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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Hey! It's Nimmi right? I think this is brilliant- to me, at the moment, only 2 characters areconsistent- Ragini and ofcourse my Sanskaar. This explores theircomplex relationship with finesse- and I am with you- youdon'thave to ship 2 people as a couple to really enjoytheirchemistry- it can be as friends, frenemies (which is how I see Sanskaar- Ragini) orwhatever. I have always found agreatconnection between them- going back to the duppetawaali dost days. I like in this that there is the possibility for these two to find some peace in different ways although Ragini will have karma to reckon with too.
I think you were brave to attempt this and did so well with it!

Edited by tootiefrootie11 - 9 years ago

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Sanavi

@Sanavi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

U hv explained Ragini nd Sanskaar's state of mind perfectly.
Plz convert it into TS nd let Ragini hv tht conversation.

Continue soon

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ROSE

@rose1998

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

I think, after reading this for one moment I felt sorry for Ragini. That's the beauty of this piece. Wonderfully written.👏

Edited by rose1998 - 9 years ago

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Oppa_Lover

@Oppa_Lover

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

simply amazing
I just love the concept n emotions
loved sanskar n ragini here

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Shobha

@ssroomani

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Beautifully written. I am with you, I am not a SanGini shipper either, but I love the connection between these two. Ragini is my favorite as a character in this show after Sanskaar.

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KhwaboKeParinde

@KhwaboKeParinde

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

you don't have to ship two individuals to write something on them. this's one of the best one-shots, I've read on this show till now! 👏

Who are you Sanskaar? - sometimes that just can't be defined!

Edited by KhwaboKeParinde - 9 years ago

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950660

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

simply one word superb !!

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: BeautyWidBrain
This is heart wrenching 😭
I really felt bad for Ragini 😭
And Sanskaar 😭 😭
Such a poignant tale of love and loss 😭

thank you so much dear for appreciating the story.
🤗

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: sam.
Really loved it ! I really hope that the show also takes a similar path , ragini should somewhere feel so awed by sanskar's selfless love for swara that she eventually leaves the dark path that she has chosen for herself. Maybe her redemption can start then !

Thank you so much Sam.
🤗

i wish for the same. and would really love to see her bonding with Sanskaar again. their friendship was so beautiful.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: piccola1

We dont need to ship them to admire their honesty with their own emotions, Banjaaran! Bravo for writing out this OS and bringing this out to the fore, so well !👏

And your take on their pathos is heart wrenching😭 indeed. You can feel their pain as bitterly as they feel it themselves, a tribute to your superb writing !

I only wish this would end with Ragini recognizing that in her lies the end to Sanskaar's pathos..if she would only let up on Swara and Lakshya, and let them be, Sanskaar would have won over Swara by now!

Pic.
🤗

@bold.
thank you for putting it so succinctly and beautifully.

thank you so much for your compliment dear.😳

@bold again.
i dunno. Sanskaar has been such an absolutely terrific guy for Swara and her entire khandaan.. any other girl would have been bowled by now.
this girl is still confused.
i really don't want him to try any further. not that he is trying. but he really should move away. this is her time to win him now.

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