this is my new TS. actuaaly i want to write OS but dimag me naye naye thought aate rahe & its become TS. pls give ur feed back
SWASAN TS: MAINE PYAR KIYA
This story is about swara's realization her feelings & confession for sanskaar.
Farm house se aane k baad MM me dewali ki preparations chal rahi thi. Swara ki nazren sanskaar ko dood rhi thi. Jb se swara ko pata chala ki sanskaar farm house se usse mile bina hi chla aaya h wo bahut upset ho gyee thi. Tbi usne dekha ki sanskar upne room me ja raha h & she follows him.
In swasan room:
Swara: sanskaar suno tumhe bahut saari jruri baaten batani h. KC k baad se lux k dramon k karan mein itni pareshan ho gyee thi ki tumhe kitni saari baatein maine batayee hi nhi.
Sanskaar : haan bolo swara, mein sun raha hoon. (sanskaar is very hurt which he seen in farmhouse but pyar deewana hota h & he is happy for swara. Wants to free from jabardasti ka rishta)
Sanskar's phone rings. & call was from his lawyer & he wants to meet him in court for some urgent documents.
Sanskaar: thik h vakil sahib, me ghante me wahan pahunchta hoon.
Sanskaar open the draw for documents & saw the divorce papers. Wo swara ko dete hue bola
Sanskaar: swara, maine inn papers pr sign kr diye h. mujhe khushi h ki tumne sache rishte ko accept krne ka mann bana liya h & e tumhare liye bahut khush ho. I hope tumhare iss rishte ki wajah se humari dosti pr koi asar nhi padega. "ALL D BEST" & leave.
Swara: kya hai iss file mein??? (looked behind & saw sanskaar wahan nhi h). itne me pari bhabhi aakr usse diwali preparation me help krne ko bolti h.
Swara put the file in draw. Wo niche aati hi h & sanskar ki or dekhti h jo bade papa se kuch discussion kr raha h. both looks each other & swara gives a smile to him. Jaise hi wo bahar jaane lgta h swara uske pass aati h & said
Swara: suno na. tum jaldi ghr aana tumse bahut kuch share krna h. he noded his head. Swara usse jate hue dekh rahi h. jaise sanskaar car ka darwaja open krta h, ek blast hota & swara screemed saaanaaaskaaar. & rushed towards him. All family members come outside.
She saw sanskaar is alright. Bus uska thoda sa haath jala h & wahan se khoon nikl raha h. wo daudti hui aati h & hugs him & asked kit um thik ho na sanskaar. Timhe kuch hua to nhi na. sanskaar surprised with her concern but very calmly he said : swara I m fine. Pls don't cry. Dekho tumhare samne tumhara friend one piece mein hi khada h. she smile & saw the blood of his hand. Wo upna duptta fadti h & ties on his wound.
Sanskaar: acha to mein ab jaon . mujhe vakil se milna h.
Bade papa:tumhe kahin jaane ki jrurt nhi h sanskaar. Humne dr sahib ko bulya h. wo aakr bandge kr jayega. Bhagwan ka lkh lakh shukr h kit um dono thik ho. Ye papers lux dekr aa jayega.
Lux: ok papa. Me jata hoon. But he was jealous to seeing swara concern for sanskaar.
Swara usse room me lekr jaati h. gives water to him. Itne me dr aakr bandage kr jata h & told ki jyada gahra ghaav nhi h. he will be fine within a week. All family members are happy & done diwali pooja
At night in swasan room. Sanskaar guest room me jaane lgta h. tbi swara asked ki who kahan ja raha h. he said in guest room.
Swra: tumhe wahan jaane ki koi jrurt nhi h. ye tumhara b karma h. tum ab se yahin soage.
Swara bed thik kr deti h. sanskaar is surprised with her behavior & he was much confused ki swara k kis roop bharosa kru jo aaj farm house me dekha wo ya ye wala.
Swara : aise kya dekh rahe ho. Ab aisi halat me to couch pr sone nhi doongi tumhe aakhir biwi hon tumhari. Itna to hak ha na mujhe ???
Sanskaar (thought): tum kya janoo shone itna nhi, tumhe to sab hak h. pr ab inn sabka koi mtlb nhi h. me janta ho kit um aaj b lux se pyar krti ho. Kaash me tumhare dil me upni jagah bana sakta.
Sanskaar chup chap aakr bed pr so jata h. din bhr ki tensions & dawa k asar se usse lete hi nind aa jaati h & swra also sleeps beside him. But she can't. uski aakhon k aage dophar me hua car blast aa jata h & wo ghbra kr baith jaati h & looks at sanskaar & thought: sanskaar tum nhi jante kit um mere liye kya ho?? Agr aaj tumhe kuch ho jata to me to jeete jee hi mar jaati. Tumhare bina upni jindagi k bare mein soch b nhi sakti. Bahut hurt kiya h maine tumhe ab or nhi. Me ab dil se humare rishte ko nibhan chati hoon. She put his hand on sanskaar's shoulder & sleep.
At morning sanskaar wake up & see swara .
Sanskaar: swra pls utho. Mera shoulder dukh raha h.
Swara: oho sorry & leave for take a bath. When she coming from washroom sanskaar admire her morning beauty.
Swara: me tumhare liye chai & breakfast lekr aatti hoon.
Uski koi jrurt nhi h bhabhi. Utara sanskaar k liye breakfast lekr aati h & said ki bhabhi bhai k liye mein breakfast lekr aa gayee ho. Aapki mummy aayee hain aap dono se milne to aap jakrmil lijiye.
Swara: nhi utara, sanskaar ko aaram krne do. Tum maa ko ooparbhej do pls. takes the breakfast tray from utara & feed the sanskaar.
Sanskaar(thought): ye ladki b kamal h. mera poora dhyan rakh rhi h. me janta hoon ki she is very caring nature but ye galat h na. she is my brother's love & main ye nhi kr sakta. Me swara k bare me kuch nhi sochunga.
Sanskaar: swara, tum rahne do. Me kr loonga.
Swra: kitne ziddi ho tum??? Itna to hak jatane ka hak do pls..maine bola na ki main nastha kraongi to bus ab ek ache bache ki tarah chup chap se nastha kro.
Shomi: shona!!!!
Swraa: maa kaise ho aap??? Shomi: me thik hoon. Or sanskaar beta ab kaise ho??? Jb blast ka pata chala to me to ghbra hi gyee but tumhe thik dekh kr bahut khush hoon.
Sanskaar's smiles : acha aap dono baatein kro. Me aata hoon.
Swra: kahin nhi jaoge tum. Cchup chap se aaram kro. Me & maa balcony me baat kr lenge.
Sanskaar: okk. & upne earplug lgakr wo upna manpasand music sunane lg jata h & beech beech me swara ko b upni maa se baatein krte hue dekh raha h. tbi uske phone ki ring bajti hai & it was swara. he thought ki swara jb upni maa se baat kr rhi h to mujhe kyon phone kr rhi h & saw ki wo upni maa se baatein krte hue kuch pareshan c lg rhi h & issi pareshani me usse galti se sanskaar ko phone lg gya h. pahle to sanskaar ne phone disconnect krne k bare mein sochaa but as usual swra ko pareshan nhi dekh sakta to usne phone receive kr liya. & start crying to listen their conversations. & thank god to give his love back to him. The conversations are like that:
Shomi: kya hua swara, itni udaas kyon ho??
Swra: maa kl k blast k baad bahut darr gyee thi. Ek baar ko lga ki agr sanskaar ko kuch ho jata to meri to duniya hi khatam ho jaati maa. Uske bina to maine eupni jindagi ki kalpna hi nhi ki. Usne mujhse kitan pyar kiya h &badle me kbi kisi baat ki umeed nhi rakhi. Yahan tk ki kbi upne pati hone ka hak b jabdasti nhi dikhaya. Maa tum janti ho sanskaar ne kai baar upne pyar ka confession kiya h but me hi pagal hoon, dumbo hoon jo isse dosti se jyada kuch samji hi nhi. Maa jb b aankhen band krti hoon nabus sanskaar hi sanskaar dikhte h har jagah. Such maa bahut pyar krne lgi hoon sanskaar se. haan ye thik h ki jitna wo krte h mujhse utna to nhi pr krti hoon maa pyar me b sanskaar se.
Shomi: (smiles) : to finally meri shone ka confusion door ho hi gya. Beta mein to pahle din se hi janti thi ki sanskaar tujhse bahut pyar krta h & wo har haal me tera saath dega. jb ragini tumhe accuse kr rhi thi & usne uska galla dabaya tha tb hi me samj gayee thi ki iss duniya me sanskaar se jyadaa pyar tujhe koi nhi kr sakta. Aur KC wale din to or b pukhta yakeen ho gya ki sanskaar duga maa ka bheja hua wo farishta h jo meri shone ko har dukh se har dard se door rakhega. Pr ye baat meri shonako smj nhi aa rahi thi. Ab lgta h ki tujhe b upne pyar ka ehsaas ho gya h.
Swara: haan maa. Aapne sahi kaha tha ki sanskaar se acha jeevn saathi mujhe nhi mil sakta. Sanskaar bahut hi jyada understanding & caring h. jb b udas hoti hoon to koi na koi wajah doond hi lete h mujhe hasane ki.
Shomi: acha shone, yeluxka kya chakkar h??? swara questionely seeing her mother.
Shomi: kl AP aayee thi & jo baat hui wo sab shomi ne swara ko bata dee.
Swra (shocked): iska mtlb maa ragini fir jhooth bol rhi h. & she told all her mother about her kidnapping, photography, DP,AP questioning, ragini's memory loss recovery drama, lux ka torture, wrist cutting & farm house drama.
Shomi: tumne sanskaar ko bataya in sabke bare mein???
Swra: nhi maa, batane ka tym hi nhi mila mtlb KC wale din ki baat unhe nhi pata. Baki sb pata h. hum dono ragini k iss jhooth me uska saath nhi dena chate the pr maa buri tarah se fans gayee main. Pr ab aur nhi. Kl farm house me lux ne b yahi kaha ki me upni jindagi me wapis laut jaon. Usse meri friendship k siwa kuch nhi chahiye.maa mein ye sb kl sanskaar ko batane wali thi but ye bomb blast wala accident ho gya. But don't worry maa kl sanskaar ka b'day h. mein usse sab bata doongi. Usse bahut hurt kiya h maine maa. Pr ab aur nhi. Bus ab mujhe raglak ka koi scenee nhi chahiye.
shomi: shona, ek baat samjhaongi tumhe ki upne pyar ko sabhi baatein bata do. chahe wo achi ho ya buri. agr usse kisi or se ye baatein pata chali to tum samaj rhi ho na...
swra: don't worry maa. ab mein kisi ko b mere aur sanskaar k beech nhi aane doongi. chahe wo meri bahan ho ya sanskaar ka bhai. kl k accident k baad to ab me sanskaar k siwa kisi pr bharsa nhi kr sakti. me aaj hi bade papa se baat krti hoon.
Precap: reavel of raglak drama & swasan romance