swasan os- that night

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Things were not normal as before the equations had changed but the relations were same. It had been long that sanskar had started to distance himself from swara, as he thought that the more he will be far the more he will be able to overcome their sweet memories. Sanskar came up to this point as it was getting difficult day by day to watch his love, wife with his own brother. He was convinced that swara loved lucky and that's the reason he wanted her to be happy.

In the other hand swara was also missing something. She was missing the old Sanskar who could make her laugh .. Who had solutions to all her problems, mostly she was missing her life's biggest support system. It was not that she did not try to get him back.. But never she got the response, she expected.. She knew that the sanskar she knew wasn't this one and decided to have a one to one conversation with him. At last swara was in for Mission Sanskar.

After seeing all this the family had decided to bring them closers and made an awesome plan. The decided to send swasan Mumbai but not in a plane or train... So that the journey can be long and romantic. They were very lucky this time coz sanskar really had to attend a conference in Mumbai and this was the best time to execute their plan.

Everything was going perfectly... Swasan had already left for Mumbai that to in a car but the only problem was sanskar was not even uttering a single word..
Swara was continuously trying to talk to him but all in vain. Now even she was feeling hopeless. I was going like this for a long time when swasan car got punchered that to in a highway... It was late at night in top of that there phones were not catching signal.. Somehow swara was enjoying this but sanskar was really feeling irritated.

Tum itni khush Kyun ho.

Khush hone ki toh baat Hai.. Tum aur mein akale

What..

Kuch nhi...

Mein abhi Ata Hu tum idhar hi rukna .. Dekhta Hu agar network mil Jaye toh..

Okh

Sanskar just turns and Moves some steps forward when he hears
Sanskar bachao
He turns and sees some ruffians trying to abuse swara... Sanskar runs...

Meri Patni ko chuyega .. Ye le
He starts beating them black and blue...

Are bhaag.. Yeh Hume Mar hi dale GA.. Cried their leader.. All ran away

Swara tum thik to ho nah.. Asked sanskar

Tumhare rehte mujhe kya ho sakta hai? (intense eyelock)

Suddenly it starts raining... Sanskar pulls swara s hands and takes her under a shed nearby..
Swara bhaago barish ho rhi hai..

Swara frees herself and runs away from the shed so that she can get wet

Seeing her getting wet.. Sanskar gets mesmerized.. Sanskar tum bhi ayona bohot maza aa raha hai.. Cried swara...

Nhi.. Mujhe nhi bheegna.. Nahi tumhari Tarah dance karna hai

Accha betu...
Swara comes towards sanskar and pulls her...
She takes his arms and starts dancing in the rain.. Not realizing that they were coming close in every passing second...

Atlast it stops raining

Maza Aya sanskar babu

Jee Mata ji

They both start laughing.. Suddenly swara sneezes

Acchuu... Acchhuu.. Ach

Bola tha nah mat bheego .. Par tum sunti kaha ho mujhe bhi keech Liya.. Lag gyi nah thand


Mujhe yaha thand lag rhi Acchuu.. Au.. Aur tum mujhpe hi chilla Rahe ho.. Acchuu..

Accha sorry yaha baito... He makes her sit under the shed .. He opens his coat and makes her wear.. Gari bhi andar se lock ho gaya abh to subha tak idhar hi rehna parega..

Koi baat nhi sanskar.. I m feeling better.. She pulls him down.. Tum bhi yaha baito .. Aur chalo thandi Hawa khata khata baatein karte hai ..

Mujhse tum Kyun baat karogi jao nah apne best friend lucky ke paas.. Mein rahu nah rahu kya pharak parta hai

Bas sanskar bohot..sunli tumhari bakwaas .. Tum shayad khudko itni importance nhi dete ho .. Par tum dusro ki zindagi mein bohot ehmiyat rakhte ho specially meri..

Sacchi...???
Mucchi???

They start laughing...

Par phir tum lucky...
Lucky waki kuch nhi let's enjoy this moment.. Saying this she stops Sankar from speaking..

Thik hai .. Nhi baat karunga..


Talking for hours and hours they don't realize that when both fall asleep..

Next morning sanskar wakes up first and witnesses swara Lending her head in his shoulders ..

Sote hue aur bhi cute lagti hai .. Saying this he pushes one of her strands behind her ears.. In the mean time swara starts blinking her eyes...

Utho swara subha ho gyi .. Hai .. Mumbai nhi Jana ..

Hmm... Par sanskar

Kya swara

Kal maza Aya nah

Bohot zyada...


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This is how that night changed their life forever... Old things were forgotten and new things started.. It was an end of a chapter .. But also the beginning of another.

Hope you liked it..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Cute OS !!!!
Do write more 😛
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very cute and sweet one...specially the dialogues ...👏
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Originally posted by: Annei123

Cute OS !!!!

Do write more😛

thankz
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Originally posted by: Vaibhi.

very cute and sweet one...specially the dialogues ...👏

hehe thanks ya
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Originally posted by: Luv_Ishveer

Short and Sweet!
Loved it

thank you .
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thankz
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thank you so much
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so sweet !!
finally swara on "mission sanskar" 😆
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Originally posted by: Shikha022

so sweet !!
finally swara on "mission sanskar" 😆

thank you so much

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