A SwaSan OS 'Her feelings' (after blast) updated - Page 3

Originally posted by: manasie23

Nice one 👍🏼

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Sorry for the late reply Purbi. Such an emotional update. The thought of Sanskaar like that is heartbreaking and liked how you showed Swara's realisation as when you think you will lose someone, their importance to you is very clear. I liked the hopeful end too:) Nice work!

Originally posted by: ros_aavir

It's so beautiful.

The way Swara was almost emotionless, too in shock to react and respond to the situation after watching Sanskaar at the brink of death. Being upset about the fact that she is not being able to help him as his wife - not being able tofulfil her duty. Thenconsumed by the utter horror of losing him, setting her off into a panic resulting in her scooping up a handful of sindoor onto her forehead, almost like a protest to anything and everything that is out to separate Sanskaar from her. That sheer desperation and vulnerability is wonderfully shown.👏

Sanskaar opened his eyes the moment she asked him to as his wife. She took her rights on him, omfjgnj😳

A simple hug that spoke more than a thousand words could have to finish off.⭐️

Absolutely loved it!

Originally posted by: swa291

Loved but would have loved more id swara went through a lot more anguish and sujatha could have scolded her .. you know for being an idiot or something .. itini asanise nahi ho saktha sab..

Aur we all wanted sanskaar to have like scratches and you made him go to icu ...

But it was superb loved it .. but would have loved it to be longer.. greedy for reading more on swasan and to see swara pinning for sanskar