A SwaSan OS 'Her feelings' (after blast) updated

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Purbi

@Purbishona

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello friends.. Here many of the SwaSanians wants that car blast to happen and Our hero to get injured badly.. 😆
And our Swara devi to understand the value of Mr. Sanskaar Maheswari in her life..
So, I tried to cook something regarding this, but is it turned up tasty or tasteless I really have no idea. 😕
So, this is a warning that you may bore to death after tasting it.. 😭
Then I'm a greedy person when it comes to comments.. 😉
Toh plz read it and thora jhel le na..
You can throw shoes, chappals, sandals but don't throw rotten eggs.. I really hate that smell. 😒
I know ke main bohot jyada bakwas karti hun.. 😆
Toh, I will not packao you more.. And for your safe health I excluded most of the MM sssmart people here..

Scroll down for update.😊

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Purbi

@Purbishona

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Posted: 9 years ago

Her Feelings

The sounds of beep beep of various machines were ringing in her ears. She was there standing like a lifeless body outside the ICU. Her eyes glued to a man lying there in the bed without any emotions on his face.
There was pin drop silence. Some fresh tear drops escaped from her eyes, streaming down her cheeks.
She was feeling the most helpless wife right now, yes a "Wife" ,she acknowledged it whole heartedly now.
She closed her eyes in grief, despair,fear. Actually she didn't know what she was feeling right now.
The horrible flashback of that blast came in front of her eyes, her husband lying in a pool of blood and clutching the 'Mouli' in his palms.
Uff! She opened her eyes in horror. She couldn't take more. She was a strong girl throughout her life till now but today that strength had vanished somewhere. She was feeling weak & fragile inside, she lacked the courage to go inside the ICU room and look at her husband's injuries and bandages. She was watching him through the glass door.

Tu dhar hain nadiya ki
main tera kinara hu
Tu mera sahara hain,
main tera sahara hun.
Aankho me samandar hai
aashao ka pani hain,
zindagi aur kuch bhi nahi
teri meri kahaani hain..

Suddenly she heard a sharp scream of someone. Her gaze turned in that direction of the source and she walked there.
There was a lady sitting on the floor crying her heart out and breaking her bangles with all her mights. Her eyes were red with smudged eye liners and dishevelled hair. Some other woman was rubbing her partition and trying to remove vermilion.

It was a heart wrenching scene.

Swara felt a hand on her shoulder and turned back.
"Shona! Kya kar rahi hain yaha beta?".
She just pointed towards the scene," Maa ye log kya kar rahe hain? Aur wo ladki apni Shankha-Pola (the white and red bangles Swara wears) kyun tod rahi hai?"
Shomi watched her with concern & tried to give an answer," Shona woh uss ladki ki pati ki death ho gayi hai. Toh ye rasme hai, ye Sankha pola todna, ye sindoor pochna. Tu chal yaha se."
Shomi knew what her daughter was feeling right now.

Swara felt a jolt of current passed inside, her heart creeped in fear "what if Sanskaar?"
"No, no, never." She clutched her Mangalsutra tightly and looked at her Shankha Pola.
In the hospital there was a small temple where she came. She watched the dibbi of Sindoor there. She took a fistful of sindoor and applied it to her maang and murmured "Ab koyi nahi mita payega isse"
The whole family members were shocked seeing such a vulnerable Swara. AP felt guilty for not trusting her. DP came near her and patted her head gently," Kya kar rahi ho beta?"
She grabbed his hands "Bade papa, Sanskaar ko kuch nhi hoga na? Wo thik ho jayega na?"

DP nodded. "Aap kahiye na usse ke jaldi se uth jaye. Mujhe usse bohot baate karni hai. Maafi bhi maang ni hain. Woh mujhe maaf kar dega na? Maine usse bohot hurt kia hai. Aur woh main jo sajah dega main sab sahelungi. Bas wo thik ho jaye. Mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye."

DP felt weak in front of this small child. He tried to console her, "Kuch nahi hoga tumhare Sanskaar ko."
The doctor came and informed that "the patient is out of danger and quickly responding to the medicines"
Swara felt a sea of joy waving inside her. She quickly ran and entered into the room.
She came near him and took his palms inside hers, feeling the warmth. "Sanskaar plz wake up soon. Hume Banaras jana hai na aur Ganga Aarti bhi dekhni hain. Your Swara is waiting. Apni patni ko itna intezar karwana sahi nahi hain.."

Sanskaar opened his eyes slowly and saw the most adorable face of his wife staring at him with tearful eyes, holding his hand. At the next moment he felt a weight on his chest, clutching his clothes. He understood the unspoken and wrapped her with one hand slowly. It was a pure bliss.
Slowly she got up and placed her soft palms on his handsome face, cupping it she spoke in her melodious voice, "I Love You Sanskaar. Mujhe ek aur mauka milega kya?pleeaase."
He nodded happily in agreement and gently rubbed her nose to remove the sindoor..They got back to the previous position. Kissing her head softly, he felt his wounds were already cured..

How was it? Give ur feedbacks.😊

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Anu

@swasanluv

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Posted: 9 years ago

YayYay!!!!! Update fast 😛

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Anglaise

@Anglaise

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Posted: 9 years ago

wow superb dr..
I would love to see same in SR..
superb. loved it 😳

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

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Posted: 9 years ago

Its awsm.
Emotnal...swara'r broken state & cnfesn jst fav.
Khub valo.jodi serial eo erokom hoto.i lv tht scene whr swara put sindur on her maang.
Do write more.

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maaneetfan

@maaneetfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

So simple yet so beautiful n poignant !!! Loved it

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archana

@sarchanu

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Posted: 9 years ago

i like it.

will you update soon?

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Tapathi

@Tapathi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice...I liked it...if same happen in show acha hai...but up to now they didn't even showed abt this blast..in news

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Purbi

@Purbishona

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Anglaise
wow superb dr..
I would love to see same in SR..
superb. loved it 😳

Thank you dear.. 😊

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Purbi

@Purbishona

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408
Its awsm.
Emotnal...swara'r broken state & cnfesn jst fav.
Khub valo.jodi serial eo erokom hoto.i lv tht scene whr swara put sindur on her maang.
Do write more.

Thank you Sonu.. 😊
I hope ke blast ho.. Jani na era ki krbe.. 😕

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