any characters :P But still I could connect with them and that was all due to your writing ^_^

Awesome start yo! :D

Waiting to know what's up next :)

Thank for the PM!

Love Ana ❤️